Eliana
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Eliana: Hey cool! Yet ANOTHER rewrite! WOOHOO! XD as many of you know, I've attempted to write this a million times! yet it never worked!
Lugia: You have serious problems?seriously?
Eliana: Well, same goes to you. Well, I decided to skip to the important part of my struggling Fanfic. Hopefully this one will work. Here goes?..
The Legend- The Jewel of the Sea
Chapter One
I?m in an egg. Yes, you heard me correctly. I?m in a freaking egg. No, don?t ask my how I got in the egg. I don?t know. Nor do I know why fate chose me out of all people to end up in the Pokemon World. I just don?t know. I might as well explain my story.
My name is Eliana Frim. I am an ordinary human being?
?well, at least I used to be.
It all began with the disappearance of my best friend, Rachel. Then I found this Lugia card on the ground, and I started blacking out and seeing white eyes?
then, one day, I woke up and I wasn?t in Massachusetts. That?s for sure. I then discovered a rather interesting creature, a Totodile. I then made another discovery. I could speak Pokemon. This struck me surprising. Humans aren?t really supposed to speak Pokemon, in case you didn?t know. But it gets creepier. Soon enough, I have Team Rocket on my tracks, after me for no apparent reason. I managed to evade them most of the time. Figuring Totodile would come with me, I thought I might as well start a Pokemon Journey for the heck of it. Along the way, I met some very interesting people, who I felt I met before.
During that time, I ended up touring a ruin. The ruin depicted a legend, stating that Lugia, the Guardian of the Sea, who also happens to be one of my favorite Pokemon, held a very important artifact- The Jewel of the Sea. It is said to possess great powers, which only Lugia can withstand. The Legend then states that if Lugia were going to be destroyed, it would pass the jewel on to one fated to have it.
As I left that ruin, I thought it was pretty weird. I still do.
I also picked up a rival during the journey. Her name was Jenna, and she was REALLY hotheaded. I ran into her many times, and she was just as bad each time. Apparently, she rivals with someone else.
This someone else is nicer.
Mia. I always think of her as a mysterious person, because she is. She?s actually very calm. I don?t understand how she stays that way when talking to Jenna. We see each other from time to time.
Then there is Electra. She?s probably the friendliest of the bunch.
A little too friendly?but we all get like that I guess.
I guess I can mention the twins. Ryo and Ryu. They are younger then me, I can?t seem to figure out their age. And they are total opposites. One has red hair, the other blue. One actually seems older, and the other seems younger. And the younger one- Ryu- she is a handful. Once, she totally went nuts at the Celadon Department store. It was actually sort of funny. She ran through the aisles and knocked all the pokeballs over. Her brother gets really concerned though.
Anyways, back to the point?
Eventually, I got all 8 badges. This is another thing I have no clue how I did it, but I did. This is when it gets a little interesting.
Julie, my Feraligatr, decided she wanted to go sailing near Cinnabar (she?s weird). So we did? she then decided to go swimming right into a whirlpool, which wasn?t JUST a whirlpool, but a transporting whirlpool?and I thought those only existed in video games?how wrong I was?
When the whirlpool?well?how do I say it?stopped spinning, we ended up in Jhoto. After a great deal of confusion, we decided we were probably in Whirl Islands. Exploring time. I knew exactly which Island held Lugia.
Lets just skip a few hours into the cave?
We reached a dead end on a high cliff, 50 feet above water. Just as we were turning back, we met an enemy of ours. John is his name. Member of Team Rocket. I had no time to react. None. I watched as the Golbat that I had defeated many times before create a gust of wind with its scarred wings. I felt myself swiftly begin to slip and fall off the cliff. I managed to hold on with one hand. I knew I was dead. I knew I would never get out of the cave. I knew what was going to happen as I heard him walk over to the edge of the cliff.
Before I continue, I just want to say I 65% expected him to whisper, ?long live the king? and push me off. If you?ve watched the Lion King, you?d understand why. Well, I was close. He didn?t say, ?Long live the king? but he did push me off the cliff.
