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Lost in the Dark

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Ciera

This is a tragedy.
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    Basically, its TSA. Title says all.

    5 people are lost, in th woods, and they bump into each other; within the first 3 posts by people.

    They are all happy and fine, but they get the feeling that they are being watched. They stick together at all times, and eventually will be hunted. ^^

    There is a catch. When you are hunted down, you will be separated from the group. Then whatever hunted you will trap you in a cave and the others have to find you. Tee hee. Reminds my of I Spy or something...

    Oh, and when you post, please post long posts. Thanks.

    Form:

    Name:
    Age:
    Gender:
    Description/Looks:
    Attitude/Behaviour:
    Pokemon: [3 Pokemon, NO LEGENDARIES]

    Here is mine:
    Name: Ciera
    Age: 14
    Gender: Female
    Description/Looks: Thin, always wears dark clothing, has hite hair, and violet eyes.
    Attitude/Behaviour: Is kinda friendly, but only to people she knows.
    Pokemon: [3 Pokemon, NO LEGENDARIES]: Absol, Charizard, Feraligatr.
     
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    Name:Seth Ruin
    Age:13
    Gender:Male
    Description/Looks:Black neck-length hair, brown eyes, tan skin. Wears a hawaiin shirt, green T-shirt, and khaki pants.
    Attitude/Behaviour:Nice, trustful, a little shy.
    Pokemon: [3 Pokemon, NO LEGENDARIES]:Torchic, Azurill, Taillow.
     
    Name: Silva
    Age: 15
    Gender: male
    Description/Looks: Tall, black/grey jeans, White T-Shirt, white sweat/wristband
    Attitude/Behaviour: Always willing to make friends, but will lash out if provoked
    Pokemon: Umbreon, Absol, Raichu
     
    Couple more people and were good to go ^^
     
    *waits*

    So how many more people do we need to join before we can start?
     
    *counts*

    Two. I had to count up the number of people alread joined, minus the amout 'allowed'. Heh heh.
     
    Name:Emily
    Age:11
    Gender:Female
    Looks:Long,thick blonde hair. Blue eyes. Wears a t-shirt and jean shorts
    Attitude/Behavior:Nice. Is tough on the battle field and pushes her pokemon 2 thier limits but not killing point. Is brave and Couragous
    Pokemon:Charizard,Vaporeon,Raichu
     
    Name: Lucky
    Age: 14
    Gender: Female
    Description/Looks: Medium length drak brown hair, and light brown eyes. She is pretty short, just below 5 feet. She is wearing a light pink t-shirt and old jeans with sneakers.
    Attitude/Behaviour: Outgoing and social, not the least bit shy. She hates not being able to talk to anyone, and hates being alone. Her battling style is to get the battle over as quickly as possible becuase her Pokemon, along with herself, do great at the beginning, but goes down from there.
    Pokemon: Espeon, Flareon, Sandslash
     
    Yay, we have everyone. ^^

    Someone please post to get it started. Please.
     
    OOC: I will .. I guess. Tell me if it's not what you wanted.

    IC: Lucky was wandering around the forest. She didn't know how long she had been in there, she stopped timing it after 3 hours. Her white shirt was now dirty, specks of mud racing up her back due to running near a lake. Although she usually would complain, Lucky didn't care about anything but getting out ... or at least finding someone.

    Flareon walked alongside her. Lucky had taken out her favorite Pokemon for support. After all, it was creepy walking in a dark, dense forest alone. She kept thinking she saw a shadow race along the ground, and always felt as though someone was following her. Flareon would always be there for her trainer when she was in trouble; so having her out was Lucky's way of keeping safe.

    But no matter how strong her Pokemon were, Lucky had the eerie feeling that no matter what she did, she would never be completly safe.
     
    I was walking along in the darkness of the forest. All my pokemon were out. Charizard out for light with his tail flame. My others out for comfort. I was walking and walking,and walking. "Vaporeon,do you know how long its been since we got here?" I asked. "Vaporeon." She said sadly. "ok...." I wish I knew."

    Probably about three hours we were resting. "I'm hungry." I said. I took out my backpack and gave pokenip to my pokemon. And took out a sandwich and some chips. Then I got goosbumps. "I think we're being watched." I said.
     
    I sat in a tree, my Absol nestled beside me on the branch. I looked out, as far as I could through the dense trees. I hated trees. I spotted someone, a small girl[Emily]. My Absol saw her too. I hopped from the tree and walked over to her, not careing if I was friendly or not. Out of the corner of my eye, I thought I saw some sort of animal eyeshine. Not a good sign. Something- or things- was out there. Absol shivered slightly at my side as we approched the girl.

