Hoenn meets Elibe.

[luis_LR8]

Yay. It is me, I have started making Sprite comics, hope you like.

Chapter 1 - Stupid Birch

 

[Draik]

Pretty good. But try to create a tad more suspence.
Put in mind that the tentacles of Deoxys are a bit pixelized.

 

[luis_LR8]

I will, imagine Deoxys fighting.... Fire Emblem Style....

 

[Draik]

Will do so...wait for like...a couple hours and I'll post ot here.
EDIT: Heck Already made one. Deoxys pwning a pikachu.

The eyes are supposed to be like that.

 

[Poke]

Im sorry but it was impossible to read can you make it bigger?

 

[Draik]

Errr...did you try zooming in?

 

[Enix-Zae]

main problem i have with it was the positioning of the machine. The bottom of it defies physics and all rational thinking, as it goes up the walls and other objects O.o

 

[luis_LR8]

I know. I was too lazy to Edit the picture.

 

[Draik]

Maybe I'll make a new scene....thinks.

 

[Shinin]

The machine is weirdly placed, the text is too small and the guy supposedly enters a door but is going into a pokemon center heal thing. 5/10 (below average).