Friendship

[Sarafina]

Introduction​

Please do not post here, I'm not going to be ever writing in this story, I'm going to let it die, you can read it just don't post here.
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Chapter #1​

?Look,? Dark Flame a Vulpix said and pointed a paw at footprint in the mud.

?What is it?? asked Flaming Rage.

?Its science, I guess,? Dark Flame answered.

?Oh, but what?s science?? Dark Flame thought for a brief moment, and then shrugged.

?Let?s play a game, how about hide and seek!? Flaming Rage suggested.


?Sure, I?ll count to 15,? Dark Flame said and put one paw over his eyes and started to count.


?One, three, seven, ten, five, fourteen-teen, six,? Flaming Rage scurried to hide.

?Eleven, four,? Flaming Rage hid in the tall grass behind an old oak tree.

?15! Ready or not, here I come Flaming Rage!? Soon, minutes had passed and Dark Flame said,

?I give up! Come out now!?

?You can?t give up,? Flaming Rage said in a soothing voice. The tall grass rustled around her as she spoke.

?I see you!? Dark Flame shouted.

?You little cheater!? Flaming Rage screamed in fury. She stood up and her eyes blazed with anger.

?Well, I didn?t want to have to look anymore. What else could I do but cheat?? Dark Flame asked her with innocent eyes.

?Just keep on trying you idiot! If you don?t find after you?ve already looked, look somewhere else!? Flaming Rage yelped and stormed away from the safe grasslands and into the woods.

?Wait! Don?t go into the woods! It?s dangerous!? Dark Flame raced after her. Soon, the two Vulpixes were together again. Dark Flame tapped Flaming Rage on the shoulder and Flaming Rage spun around to see what touched her.

?Leave me alone, and why are you here anyways?? Flaming Rage asked, annoyed.

"I wanted to follow you to see if you were ok."

"This place is just as safe as my cave. It's not like anythings gonna come out and attack us." But moments later, a strange figure moved closer and closer to Flaming Rage and Dark Flame. Then a beam of light shown on the figure and Flaming Rage and Dark Flame didn't wait to see the rest.

 

[Sarafina]

Chapter #2​

The two Vulpixes through bushes and doged the tall Redwood trees in their path. Soon there was a clearing and the best friends dashed to it until their muscles were sore.

"Nothing's gonna pop out and try an attack us huh?" Dark Flame said sarcasticly.

"Oh, I'm so sorry you were too scared to even see the rest of it's shape, I only followed you because if you ran into something else I didn't know if you could fight it off."

"I'm a man, of at least a male and males are braver than females, always," Dark Flame said sure of himself.

"Are you sure, tell you what, I bet you couldn't even go back in there even if I dared you too look at that thing we saw."

"I will! You can even watch me do it."

"No way, I can trust you to do it yourself this time."

"Okay, I'll come out once I see it's entire body." Flaming Rage signaled Dark Flame to start the dare now. He took wobbly steps but he made it into the woods and he wasn't visible anymore..................

 

[Sarafina]

Chapter #3​

Dark Flame looked back before he went any further into the forest. He could hear the bird chirping and the wind in the trees.

"This isn't so bad. In fact, this is great! This isn't scary at all, and all I have to do is find that thing then come out, haha!" Soon, the tall trees were blocking the sunlight. Dark Flame began to panic. Soon, he couldn't even see one of his six bushy tails! Then something hit him. He spun around and tried to see what hit him but then he got hit in the face and he tumbled over.

"Owwwww!!!!!!!!!!!! That hurt!" he moaned.

"Let's finish him off with Quick Attack!" a voice yelled. Soon he saw beams of light and Dark Flame could see where he was going and what attacked him. He was trapped and he wanted to fight off the thing that had not bothered him twice.

"VUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he yelped in a high pitched scream. He was being attaked by a trainer and her Pikachu.

"Oh no, I'm not gonna let you catch me!" he said in an annoyed voice. Dark Flame forgot about the trainer telling her Pikachu to attack and in a brief moment the Pikachu charged.........

