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Shikon no Tama

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    Ok, I am making a kinda pointless comic about a dumb guy, and his look-a-likes. This is the first in the series, so I if you don't like it, too bad. They'll be others as well. I'm making more. It'll be like Attack of the Clones. XD
    Enjoy the first one. It's really short though, but I made sure it was kidna funny. It goes like this: if you wanna know who says what first, look in the boxes. If there's one square in there, that means he's the first person talking, if there's two in the text box, that's the second person talking and so on.
     
    You should use different bubbles to specify whether people are thinking or talking.

    Anyways, it isn't great. 6/10.
     
    This comic has absolutely no value. It has no comedic value, visual worth, or anything that could make anyone want to read it at all.

    You lose. Try again? Yes/No.
     
    Allstories said:
    This comic has absolutely no value. It has no comedic value, visual worth, or anything that could make anyone want to read it at all.

    You lose. Try again? Yes/No.
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    Ahahaha~



    Nice idea, altrough, no plot, no comedy, and no sense... At least, the idea is original~ Ya can improve, and Im sure ya can do very better~ 5/10
     
    Allstories said:
    This comic has absolutely no value. It has no comedic value, visual worth, or anything that could make anyone want to read it at all.

    You lose. Try again? Yes/No.
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    A bit harsh, but I'm going to have to agree. But then again, at least you bothered to make a background for each panel. And also, come up with your own jokes. I mean? I'm too sexy for this comic? That came from the PPG Doujin.
     
    It isnt funny,but it has really good quality and is nice and organized. 7.5/10 overall.
     
    I'm amazed at how many people here think that stuff like this is funny...
     
    Allstories said:
    This comic has absolutely no value. It has no comedic value, visual worth, or anything that could make anyone want to read it at all.

    You lose. Try again? Yes/No.
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    Well, that was a little harsh..... >.>
    But who said the first comic has to be the best? I'm making an even better one right now. And thank you everyone who actually like my comic a bit.
     
    Whether it's better or not is up to people who will rate it...
     
    Tig said:
    Lol nice comic and I like the way you put black squares to tell us what to read in what order ^_^
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    Yeah, it's really helpful *Nods*

    It's a good comic, I especially like the layout. Good try for your first time!
     
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