Goodbye... (a story)

JBCBlank

Satanist to the core.
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    He looked down at the body... "who was he?" he asked lighting a ciggeret.
    "we don't know sheriff... noone has come to identify the body..."
    He looked at the blood spilt across the floor that pored from the boy's wrists, "a suicide?"
    "Looks that way.."
    "Poor boy... who do you think that was to?" he asks pointing to the letters written in blood that stained the wall.
    "I don't know... it could be to anyone..."
    "Pitty... no name... no identification... it's like he never existed..."
    "well... not in the eyes of the goverment anyway..."
    "Lets get the body out of here... there is no need to idenify a body that noone has come to clame..."
    they packed up the body and left the scean... noone noticed the words written beneath the body... they where to busy with there own lives to care about one more unidentified body..

    Why... was writen,... Why did you hate me...? what did I do? If you loved me.. then why did you leave?
    Goodbye....

    None ever knew who he was... nore did they care... if they had.. they would have noticed the wedding band... or even the tear streaked and bloodsoked letter that he cluched... the letter from his wife... so many years before... it had said simply...

    I waited... and you never showed... I may love you... but I can't live like this anymore... Goodbye...

    Sharle...
     
    I don't have that kind of patience... but thanks anyway...
     
    That is interesting. Affected by the way you felt, no? I wrote something similar when my former pair left me. No one ever got to read it...
     
    It's okay, fix the spelling errors and it would be better. It doesn't take much patience to run spell check.

    I don't have that kind of patience... but thanks anyway...
    -____- People don't like to have to read bad spelling.

    It's a pretty good story though.
     
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