Ok, my first fanfic, so I will need lots of R and R! P.S. This FullMetal Alchemist fanfic is only for people who have AT LEAST seen the episodes 1-10. They must understand what kind of people Ed and Al are to read it. Also, they must know the basic principles of alchemy. (Spoilers! for people who haven't seen past eppi 10) Oh, and, if I mess up, PLEASE tell me. ^.^
Prolouge: Why is my family leaving?
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Name: Nina Kiwashami
Age: 14
Gender: F
Discription: Brown hair and green eyes. -This may be a bit embarrassing, but she is only a couple of centimeters taller than Ed... but because of his bangs, it dosen't really matter. ^.^- (Nina is about 5 ft, 1 in, and 2 cm. Ed is 165 cm; 5 ft, 6 cm!!!)
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"YAWWWWWWN..." Nina propped herself up. She was still in bed. Looking up, she noticed the FMA Poster on her wall. There, grinning almost manicly (but not quite) was Ed. She smirked right back. It was refreshing to wake up to an energetic face. Suddenly, she shivered, remembering that snow was falling just outside. "I hate snow. I hate winter. I hate Massachusitts." She scowled at the white flakes falling from her window. "If I were an alchemist, this monotonous life of mine would be broken." She closed her eyes and wished. She wished hard. Just like she did every morning. When she opened her eyes, she just saw the snow. She was still Nina Kiwashami, in her bedroom, in Massachusitts, U.S.A. " Dammit!" Nina sighed. "Why coulden't I have been born like Ed-san?"
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"It's lunch time!! Benji, come down here!!!" At least it was a friday, and school was snowed out. Even so, her parents still had to work. She had made a lunch for her brother. Nina noticed a note on the counter. "Brother, did you write this?" The seven year old just shook his head.
"Uh... nope, nope! Sorry, sis-tah." She smiled at him. "It's ok, just eat." She took the note into her room.
'Dear Nina,
I can not return from work today. I must go somewhere to do reaserch far away. I can't tell you where, or why. I hope to see you again. Take care of Benji and your mother.
Sincerly, Dad.'
A tear dropped on the sheer of paper. "Is this some kind of sick joke?" The tears were making the paper fragile and soggy. "He... he left us, Dammit!!!" She was interupted by the phone. "Caller I.D. says it's Mom..." Nina gasped the words.
"Sweetie?" Her mothers words were choked out of her. She was obviously crying. "I just got an e-mail from your father-" A gasp of pain escaped her mouth as Nina heard her mother drop the phone.
"Mrs. Kiwashami? Kiwashami!!!" A subordinate of her mother's was trying to help her. Another subordinate picked up the phone. "Is Nina-chan there?" Azami sqeeked out a yes. "Nina-chan, your mother, she..." The man paused to take a deep breath. "She looks as if she is having a heart attack."
Azami hung up. "No... first dad, then mom..." She whispered. She suddenly relised something. "Just like Ed-san..." She then froze. "If so, little brother is next..." Nina coulden't stop herself from thinking. She shook her head.
"Is everything ok, sis-tah?" His sweet voice broke the scilance. "Yeah. I...I'm sorry, Benji!" She hugged him and forced herself not to cry. "Just... go to bed."
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"S...sis-tah!"
Nina just grumbled, "Benji, it's 12:30 at night. Go to sl-" She was fully awake now. "Oh no... No! No god, you can't take Benji yet!" She scrambled into his bedroom. She was horrified with what she saw. Benji's legs and waist were completly engulfed in a transmutation circle. "Dammit, Benji, what did you do?"
The poor child was crying. "Sis-tah... alchemy isen't real... no...NO!!" Nina couldent take it. Alchemy wasen't real. But if what was infront of her was a transmutation circle, and if what was happining was human transmutation, there was one thing she could do.
"Hold on, this might hurt!" Her brother was a fan of robots, so he had built a lovely robotic dog that really worked. She now grabbed the life sized dog and as soon as she did, a blinding white light appeared.
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When Nina woke up, her left leg was gone. But she knew she would have to get up. She knew she would have to get moving. To face the gate. For Benji...
The gate behind her was closed. She crawled over to it and weakly banged on the door. "I.. can't do this... What did I do to deserve this?!?" 'I Wished For it' was the only answer she could come up with. The door opened, and the creatures peered out. Those creepy, black... things. "I..." She looked right at the monsters. "I want my brother back! ... Take my arm... It's equivilent trade, right?" The glowing-eyed creatures quickly and quietly ripped off her left arm, and just dropped her there to die. She somehow managed to crawl over to the robotic dog. Here... Benji, please, your soul has to be here, she despratly thought. Using the blood from her own arm, she drew all the blood seals. She hid the last seal inside the robot dog's body. "Please... GIVE HIM BACK!!!" She scremed and pressed the seals. Before she could see anything else, she fell unconsious.
*-<Central City>-*
A bed. A soft bed. "Home? Am I at home??" Nina squeeked with delight. But she soon relised she wasen't at home at all. "Wha-where am... ?" She heard panting. A doggie? She looked down at the panting beast. But it wasen't a beast at all. It was a robotic dog.
"Sis-tah?... Why am I... in this body?" Nina felt like crying for her brother.
"I'm so sorry, Benji... You.. your a robot dog now... I had to do that to save you..." She winced. "Do you remember the circle?"
The new Benji nodded. "Yes... I thought I was going to die... I thought I was going to die there..." He saw the pain in his sisters eyes. "Wait, sis-tah... why do you look like that?"
Nina looked at her left arm and right leg. Her tee-shirt and shorts put them in plain view. "These are... Auto-mail limbs, I think." She looked at him in sympathy. "You went through more than I did, though."
He only shook his head. "Not the limbs, sis-tah, your face..."
