Heavy Rains on Hell Morning

phantom_zangetsu

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    hey! i just got interested in poetry the other day and i made my very first sad poem i hope you guys like it:

    HEAVY RAINS ON HELL MORNING
    the rains on hell morning greets me
    as i wake up on a cloudy day
    i awake to find myself
    staring at a stormy day
    i tried to smile even though it was hell in my face
    so i tried to sleep again
    but all i can feel
    is a chill cold from hell morning

    i dressed myself for school
    hoping it was more happier than to stay home
    i sometimes feel that
    i am more at home in school than living here
    the rain joins my sorrow as i go home
    hearing arguments they always say and do at each other
    my family is tearing apart.....
    i am drifting away...
    as i walk away outside my house
    the heavy rains on hell morning will be with me.......
    FOREVER!!!

    so? whaddya guys think?
     
    Nice job!

    Mmm,very good for your first poem! I'll give U a high five!!*High Five*^^
     
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    Yo, dude! It's me! Well, yeah, I know that poem of yours. You showed to me in the library, remember? Darn, you really think the world is like HELL... hehehehe...
     
    hey! dude? suupp!!? and kind like that...yeah so? what do you think? and go check on my other one it called bad day at sunrise well booyah for now *took the earphones and started singing*
     
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