"WHAM!!!!!!!!!!" The Pikachu bashed it's skull into Dark Flame's tender stomach. "OWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! I give! Let me faint! I can't take anymore of this!"

"Now I guess I can try to catch this little Vulpix! Go Poke Ball!" The Poke Ball hit Dark Flame on the head.

"Owwwww......." he wailed. Once inside the ball, Dark Flame had no will to fight agianst getting caught and didn't have the energy to put up a fight. Inside the ball Dark Flame could still hear faint cries of joy.

 

[Sarafina]

boy i stink so tell me everything i did wrong here people, i need help, this is my first story so tell me how bad it is! i'm also not that great of a speller so if u could tell me how 2 spell the words i spelt wrong then that would be great, i'm new here, can't u tell, i stick out badly. :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
also, i know all of my chapters are really short, i'm working on making them way longer than they are right now! i'm adding way more deatail 2 them! :) ;)
Also, can u all plz just tell me if my story's good or bad, just tell me anything, send something 2 me plz cause I'm SO UNPOPULAR!

 

[oni flygon]

You have some grammar errors and you need to make your chapters a bit longer...otherwise...it kinda dulls me out...X_x;;

 

[Sarafina]

gee, thx 4 telling me whats wrong, i'll work on that, and everything else i did wrong i guess.

 

[Sarafina]

i also make bad stories, i think it's boring 2, it's boring 2 write also..... x_X

 

[oni flygon]

Please don't double post unless you add a new story. There's something called edit button over there, you know?

 

[Dizzy]

I like it so far :)

But you don't read mines Oni!

 

[Sarafina]

Chapter #4​

Out in the grasslands, Flaming Rage was still waiting for Dark Flame to come out. Soon minutes had passed. Then hours. The sun had set and Flaming Rage was still sitting and waiting for Dark Flame to come out.

"I think he needs help in there," Flaming Rage moaned lazily. She walked into the woods, dragging her paws on the grass.

"Where should I look first?" Flaming Rage asked herself, "I guess I could just run through the entire place to scan it faster and find my buddy and we can go to our caves." She bolted farther into the dark forest, her bushy tails waving like a banner. After running around it once, Flaming Rage ran around it agian, but after the third time she wondered aloud,

"Is he even still in here anymore?" Flaming Rage started to trot across the forest, avoididng the trees in her path, resting in a clearing in the middle of the forest.

"WHERE IS MY BEST FRIEND?!?!" Flaming Rage screaming in fury. All she heard was an echo across the nearby mountains as a response.

"No, he can't be gone, no! Why did I even dare him? We could have worked everything out but no, I had to make it the hard way! Man I'm such a bad friend!" Flaming Rage covered her eyes with one paw and said,

"Don't look at me!" to the Pidgey that were staring at the sorry Vulpix, "Don't look at my shame!" All the Pokemon ran away and the Pidgey sang slow songs together. Flaming Rage uncovered her eyes only to see the Pidgey calling all of the runaway Pokemon. Soon the Pokemon came out of their homes to form a circle around Flaming Rage.

"Why are you so sorry?" one Pidgey spoke up from the singing crowd of birds.

"I lost the reason of my life," Flaming Rage said in a serious voice.

"Did your parents die?!" a Rattata asked, eyes bulging wide open.

"No, I've never even seen my parents alive, I've seen their dead bodies lying out in the open field though. All the Pokemon gasped in suprise.

What did you lose?!" a mother Butterfree asked.

"Yeah tell us, tell us, tell us!" all of her children squeaked.

"I lost my friendship with my best friend, and that's the only thing I wanted in my life to last........"

"Did your friend happento be a Vulipx?" a wise Hoothoot asked.

"Yes, yes, yes! Did you see him?! Please tell me you saw him pass by here!"

 

[oni flygon]

Erm....you need to make your chapter longer...
If you use microsoft word, try to reach five pages, k? ;)

 

[Sarafina]

i kinda wasn't done, i was eating watermelon ;)

 

[Sarafina]

Chapter #5​

"Well, umm, he was in a battle with a trainer and her Pikachu," the wise Hoothoot responded.

