Humanity and Insanity

[Satoshi's Angel]

I just cooked this up. I actually think I used a bit more proper punctuation on my own for once. It's another song. Enjoy and feel free to critic.


They call it humanity,
I call it insanity.
There's no way we're sane,
If we call life a game.

I dont understand,
Together we won't band.
We say we're different races
Just because we have different faces.

Different color of skin,
Separates the races of men.
We all live on this earth,
But still some of us never make it to birth.

If you kill someone already born it's murder,
But taking away a baby's life before it's gained is normal.
I can't see why we are how we are,
If we keep going at this rate we won't get to far.

You call it humanity,
I call it insanity.
I know we aren't sane,
And we're losing this life-like game.

 

[Poet of Darkness]

I love it Satoshi! It's some of your best work I think! It is asnwome to me! Better than any song I'll ever write!

 

[Miyu-chan]

And we're losing this life-like game.

I think that adding a hyphen 'tween life and like would make it easier to read though. xD

Wow, your song has lots of those major issues in life. I <3 this, most of the songs I hear nowadays are just about love, love, and more love. xD;

So you're saying those of mixed birth are killed before they're born, ne? (If not, sorry! xD; ) A bit fast topic-switching on the 3rd stanza. But again, very nice rhythm. =3

(Yay, you posted another of your works! x3) Keep it up! =D

 

[Satoshi's Angel]

Thanks, espyon. And Miyu naw that's not what I was suggesting about the mixed birth being killed before they're born. And yeah I did make it switch topics pretty fast. Anyways thanks. I'm glad some people like this.

 

[Poet of Darkness]

How do you like my songs that I wrote??? But yours will always be better!!! They ROCK!!!