    (( Alrighty, next person to post, I will hunt. Well, not me, the rouge Pokemon. Hee hee. So, have fun, and watch your backs! ^^ ))
     
    Lucky looked around, and suddenly was sure that something was right beside her. It was enough to send the young trainer into a blind dash deeper into the forest. The Flareon followed its trainer, deticated to being by her side. When Lucky was almost positive she could run no more, she saw two trainers standing. She ran over, glad to have finally found people.

    "Um...hi," Lucky managed to say while taking a deep breath of air. She decieded not to tell the other two about the ... thing that she was sure she was seeing. After all, it might just be her mind.
     
    The creature that was chasing Lucky stood about 7 feet back, behind the three people, just standing there. It stood on two legs, and seemed to be Pokemon like. It had two long arms, and looked to be hunched over, slightly. It had spikes on its back, and its skin seemed to be blueish green, maybe a shade of violet. It was impossible to tell in the dark. It seemed to stand at about 5+ feet, maybe more. It had a tail, and it looked bulky, but was very agile.

    It made it's decision in seconds. Before anyone could do anything, it quietly crept alont the shadows, watching Lucky. In a blur, it rushed towards the three people and snatched Lucky, immeadiately covering her face with a scaly hand. Against her struggles, the Pokemon rushed off with the small girl in its arms. It took her about 30-40 feet back behind the others, and tied her up, leaving her in the cave with a small Totodile. The Pokemon watched her quietly, doing as it was told, only obeying its mother.


    (( My characters reactions will come after someone posts... ))
     
    Lucky, more than a little frightned by her experience, stayed tied to the tree, and gave no signs that she wanted to escape, though she dearly did. The thought made her more angry than anything. After all, she had just met some people when something just had to come along and ruin it.

    Flareon crept through the trees, and soon arrived by her trainer. She had made sure that the 'monster' didn't see her. After all, she would do no good to Lucky if she was hurt. She saw the Totodile and decieded it was worth a shot.

    ( OOC: Now, I will use {text} instead or "text" to symbolize Poke Talk )

    {What do you want with her?} Flareon asked, knowing that the Totodile would know exactly what she was talking about. The water type turned its head, and both Lucky and Flareon awaited the responce.
     
    I met up with another trainer in the darkness.I started a campfire. My name is Emily. I said to the trainer. If youd like Ill share some food with you. I looked for the trainer who was beside me but she was no longer there. "Hmmm." I said "I wonder where she went." I got into my backpack g9ot out my food,pots,pans,eating utensiles,and pokenip. "Come on out Guys!" I shouted as I let out my pokemon. I gave them bowls full of pokenip and started cooking dinner. Then something in the bushes rustled.
     
    I let out my pokemon and watches the girl in front of me.

    "Can I really have some food?"

    I stod by my pokemon, wondering where that over girl went. I shrugged it off.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    The Totodile watched the girl and her pokemon.

    {My mommy brought you here for a reason, but I'm not allowed to tell. If I tell, I get in humongo trouble!} The little pokemon stretched its arms out to the sides to signify 'humongo'.

    Lucky's abductor, still unknown to what it is, crept through the shadows, looking for more... 'victims'.
     
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    Flareon watched the little Pokemon in fascination as it made hand gestures about the trouble he would get in if he opened his mouth.

    {So she is your mommy. Well, its a start anyways. Now humongo, is that even a word ... don't answer that. Anyways, what kind of trouble. See I get ignored, Lucky gets grounded, and you get ... what?}

    Lucky sat, watching her Pokemon speak what sounded like complete jibberish to her. She decieded that whatever had been there, was now back chasing people, and that it was safe to try to escape. She didn't know it she should ask Flareon to do the deed of untying her, seeing as how should would probably just burn it, and the flames would scorch her wrists. She leaned up against the tree to think while Flareon tryed to get more information out of the 'monster's child.
     
    His eyes widen. The Totodile shook his head quickly. {Mommy doesnt tell! No, no... I dont want to know, she is big and strong and I am glad shes my mommy.}

    He stands therer quietly and looks around nervously.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I watch Emily and sits on the ground, using my Charizard for a back rest. My Feraligatr stood guard, watching over us, and Absol was curled into a ball, watching Emily's pokemon.
     
    {Well, she is big and strong, but that dosen't help me much. Anyways, I'm getting my trainer out of this, sorry if you get in 'hum...', oh forget it, trouble.}

    With that said, Flareon went over to Lucky, and slashed through the rope, scraping some of Lucky's skin along with it. Lucky took a quick breath though her mouth, making an almost hissing sound in pain. Flareon was understanding, and waited a moment before pushing her trainer along.
     
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