How's my deck?

[Pokedragonfire]

Here's my really cool awesome fire deck I made. It's very powerful:

Pokemon: (x22)
1xTorchic Ex Ru/Sa 74/109
3xTorchic Ex Ru/Sa 73/109
2xCombusken Ex Ru/Sa 27/109
1xBlaziken Ex Ru/Sa 15/109

4xCyndaquil Neo Genesis 57/111
2xQuilava Neo Genesis 47/111
1xTyphlosion ex Ex Sandstorm 99/100

1xHoundour Neo Destiny 43/105
1xHoundour Neo Discovery 5/75
1xHoundour Aquapolis 86/147
1xHoundour Aquapolis 87/147
2xHoundoom Neo Discovery 4/75

1xMagby Expedition 17/165
1xMagmar ex Ex Ru/Sa 100/109

Trainers: (x8)
2xComputer Search Base Set 71/102
1xPokemon Breeder Base Set 76/102
1xSuper Energy Ret. Neo Genesis 89/111
1xEnergy Stadium Neo Destiny 99/105
1xTown Volunteers Aquapolis 136/147
1xWally?s Training Ex Sandstorm 89/100
1xPokeball Ex Ru/Sa 86/109

Energy: (x30)
26xFire Energy
4xDark Energy

If some cards are unfamiliar to you, you can look them up here. Plus, tell me how I can improve it if you have any suggestions. :D

 

[Dark_Absol]

Well good! But take off the E2 magby and put one Neo1 Magby... Magamar ex isnt that good, maybe you can find something better ^_^!

 

[dark_croconaw]

You should add some electric pokemon because you're very easy to beat with a water pokemon.

 

[Pokedragonfire]

Actually, this deck is so powerful weakness to water is no problem. I do so much damage and can power up so fast that by the time they get an evolved pokemon out, WHAM there goes their first 5 prizes. Heck it is powerful, but okay yeah it is weak against water but I don't care.

 

[Scyther5]

Awsome deck! other than the fact its valneable to water it looks great. 8/10!

 

[Bullados]

I have no clue how that thing can work. There is no draw, too many single Pokemon, too many evolution lines, and too much energy. Read over the deckbuilding articles at the top of this forum for some advise on making a better deck. I refuse to fix something this bad, you have to fix it yourself.

 

[Pokedragonfire]

It isn't that bad, it only has a few MINOR errors.

I have no clue how that thing can work. There is no draw, too many single Pokemon, too many evolution lines, and too much energy. Read over the deckbuilding articles at the top of this forum for some advise on making a better deck. I refuse to fix something this bad, you have to fix it yourself.

Number 1 Bullados, there is not too much energy. Fire pokemon need to discard to attack, they need lots of energy, especially Typlosion ex (5 energy cards) I only have about 3 evolution lines, that isn't a lot, and I've got pokemon breeder, a pokeball, and computer search to help me get what I need. Okay smarty-pants lemme see your deck. I want to see what makes your strategy so much better than mine. It is not too bad to fix. :17: Grrr...