I fell. I said goodbye to the cruel harsh world and I fell. But the pain didn?t come, the pain of the slapping of water, the impact of to much pressure colliding, the pain of suffocation, of death. Instead, from what I remember, I could have sworn I saw those eyes again, and I blacked out.
And here I am now. In an egg. How pleasant. Well, I THINK it?s an egg. How would I know? Does it look like I have been in an egg before? How about NO!
Wow. I never realized how boring something could be. No let me rephrase that-
I never realized anything could be more boring then that 2-hour lecture at school. I have probably been sitting here for an hour. It may not seem like much, but it is.
(Note: back to normal typing phew!)
~Eliana?s POV~
After sitting in the egg for a very long time, I noticed that my skin was turning white. I didn?t panic, because I think it was because I was traumatized and my blood was doing strange things. At least my hair wasn?t changing I thought as I held up a strand of hair.
I sighed as I felt the minutes pass by. A tingling feeling was shooting up my body. I gritted my teeth. I had a very itchy pain on my arm. I reached up to scratch it, only to result in screaming.
?THE HECK??
My fingers were gone. They welded together! And one disappeared!
?Oh my god?I?m turning into a freak!?
I started panicking. What was happening to me?
I watched arms stretch out and get wider. My elbow practically disappeared. It actually looked like a wing. Same thing about the other arm. I don?t know how much more I can take of this. It?s creepy. Have YOUR arms ever turned into wings? I think not.
Oh and about my hair- I spoke way to soon.
It?s gone now. All of it. I think I?m turning into some Birdman.
I mean woman.
Back to the point?I?m slowly drifting off into sleep?
Goodbye, humanity. Its nice knowing you. I blacked out.
Eliana: Okay, a little short and boring, but its done. Thank you GOD! If all works now, I can now write INTERESTING THINGS! YES! XD
Lugia: I feel bad for you?
Eliana: Why?
Lugia: Because you?re a lost case
Eliana: Well if I?m a lost case then you?re a lost Suitcase! LOL! Get it? Case? Suitcase? LOL!
Lugia: Um?Eliana?
Eliana: *still laughing* Yeah?
Lugia: -_-;; That wasn?t funny.
Eliana: What? *sigh* your right. XD
Lugia: You have serious problems?seriously?
Eliana: Well, same goes to you. Well, I decided to skip to the important part of my struggling Fanfic. Hopefully this one will work. Here goes?..
The Legend- The Jewel of the Sea
Chapter One
I?m in an egg. Yes, you heard me correctly. I?m in a freaking egg. No, don?t ask my how I got in the egg. I don?t know. Nor do I know why fate chose me out of all people to end up in the Pokemon World. I just don?t know. I might as well explain my story.
My name is Eliana Frim. I am an ordinary human being?
?well, at least I used to be.
It all began with the disappearance of my best friend, Rachel. Then I found this Lugia card on the ground, and I started blacking out and seeing white eyes?
then, one day, I woke up and I wasn?t in Massachusetts. That?s for sure. I then discovered a rather interesting creature, a Totodile. I then made another discovery. I could speak Pokemon. This struck me surprising. Humans aren?t really supposed to speak Pokemon, in case you didn?t know. But it gets creepier. Soon enough, I have Team Rocket on my tracks, after me for no apparent reason. I managed to evade them most of the time. Figuring Totodile would come with me, I thought I might as well start a Pokemon Journey for the heck of it. Along the way, I met some very interesting people, who I felt I met before.
During that time, I ended up touring a ruin. The ruin depicted a legend, stating that Lugia, the Guardian of the Sea, who also happens to be one of my favorite Pokemon, held a very important artifact- The Jewel of the Sea. It is said to possess great powers, which only Lugia can withstand. The Legend then states that if Lugia were going to be destroyed, it would pass the jewel on to one fated to have it.
As I left that ruin, I thought it was pretty weird. I still do.
I also picked up a rival during the journey. Her name was Jenna, and she was REALLY hotheaded. I ran into her many times, and she was just as bad each time. Apparently, she rivals with someone else.
This someone else is nicer.
Mia. I always think of her as a mysterious person, because she is. She?s actually very calm. I don?t understand how she stays that way when talking to Jenna. We see each other from time to time.
