• Our software update is now concluded. You will need to reset your password to log in. In order to do this, you will have to click "Log in" in the top right corner and then "Forgot your password?".
  • Welcome to PokéCommunity! Register now and join one of the best fan communities on the 'net to talk Pokémon and more! We are not affiliated with The Pokémon Company or Nintendo.

Following

.:Bloody--Emo--With--A--Rose:.

Kiss Me-I'mCONTAGIOUS**!
  • 240
    Posts
    18
    Years
    No words or actions today
    Could express the feelings I still have for you
    But, it's better if I follow your footsteps
    We'll be together now.

    You've always stood out
    You were different from the rest
    I had always loved you
    Now, you're the one killing me
    I had found life so easy through all of my troubles
    Because you're gone
    I find this blade to my pulse

    We'll still love eachother won't we?



    Meh. I just threw together a poem =\ .... Mmk... Rate please? =/ 1-10...
     
    I'm not to rate, yet I do want to say that it's lacking rhythm. Try to make the verses easier to read, watch out the syllables. Reading it troughly helps, if you find it sloppy on some parts try to fix it so it can be read more sweetly.

    Overall, it's a good poem. If it's meant to be a song, maybe that's the reason it lacks rhythm, revise it and you should do fine!

    My worthless comment~
     
    Back
    Top