Locked up

[Dark Magician ruler]

Listen this is my frist peom so I don't know if it will be any good


Locked up
I fell chains around me
holding me back
everyone can't see me
why am i locked up inside

People think they know me
but not the real me
I stay always inside
Locked up so no one sees me

Many people try to break the chains
But none come close
so for now
I will stay inside
until the right person sets me free

I hope you like it it's my frist I've done off my head

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

DMR...for a first-timer...this isn't too bad. A few minor spelling errors (I know this happens a lot...I do it too!) but not bad. I must admit you have some skill.

 

[Dark Magician ruler]

Yeah yeah I don't know it could be better I think

 

[Wolf_Goddess]

Yeah, it was good. I stink at Poetry, so, Its better then how mine turn out! (that's why I post none on PC!)

 

[Dark Magician ruler]

Thanks but everyone could do a good one if you don't rush. Go ahead I'll read it if you do

 

[AngelMina]

Nice poem Brother for a first timer off the head ^^

 

[Dark Magician ruler]

:) Thank you for the completment sis :)