"Trainer? What's a trainer?" Flaming Rage asked confused.

"A person who catches Pokemon and battles with them," the Hoothoot exclamined.

"What?! You mean my best friend is gonna battle other Pokemon and he might even get hurt!"

"Well he might get hurt but he will battle, that girl who caught him is going to train him. I heard her whisper it to her Poke Ball with your friend inside of it, she said, "I'm gonna train you to battle!"

"Well, can you tell me which way he went?"

"Well, he went out there somewhere, can't you see that opening ahead of you, the trainer is leaving here and going to train him a long ways from here." the wise Hoothoot in a slow voice.

"Thanks! Thank you all!" Flaming Rage said her thanks and was off, running and happy she was going to find her best friend! In just seconds Flaming Rage was out of the forest and ahead of her was a journey. A quest to find the meaning of her life, the only thing that mattered to her, her best friend. Flaming Rage stood there, with all of her six of her tails curved and in line with each other.

"Whoa, he's out there somewhere. I'm coming for you Dark Flame!" Flaming Rage was confident with herself. She stood on her hind legs and kicked her front legs everywhere just like a Ponyta or a Rapidash would do. She jumping up and started running as fast as she could.

Faster, I have to go faster, Flaming Rage thought to herself. She went faster and faster until the entire world passing by her was a blur.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!" she screamed. Flaming Rage saw a rock in front of her but she couldn't stop herself in time to avoid the rock.

"VULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!" Flaming Rage yelped. She was flying in mid air, she had tripped over the stone and at that very moment she fell head first on the gravel. The rest of her body came down and she slid down a hill that was coming up. At the end of the hill there was some broken glass.

"Oh no, please let this not be happening to me!" Flaming Rage begged. She pulled her head up dug her claws into the dirt and let them sink in. She was already at the end of the hill and a piece of broken glass scliced her fur off a section a cut her on the front leg.

"Owwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!" Blood was ozzing out of her cut and soon the entire front of her leg was covered in a fresh coat of her blood.

"Great, now I'm bleeding, gushing out blood and there is nothing I can do to stop it now! Owwwwwwwwwww! I can barley even walk without having it hurt!" Flaming Rage didn't have a clue of what to do for a huge gash that was gushing out her own blood!

"Help! Somebody! I'm bleeding! Help!" Flaming Rage called for help but the Pokemon in the forest could no longer hear her and she knew no other Pokemon other than that who could hear her.

"I need to walk over to a pond, lake, river, even a puddle, any water will do right now!" Flaming Rage looked around helplessly.

"Where would water be?" she asked herself. She limped over, closer to the scent of flowers that grew near water.

I've got to be closer to water, I've got to be, Flaming Rage thought to herself. The smell of flowers drifted nearby and soon a small pond came into view.

"Yes! I've finally reached water!" Flaming Rage shouted with joy. She stuck her paw in, then the rest of her front leg.'

"Ahhhhhh," she said relaxed. Suddenly something was pulling her down into the water.........

 

[Sarafina]

Chapter #6​

"Oh my," but Flaming Rage was pulled in so quickly she didn't even get to finish. The fangs of the one who pulled her down were slowly sinking into her skin and causing Flaming Rage to bleed.

"Vul!!!!" she said, crying underwater. The shape was firmiliar to Flaming Rage, it looked just like a Todidile. Flaming Rage squinted her eyes to see better and she took target. She kicked the approacher and hit the Todidile hard enough to lose it's grip on Flaming Rage. She rose above the water and despratly grabbed onto the side of the pond and rushed out.

"FREE!!!" Flaming Rage cheered. She pawed the ground with all four paws creating a dance.

"Take that you hungry Todidile! Ha!" she laughed. Then, with no time to run away, the Todidile jumped out of the water, snapped it's jaws closed and started to growl in it's fury.

"I had my chance but you took it away from me! Can't you even see every single one of my ribs?!" the furious Todidile asked.

