Golem and other cards soon to Come

[Jesus Freak Josh]

Okay. I started a Golem ages ago and didn't touch it. Since I was bored I decided to finish it today.
I didn't want to restart so I kept going. That is why there is no energy next to the attacks. Otherwise, I would like to hear your criticism. And by criticism I mean constructive criticism.

 

[Gokey Shuckle]

Well, it is definitely not perfect. So you did this a long time ago? You I assume you have gotten better and read the tutorial ;)

Well, I see average problems, placemnet, cost, etc. Good effort go, and I hope you improve 5/10

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

Well, it is definitely not perfect. So you did this a long time ago? You I assume you have gotten better and read the tutorial ;)

Well, I see average problems, placemnet, cost, etc. Good effort go, and I hope you improve 5/10

Well I did it off memory. I didn't read the tutorial this time... ^_^;;;

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

Okay, I made a new one just then. It's not quite done. I'll get it finished soon. I may make a few adjustments to your comments. Although you may notice some errors. I just started screwing trying to get it perfect in the end (Stupid limited Paint).

 

[Kijin]

The charizard is infintely better than the Golem. The Golem has a lot wrong with it (for starters- mis-sizings, wrong fonts, wrong wording). The charizard has some font fudging, the Dark Leaf is really random and seems pretty out of flavor. I think your art choice for it is tech.
Golem: best left unsaid/5
Charizard: 2.5/5

 

[IceKitten]

What is with that Fire Leaf move XD

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

What is with that Fire Leaf move XD

A random move I could think of. XD

 

[IceKitten]

Did you have Fire Red and Leaf Green in your mind at the same time? XP

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

Did you have Fire Red and Leaf Green in your mind at the same time? XP

No. I think it was thinking of making an attack that would do more than 50 damage and was less boring than a straight fire attack.

 

[IceKitten]

It could have been Crunch, since it is Fire/Dark

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

It could have been Crunch, since it is Fire/Dark

Shut up! XD
What's wrong with Fire Leaf?

 

[IceKitten]

Nothing but a Dark move would suit it more ^_^

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

Nothing but a Dark move would suit it more ^_^

Well... Uh... Woop, woop, woop, woop, woop! *scuttles off*

 

[IceKitten]

Hmm deja-vu

Is this the part where Toto says ''Tig pwnd Batesy! XD''

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

Hmm deja-vu

Is this the part where Toto says ''Tig pwnd Batesy! XD''

No it's where I say "I brained my damage so I could think of anything!" XD

What Pok?mon should I do next?

 

[IceKitten]

Do Milotic! Milotic is cool!

You mean you damaged your brain?

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

Okay.

Damaged my brain? Ummm... Yes. How silly of me.

 

[Gokey Shuckle]

enough SPAM you too, stay on topic, and Batesy, I know you didn't make the Charizard sprite ??

*Hint: Change the illustator*

You've gotten better, you just need to not use sprites as art for cards.

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

enough SPAM you too, stay on topic, and Batesy, I know you didn't make the Charizard sprite ??

*Hint: Change the illustator*

You've gotten better, you just need to not use sprites as art for cards.

What? Oh right I knew I forgot something. XD When I fix a couple of things in it (If I get around to it) I'll fix that.

Actually, I only did a bit of illustration. The background was from LOGII by Atari or something...

I better remember to fix that at some point...

 

[Syousuke]

Sigh, I wont even bother.
You are so, hopeless. End of story.