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Eliana

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    Got another poem down...I actually started it like 4 months ago but I decided to finish it today XD

    Empty

    Have you ever seen an empty being?
    Whose ideas are pointless, and keep repeating?
    Whose tries and attempts to get something right,
    Are flattened by their redundant way of life?
    Because I?m a lost cause, and I could care less.
    I can?t be fixed, I?m just another mess.
    And hell is crashing down on me yet again,
    But it doesn?t make a difference in the very end.
    I?ll block your insults; you can?t murder my mind,
    Because how can you kill someone empty inside?
    You CAN?T, so stop trying,
    To kill those who are ALREADY dying.
    You?re apathetic, and creating death,
    I?m empty inside, and I could care LESS.


    ~Eli
     
    Wow......this poem relates to me on a personal level....excellent work.
     
    Yup, I relate to it- 4 Months ago I was criticized....a lot by someone and they told me everything I do is the same and has no meaning so...I just wrote it...

    ~Eli
     
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