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hungry snorlax part one

pokemon706

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    [PokeCommunity.com] hungry snorlax part one
    What you think? The next one is going to be VERY funny I assure you.
     
    Uhhhh.... strange to say the least.... hehe.... Maybe try doing it in the cells you would see in a comic.... your format is kinda weird XD

    6/10.

    I expect to see better on your next one.... Snorlax is kinda creeping me out :P He is like on a suger high or somethign... lol.
     
    Wow, that was weird, i like it ^^
     
    Try dividing the panels it would make more sense its good though.
     
    [PokeCommunity.com] hungry snorlax part one
    right now I'm working on the next part, which will be a little more organized.
     
    EDIT by FG: When giving criticism, be constructive - always offer ways to improve. Otherwise it could be considered flaming. Always respect others' feelings. :)


    --FG
     
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    Allstories said:
    Th...this is a joke right? You can't be serious.

    That was the stupidest, most incomprehensible nonsense I've ever read. Tell me you're being ironic.
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    Listen "Allstories" im sick of your rude and bad comments towards other people and their comics or what/ever they posted, you shouldn't post stuff like that, it hurts people's feelings, but a little constructive criticism here and there is ok and i know u were just rating and stating wat u wanted about his comic but still, like i said it hurts that's a little too much as u can tell he might be a noob at makin sprite comics so get off his back and many other's as well
     
    Rules said:
    Respect every member on the board. Do not flame members within your posts or your signatures. Also, do not bash other based on their beliefs. Do not try to force your beliefs on others.
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    Good comic just use the line tool to make straighter lines for the panels, and the first part was funny with the snorlax chasing the guy XD

    And Allstories, don't flame him because he can't make the best comics in the would, just critic him on how he can improve, don't make fun of him in his face :-P
     
    first of all I don't really care, I know how to make straight lines and stuff, that was just something I did at school when I was bored.
     
    funny? what are u 13 or something? XD jk they are hilarious the weird lines makee it seem as if your making fun of comics seems very sarcastic to me
     
    thats sorta what I was getting at, comics arn't spose to be neat. Seeeeeee..
     
    Allstories don't be so critical! I can't belive you say something so mean to pokemon706 APOGISE TO HIM! I WANT YOU TO SAY IT LIKE YOU MEAN AND NEVER SAY ANYTHING BAD TO MY KIND OF PEPOLE HERE AGIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. it's really hurtfull.
     
    Its his opinion, and he has a right to it, even if it is a little unjust.
     
    Wrong wording, unjust isn't the word to use :P

    Anyway this is not a snorlax comic, this is a snorlax comic It's pretty much just a snorlax tossed into some random comic. The snorlax isn't the main character even though he's in the title. The text boxes are broken. And you reshrunk a snorlax sprite really badly. Plus it seems like you have a story. But you don't. And I also know your using photoshop or PSP, sometimes they aren't the best programs to make comics with.

    If you take these into consideration, you'll do better next time.
     
    I think it was very funny XD "my poking stick is stuck!" LOL!!! That was prettty funny! Your comic is very diffrent, which I like a lot, I think Armadillo is right about it needing a plot, you might want to have some sort of problem, or enemy. It would spice the comic up really nicly! ^_^ I hope to see more soon! It's really good!
     
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