Just need some rating...

[Supreme Edgeboy Max]

Uh... I think this seriously would be my first and most recent proper competitive battling team. Not Netbattle team. I'm modifiying it now, so can I just get some ratings out of 10 and comments? Thanks.

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jolteon
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agility
baton pass (after agility to aggron)
thunder wave
thunderbolt

walrein
-
ice beam
protect
rest
surf

dragonite
-
dragon claw
flamethrower
outrage
wing attack

bellosom
-
sunny beam
giga drain
sleep poweder

crobat
-
confuse ray
return
sludgebomb
wing attack

aggron
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Rock Head - Double Edge
Earthquake
Substitute
Focus Punch

 

[jc_rcw]

Uh... I think this seriously would be my first and most recent proper competitive battling team. Not Netbattle team. I'm modifiying it now, so can I just get some ratings out of 10 and comments? Thanks.

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jolteon
-
agility
baton pass (after agility to aggron)
thunder wave
thunderbolt

good

walrein
-
ice beam
protect
rest
surf

k

dragonite
-
dragon claw
dragon dance
earthquake
aerial ace

physical sweeper

bellosom
-
sunny beam
giga drain
spore
sunny day

missing a move

crobat
-
confuse ray
shadow ball
sludgebomb
aerial ace

aggron
-
Rock Head - Double Edge
Earthquake
Substitute
Focus Punch

subpuncher

changes in bold.This is ingame right?

 

[Ham]

Thunderbolt > Dragon Claw. either way, Skarm will be a problem, as it WALLS sets like that.

 

[orangekows]

lol using agility on aggron. it's speed will always be bad. more like sub/tbolt/hp ice (bite ingame)/bp. just give aggron thunder wave and it's gonna outspeed most stuff anyway since paralysis cuts speed into 1/4. not half

walrein
-
ice beam
protect
rest
surf

i personally use curse, earthquake, ice beam, substitute/rock slide. it shouldn't rest because it isn't meant to tank and when it rests, the opponent will just roar/ww you away.

dragonite
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dragon claw
flamethrower
outrage
wing attack

boltbeam>flameclaw. flameclaw might have no resistances, but it loses the super effectiveness. and it's only 3 pokemon that resists boltbeam (and no one uses shedinja). for ingame, i would use dragon dance, eq, rock slide, aerial ace. sub/punch/bolt/beam is a skarmbliss counter and since skarmbliss isn't used ingame...

bellosom
-
sunny beam
giga drain
sleep poweder

sunny day/solar beam/sleep powder/stun spore

crobat
-
confuse ray
return
sludgebomb
wing attack

i would use sludge bomb/shadow ball/aerial ace/confuse ray @cb/lum berry. if you can get hp rock/fighting/ground/bug 60+ power, use it over confuse ray and give it CB

 

[Supreme Edgeboy Max]

Meh... I just needed ratings... I'm not using this team anymore.

No way. Stun Spore'd just slow down my opponent and give it a chance to fail attacks.. but Sleep Powder just pwns it to stay sleeping.

And I guess those are good improvements for the other Pokemon. Aggron is no good anymore, its good stuff, only it lacks in SPDef and no use in defending Ice.

This team's badly dead if hit by Ice, anyone notice?

 

[Ham]

Walrein, Bissey, Vaporeon, Suicune, Regice, and Lapras all take ice extremely well.

 

[Supreme Edgeboy Max]

*bump* For the last time, RATE ONLY! NO IMPROVEMENTS!

 

[leafgreen386]

*bump* For the last time, RATE ONLY! NO IMPROVEMENTS!

Then why'd you bump it? The point of an RMT is to get help on a team, not for a number rate, which doesn't help you.

Meh... I just needed ratings... I'm not using this team anymore.

And you aren't using the team anymore, let the thread die.