Girl

[B-Baller]

Another rap by me, but this time, I had help from my friend.

Chorus:
I know it was the wrong decision
I don?t blame it on you
I blame it on my intuition
We gave you a bit of a scare
When you walked into the room
I don?t want to compare
You and her
Because I?d pick you by far

I felt so sorry so I smashed my car
I rang 10 times but u wont answer your phone
So I went to visit your home
I knocked on the door
No one answered so I went in
And saw you on the floor

I dialled 111
I was so scared I started to run
Uh uh

[Chorus]

I stoped running for a sulk
But I?m a man and I?m like the Hulk
I felt the sweat going down my neck
I thought to myself
What the heck
I?m here cause I?m sad
I must be going mad
My girl is probably dead
And the last thing I did was look at her head

[Chorus]

I want to go home
I need to go home
It is where I belong
But it is too dark
The sky is as dark as bark
My girl could still be alive
Probably not cause she had a really big hive
On her knee
Because of me
If I hadn?t have taken that other girl
My girlfriend could still look like a pearl

[Chorus]
Fade

My friend did the first parts, I did the last parts. Checked an article for a lil help. Hoping to perform this in this year's Talent Quest at school. so how's that?

 

[Kyosuke]

Thats pretty good, and thats just reading it it sounds really nice. You and your friend did a great job on the lyrics, like a rap, its suppose to have a certain degree of rhyming and it did just that ^^.

The only thing now is to hear it XD. Great job on it ^^.

 

[Natsuki]

I've always loved your raps. <33 The only thing, as Lance said...is to actually be able to hear the rap. XD Anyways, I think this rap was good, it kind of depicts the male mind in a way. XD Nice work dpkuro! ^o^

~Kelsey

 

[Abskull]

Nice work... though I wish I could hear it.

 

[Arcanine Fan 101]

i loved it it sounds perfect

 

[Eon-Rider]

It seems good but I wish I could hear what it actually sounds like.

 

[<<-_Lord-Krishna_->>]

Nice, looks like ya know about rappin, keep up the good work. I do rappin myself, If ya ever need help just PM me.