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hot tub may

QuickDude

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    [PokeCommunity.com] hot tub may



    is it hot in here?
     
    Cool! I like how you made it seem like water splashed on the camera or whatever it was that I'm not getting. And I'm not sure how many people would wear their bandana into a hot tub.
     
    Lol. Okay, then I'm really off. To me, if it didn't look like splashed up camera view, it started to look like the water was trying to eat May away. Now that I notice it, the head seems a bit big for the body. Hope to see more of... uh... May in hot tubs. *mutters* Acid water...
     
    Gohan said:
    Lol. Okay, then I'm really off. To me, if it didn't look like splashed up camera view, it started to look like the water was trying to eat May away. Now that I notice it, the head seems a bit big for the body. Hope to see more of... uh... May in hot tubs. *mutters* Acid water...
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    hahahaha. im gonna have to argue with you on that one, if you remember, may is 10 years old. and 10 year old people actually have bigger heads in proportion to their bodies. anyways, thats kinda my style (drawing people with slightly bigger heads i mean.)
     
    :3 hey there, awesome pictures
    (i actually prefer the second one to the first one)
    great water effects too! i like how you made it so it's blurrier on the feet from the water depth!! but i think it's just a bit overdone.. try to lighten the filter a bit so we can see it a bit better :3
    and i love the colouring job, it's very very wonderful!!

    :3 i have some suggestions for you, i hope you take them into consideration.
    first of all, even if May is a young girl, her body is still too small for her head.
    so the proportion is wrong..
    the top part is fine.. but from the bottom of her ribs and down, it needs to be fixed..
    usually the person's body is 2-and a half times longer than the head.
    for this picture, i'd suggest maybe 2 or 1 and a half times bigger..
    the hips have to be slightly wider ._. and even the torso.
    great legs @@ but they also have to be just a SLIGHT bit thicker..
    other than that you did a great job!
    try studying other pictures (like on deviantart) for this type of pose
    it usually helps
    (this type of pose is one of the hardest to draw, so i applaude you for the great work!

    Keep up the awesome work!
    and i hope i helped!!
    ~Kura
     
    Unlike most people. I don't have suggestions. I just say how I like things. This is a decent piece. Kinda makes me wanna hop in and talk to her.
     
    i actually traced a bit of her head and her lower torso, only cuz i got lost, so they cant be wrong, unless the animators of pokemon are wrong. thanks for feedback tho :)
     
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    QuickDude said:
    i actually traced a bit of her head and her lower torso, only cuz i got lost, so they cant be wrong, unless the animators of pokemon are wrong. thanks for feedback tho :)
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    if you traced her lower torso, did you trace a picture where she was standing up?
    also, it depends on the camera view of the picture you were getting it from..
    if the veiw was more bird-eye, then it'd make sense that the head would look bigger..

    also, next time, you should warn people that you traced or copied the head.
    if you dont give credit, it can be seen as plagiarism.
    so, you should always put a source if you've traced anything..

    :3 keep practising though!
    you're a really great artist!
    keep up the good work!
    ~kura
     
    I think her breasts are too big for her to be young enough to have a head that big.
     
    lol alright, i get it. from now on ill watch head sizes. i just think its better to make the head too big than to make the head too small.

    and Allstories, i question your sexual orientation sometimes... (jk)
     
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