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~im a caterpie~

lizardman

~PC's GFX rater~
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    i'm a caterpie,but i want to become a butterfree.like u wanted me to be.im going to be a butterfree and thats right...the one who keeps u in my sight,soaring in to the night.im going to be a butterfree......

    how do u like it???
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    OK, the whole 'plot' of the poem is good, but you seriously have to wrok on spelling, and you poem should be in the format that I have it, and other people have it in their poem threads, it's just easier to pick out the flow that way. I'd say do a whole revision of the poem, then repost it here and we'll have another look at it. ^_~

    ~Kelsey
     
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