i need u

[darkblastoise89]

here goes another one of my songs...thanks for reading

(verse 1)
u asked me
if i'm
feelin for you...
my question
to you,
is do i bore you?
baby
u should
know that i adore u
and i'd
never
put anyone before u


(chorus)
u make me
u keep me
u love me
u hold me
and I
need u
so baby
console me

I miss u
I?d never dis u
I wanna
kiss u
It?s true
Believe me
Baby I
need u


(verse 2)
so tell me
why do
u have doubts?
if I
wanted to leave,
i?d already be out
I love u
I want u
I can?t do
without u
and I thought
that u
felt the
way I do

(chorus 2x)

[hook]
and maybe baby I was wrong
but I?ve been thinkin? bout u all night long
and girl u?

(chorus 2x)

 

[Jeremy]

Ewww...I don't like girls. Sowwie, but 10 thumbs down. *Gets a mod to close this.*

J/K! XD

Aww, that's so sweet! ^0^

 

[flame_chi]

im not into girls *10 thumbs up*

 

[Kelsey]

Fweeness! I likez this one! ^0^ <~~~Jeremy got me used to usin' that smiley, it's sooo kawaii! ^0^
I say I have to give it a 9/10 ^.^

~Kelsey

 

[darkblastoise89]

thanks everyone, it's to the beat of "used to love u" by john legend

 

[Kylie-chan]

It's pretty cool, but a bit... *pukes* UGH. kissing. (why do I write about it so much then? strange.)

 

[Claire]

great job matt, the subject of the song is really sweet ^^

 

[Kylie-chan]

oh so sweet... *looks wistful* Stop reminding me I don't have a boyfriend or any admirer! j/k

So great. A bit shorter than your former ones, but heh what can I say? Exemplary.

 

[Lady of the Shadows]

The subject of the song is sweet.
The over all feel and beat to it is good.
Though have to say it is short 8/10
Still good though.