Nina looked surprized. She scrambled from the bed to the room's only mirror and stared, wide-eyed. "I look... just like him."
End prolouge. Creative Critisisum, please. -^.^-
Prolouge: Why is my family leaving?
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Name: Nina Kiwashami
Age: 14
Gender: F
Discription: Brown hair and green eyes. -This may be a bit embarrassing, but she is only a couple of centimeters taller than Ed... but because of his bangs, it dosen't really matter. ^.^- (Nina is about 5 ft, 1 in, and 2 cm. Ed is 165 cm; 5 ft, 6 cm!!!)
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"YAWWWWWWN..." Nina propped herself up. She was still in bed. Looking up, she noticed the FMA Poster on her wall. There, grinning almost manicly (but not quite) was Ed. She smirked right back. It was refreshing to wake up to an energetic face. Suddenly, she shivered, remembering that snow was falling just outside. "I hate snow. I hate winter. I hate Massachusitts." She scowled at the white flakes falling from her window. "If I were an alchemist, this monotonous life of mine would be broken." She closed her eyes and wished. She wished hard. Just like she did every morning. When she opened her eyes, she just saw the snow. She was still Nina Kiwashami, in her bedroom, in Massachusitts, U.S.A. " Dammit!" Nina sighed. "Why coulden't I have been born like Ed-san?"
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"It's lunch time!! Benji, come down here!!!" At least it was a friday, and school was snowed out. Even so, her parents still had to work. She had made a lunch for her brother. Nina noticed a note on the counter. "Brother, did you write this?" The seven year old just shook his head.
"Uh... nope, nope! Sorry, sis-tah." She smiled at him. "It's ok, just eat." She took the note into her room.
'Dear Nina,
I can not return from work today. I must go somewhere to do reaserch far away. I can't tell you where, or why. I hope to see you again. Take care of Benji and your mother.
Sincerly, Dad.'
A tear dropped on the sheer of paper. "Is this some kind of sick joke?" The tears were making the paper fragile and soggy. "He... he left us, Dammit!!!" She was interupted by the phone. "Caller I.D. says it's Mom..." Nina gasped the words.
"Sweetie?" Her mothers words were choked out of her. She was obviously crying. "I just got an e-mail from your father-" A gasp of pain escaped her mouth as Nina heard her mother drop the phone.
"Mrs. Kiwashami? Kiwashami!!!" A subordinate of her mother's was trying to help her. Another subordinate picked up the phone. "Is Nina-chan there?" Azami sqeeked out a yes. "Nina-chan, your mother, she..." The man paused to take a deep breath. "She looks as if she is having a heart attack."
Azami hung up. "No... first dad, then mom..." She whispered. She suddenly relised something. "Just like Ed-san..." She then froze. "If so, little brother is next..." Nina coulden't stop herself from thinking. She shook her head.
"Is everything ok, sis-tah?" His sweet voice broke the scilance. "Yeah. I...I'm sorry, Benji!" She hugged him and forced herself not to cry. "Just... go to bed."
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"S...sis-tah!"
Nina just grumbled, "Benji, it's 12:30 at night. Go to sl-" She was fully awake now. "Oh no... No! No god, you can't take Benji yet!" She scrambled into his bedroom. She was horrified with what she saw. Benji's legs and waist were completly engulfed in a transmutation circle. "Dammit, Benji, what did you do?"
The poor child was crying. "Sis-tah... alchemy isen't real... no...NO!!" Nina couldent take it. Alchemy wasen't real. But if what was infront of her was a transmutation circle, and if what was happining was human transmutation, there was one thing she could do.
"Hold on, this might hurt!" Her brother was a fan of robots, so he had built a lovely robotic dog that really worked. She now grabbed the life sized dog and as soon as she did, a blinding white light appeared.
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When Nina woke up, her left leg was gone. But she knew she would have to get up. She knew she would have to get moving. To face the gate. For Benji...
The gate behind her was closed. She crawled over to it and weakly banged on the door. "I.. can't do this... What did I do to deserve this?!?" 'I Wished For it' was the only answer she could come up with. The door opened, and the creatures peered out. Those creepy, black... things. "I..." She looked right at the monsters. "I want my brother back! ... Take my arm... It's equivilent trade, right?" The glowing-eyed creatures quickly and quietly ripped off her left arm, and just dropped her there to die. She somehow managed to crawl over to the robotic dog. Here... Benji, please, your soul has to be here, she despratly thought. Using the blood from her own arm, she drew all the blood seals. She hid the last seal inside the robot dog's body. "Please... GIVE HIM BACK!!!" She scremed and pressed the seals. Before she could see anything else, she fell unconsious.
*-<Central City>-*
A bed. A soft bed. "Home? Am I at home??" Nina squeeked with delight. But she soon relised she wasen't at home at all. "Wha-where am... ?" She heard panting. A doggie? She looked down at the panting beast. But it wasen't a beast at all. It was a robotic dog.
"Sis-tah?... Why am I... in this body?" Nina felt like crying for her brother.
"I'm so sorry, Benji... You.. your a robot dog now... I had to do that to save you..." She winced. "Do you remember the circle?"
The new Benji nodded. "Yes... I thought I was going to die... I thought I was going to die there..." He saw the pain in his sisters eyes. "Wait, sis-tah... why do you look like that?"
Nina looked at her left arm and right leg. Her tee-shirt and shorts put them in plain view. "These are... Auto-mail limbs, I think." She looked at him in sympathy. "You went through more than I did, though."
He only shook his head. "Not the limbs, sis-tah, your face..."
Nina looked surprized. She scrambled from the bed to the room's only mirror and stared, wide-eyed. "I look... just like him."
End prolouge. Creative Critisisum, please. -^.^-
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