I Held Back

GodofPH

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    This is the first poem I've ever written on my own free will (others I've made were school assignments). This poem came to me after an emotional blow was dealt to me (kudos to you if you can figure out the exact situation a clue is hidden in my signature). Anyway, here goes

    I Held Back

    There you were, the thing I wished not to lack
    But wallowing in my insecurity, I held back

    I became your friend, a plan came on track
    Stability was building, but still I held back

    I called up my courage, I'd give you the facts
    Yes, this time I wouldn't hold back

    I was too late, it hit me like a yak
    Now I wish I hadn't held back

    Now your out of reach, my heart has a crack
    All my pain, becuase I held back

    Will I wait for it to end, my brain is wracked
    You slipped away, because I held back

    I've learned not to wait, I won't be a hack
    If the time comes, I won't hold back
     
    Awww,thats sad!! I have been like that with someone...Keep up the good work!See U around!!
     
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    Yes, I had to let that emotion out somehow, and my notebook was the only thing avalible at the moment.

    Thanks for the good words though
     
    Very nice GodofPH...very nice. I liked this piece.
     
    *sniff sniff* Bravo bravo it was very well written.
     
    Thank you all for the good words.
     
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