hmmm...is this poetry

[LunaticSteven]

Like omgz, I made this, but I have no clue what it is since I just made it like 10 minutes ago. Here ya go PC. close this down if its not what it is XD

Perfect World​

In a perfect world
In a perfect place
At a perfect time
I see you, the one for me
The moment our eyes meet,
I see the truth.

In a perfect world
In a perfect place
At a perfect time
But the wrong person

When I look into your eyes,
All I see is the hatred you left
I had to see, so now I must say
We were never meant to be

In a perfect world
In a perfect place
At a perfect time
But the wrong person

If I ever planned to spend
My life with you
Then our love would have been true
But after that one day
I knew you had never
Been good enough for me

So good bye, fare well
You were the wrong person
The person I loved
But you have gone and stabbed my back
Just by the look in your eyes

In a perfect world
In a perfect place
At a perfect time
But the wrong person

But the wrong person

After that one night
I can?t believe what I saw in your eyes
The hatred I saw, I knew we were never meant to be

 

[Stacee]

^Nice. I write poems as well.
This can be a song! lol
Good Job, hope you write more!

 

[PrinceOfDarkness]

^Nice. I write poems as well.
This can be a song! lol
Good Job, hope you write more!

Thankies, I think it is a song -.- I just wrote it and posted it on PC. Sure, I'll write some more? and r u supporting me?

btw, that was me XD
EDIT: Here is another one

I?ve Got​

I?ve got
One eye on you
I?ve got
One love that?s true
I?ve got
Something to say

If you don?t want my love
If you don?t want my eye
If you don?t want my protection
Then just tell me

I?ve got
A thing for you
I?ve got
A boss like you
I?ve got
Something to say

If you don?t want my love
If you don?t want a slave
If you don?t want me
Then just tell me

I?ve got
A prayer on you
I?ve got
A crush on you
I?ve got
Something to say

If you don?t want my prayers
If you don?t want me loving you
If you want me to leave
Then just tell me

I?ve got
Not much time
I?ve got
No breathe to waste
I?ve got
Nothing else to say

If you want me to go
Then just tell me

 

[Stacee]

Now this i like...

Thankies, I think it is a song -.- I just wrote it and posted it on PC. Sure, I'll write some more? and r u supporting me?

I like to read.
Do you mind if i post one of mine? I had to do it for English. Some of it may go in our anthology book for next year:
The photo

To tell you the truth, what is a photo?
A picture taken with a camera, film or digital.
But that doesn?t tell us anything.
What is the purpose of a photo?

Share memories of the past?
To relive the origins of your youth?
To imagine the dreams that you may experience.
To find the answers to unsolved questions.

A moment that has passed, the photo reminds you of that particular moment.
It makes it ageless. It makes it live?forever.

A jewel that has never been discovered by miners but found by the heart.
Living amongst the common people not noticing that it is hiding in their very homes.

An inspiration. As that old saying goes ?One picture is worth a thousand words?. It is true. Redesigning the event gives you the chance to make it even more worthwhile.

Most of all, a memory. Nothing is the same everyday. Everything changes.
So that?s a reason for a photo to survive for years to come.
The most pleasing things in life, will die without photos.

^not much of a poem really...