"Well, I have a mission and your hunger is just slowing me down!" Flaming Rage said, tring to cover herself.

"Oh, well, is that mission gonna let you control wether I fill up or strave to my very own death!"

"I never said anything like that! Besides, you wanted to slow me down and chow down on my flesh so I could never reach my best friend!" Flaming Rage was getting fired up for a battle between life and death.

"That's it! I'm gonna show you what happens when you try to make me starve!"

"Well, bring the battle on!" Flaming Rage yelled, eyes burning.

"TAA!" the angry Todidle screached.

"Well isn't that cute, a small Todidile letting off it's warning, awww, how sweet is that!" Flaming Rage said sarcasticly.

"Oh, it's not just a warning.... It's much more than a warning....." The Todidle just stood there, eyes locked into a stare.

"This is what you get for messing with me!" The Todidile open it's mouth wide and jumped into the air, launching for Flaming Rage. Just when the Todidle was close enough to Flaming Rage,

"SNAP!" the Todidile's mouthing closed hard and fast. Flaming Rage had already dodged the fangs of the Todidile but she wasn't prepared enough for the next move......... The Todidile swung it's tail around to whip Flaming Rage and throw her back into the pond. A scaly tail whacked Flaming Rage in the side and threw her off balance. The tail kept pushing her farther and farther until she was slipped off the edge and hanging, half of her body on the land, half in the pond where a bloody battle would end....

"This is great!" the joyful Todidile screached with happiness. Deep in the pond Flaming Rage was sinking farther down every second. Her soft brown eyes were shut closed and all she was pitch black.

"Here I come dinner!" the Todidile looked at the Golden sunset and the Royal Purple sky. The sight was like no other.

"How can I eat and see this beautiful sight?" the Todidile asked itself wanting to see the rare artwork of nature, the sky painted purple and a rich, golden sunset, and to top it all off there was a gentle breeze on a warm day.

"I'll just let the Vulpix drown and then I'll bring it up here to feast!" the Todidile was proud of itself and felt really smart by having so many plans. But deep down in the water Flaming Rage was ingured, her blood was rising up the surface and she was sinking.

"vul....." Flaming Rage let out a faint cry of help but that's all she could do at the time. But soon she was rising and the gentle lifting of the water soothed her and relazed her muscles and in seconds she could swim up but she let her herself rise because she had a plan to trick the Todidile into losing the match.

 

[Smarty Jones]

cool story Sarafina! I like Flaming Rage! ;)

 

[Sarafina]

thx Smarty Jones, I like your Rapidash! ;)

 

[Sarafina]

Chapter #7​

The water lifted Flaming Rage up higher until her entire body was above the water, floating. She toke deep breaths but she did it silently so the Todidile didn't even know.

"I should see if that dumb Vulpix has drowned yet," the Todidile sighed.

"Hey look! It's as dead as a door nail! See what happens when mess with me, the master of death!" the Todidile said confidently. Flaming Rage had her eyes closed gently, but one of her eyes was half open so she could see, it also made her look more dead.

"That sorry Vulpix, it even tried to open it's eyes before it died, ha! Couldn't even make it! That is just too funny!" the Todidile snickered. He jumped in the air and aimed to land on Flaming Rage who was still acting like she was dead.

"Taaaaa!" the Todidile called out when he was falling towards Flaming Rage. When he was just moments away from smashed Flaming Rage she sut he one eye fully and opened it back up quickly and glared at the Todidile.

"Here I am!" the Todidile was just inches away from Flaming Rage when she jammed her hind leg into it's stomach. The Todidile rocketed backwards away from Flaming Rage fasted than a bullet. The Todidile was heading towards the broken glass at the bottom of hill.

TAAAAA!" the Todidile screamed longing for help. But he was going so fast and he was hit so hard he couldn't do anything to save his life.

"Ta-" the Todidile crashed into the broken glass at unbelieveable speed and the glass shot through it's body.

 

[Sarafina]

I'm not done with this chapter but I'm bored so I'm gonna read everyone else's stories. :laugh: also, Oni Flygon, does this count as double posting?