Then there is Electra. She?s probably the friendliest of the bunch.
A little too friendly?but we all get like that I guess.
I guess I can mention the twins. Ryo and Ryu. They are younger then me, I can?t seem to figure out their age. And they are total opposites. One has red hair, the other blue. One actually seems older, and the other seems younger. And the younger one- Ryu- she is a handful. Once, she totally went nuts at the Celadon Department store. It was actually sort of funny. She ran through the aisles and knocked all the pokeballs over. Her brother gets really concerned though.
Anyways, back to the point?
Eventually, I got all 8 badges. This is another thing I have no clue how I did it, but I did. This is when it gets a little interesting.
Julie, my Feraligatr, decided she wanted to go sailing near Cinnabar (she?s weird). So we did? she then decided to go swimming right into a whirlpool, which wasn?t JUST a whirlpool, but a transporting whirlpool?and I thought those only existed in video games?how wrong I was?
When the whirlpool?well?how do I say it?stopped spinning, we ended up in Jhoto. After a great deal of confusion, we decided we were probably in Whirl Islands. Exploring time. I knew exactly which Island held Lugia.
Lets just skip a few hours into the cave?
We reached a dead end on a high cliff, 50 feet above water. Just as we were turning back, we met an enemy of ours. John is his name. Member of Team Rocket. I had no time to react. None. I watched as the Golbat that I had defeated many times before create a gust of wind with its scarred wings. I felt myself swiftly begin to slip and fall off the cliff. I managed to hold on with one hand. I knew I was dead. I knew I would never get out of the cave. I knew what was going to happen as I heard him walk over to the edge of the cliff.
Before I continue, I just want to say I 65% expected him to whisper, ?long live the king? and push me off. If you?ve watched the Lion King, you?d understand why. Well, I was close. He didn?t say, ?Long live the king? but he did push me off the cliff.
I fell. I said goodbye to the cruel harsh world and I fell. But the pain didn?t come, the pain of the slapping of water, the impact of to much pressure colliding, the pain of suffocation, of death. Instead, from what I remember, I could have sworn I saw those eyes again, and I blacked out.
And here I am now. In an egg. How pleasant. Well, I THINK it?s an egg. How would I know? Does it look like I have been in an egg before? How about NO!
Wow. I never realized how boring something could be. No let me rephrase that-
I never realized anything could be more boring then that 2-hour lecture at school. I have probably been sitting here for an hour. It may not seem like much, but it is.
(Note: back to normal typing phew!)
~Eliana?s POV~
After sitting in the egg for a very long time, I noticed that my skin was turning white. I didn?t panic, because I think it was because I was traumatized and my blood was doing strange things. At least my hair wasn?t changing I thought as I held up a strand of hair.
I sighed as I felt the minutes pass by. A tingling feeling was shooting up my body. I gritted my teeth. I had a very itchy pain on my arm. I reached up to scratch it, only to result in screaming.
?THE HECK??
My fingers were gone. They welded together! And one disappeared!
?Oh my god?I?m turning into a freak!?
I started panicking. What was happening to me?
I watched arms stretch out and get wider. My elbow practically disappeared. It actually looked like a wing. Same thing about the other arm. I don?t know how much more I can take of this. It?s creepy. Have YOUR arms ever turned into wings? I think not.
Oh and about my hair- I spoke way to soon.
It?s gone now. All of it. I think I?m turning into some Birdman.
I mean woman.
Back to the point?I?m slowly drifting off into sleep?
Goodbye, humanity. Its nice knowing you. I blacked out.
Eliana: Okay, a little short and boring, but its done. Thank you GOD! If all works now, I can now write INTERESTING THINGS! YES! XD
Lugia: I feel bad for you?
Eliana: Why?
Lugia: Because you?re a lost case
Eliana: Well if I?m a lost case then you?re a lost Suitcase! LOL! Get it? Case? Suitcase? LOL!
Lugia: Um?Eliana?
Eliana: *still laughing* Yeah?
Lugia: -_-;; That wasn?t funny.
Eliana: What? *sigh* your right. XD