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Lost Shore

Manaphy1128

We're Making Gods
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    Well, me and Kila. decided it was about time to post something from Lost Shore(it remained untitled until now, actually)
    So, without further ado:

    Lost Shore

    By Kila. & Manaphy1128


    Chapter One
    Burnt

    Heather stared out the window. Oh, how she despised car rides. And camping trips. And her sister, Whitney, who was constantly moving around next to her, shoving her elbow into Heathers ribs.

    She'd expected all of this, though. Her family had camped before, in a large tent, somewhere in the wilderness. All their camping trips consisted of three things : Whiny Whitney, mosquitoes, and, of course, the occasional furry forest critter that ran by the tent.

    Heather grumbled, glancing at her parents, who were having a heated discussion about their tent location. Heather rolled her eyes, then looked out the window again. They were driving up a mountain now, climbing higher and higher in circles. Heather imagined Whitney walking up the mountain, and chuckled evilly.

    Her mother, who was quite the backseat driver, commanded her father to turn right and left, left and right.

    Whitney elbowed Heather again.

    Heather stuck her head up between her parents' seats. They both turned to look at her.

    "Can you stop yelling so loud? I have a headache," Heather lied, eager for silence.

    Her mother smiled, and for the first time, Heather noticed the wrinkles in her face. Her dad smiled as well.

    "I'm sorry, honey, I'll try--"

    Whitney screamed, cutting off all conversation. They were about to hit--

    Heather fell back into her seat, and her mother screamed too.

    Their car hit the fence at the edge of the cliff. The windows shattered around the family, showering them with small shards of glass.
    Heather pushed Whitney towards the door.
    "Go!" she yelled.
    Immediately dropping her MP3, Whitney grabbed the handle and pushed all her weight on it.
    C'mon, open.
    It opened wide allowing both girls to scramble out, them then seeing their parents hurry out too.
    Her father grabbed the car, trying to haul it back up.
    "Let it go Dad!" Whitney called. "Or you'll go down with it!"
    He obediently let go as the car tumbled down, breaking the fence on its way.
    "Now what?"Heather asked.
    "We go the 10 mile hike-" Whitney started.
    "It's actually only a mile to the spot we picked.
    "We don't have any of our things except our bags. That's limited food, no tent, no matches, no first aid kit, no-'
    "We get it. We lost a lot of supplies. Now let's make the most of what we have left."

    After a minute more talking, they headed off.
    "That was totally bogus." Whitney said, using her favorite word.
    "You, are bogus" Heather replied.
    Whitney glared at her.
    "Now can we stop-"
    "Look!" Whitney explained. She was pointing to a Bear cub that was only a few yards away....and its mother was with it.
    "CUE MOVING FORWARD!" Heather said as they all started moving ahead.
    Too bad they did.
    *********************************************

    The family stayed close together, her father in the front of the line, Heather in the back of the line.

    Her legs ached already. Whitney whined about wearing sandals, but her mother pointed out that they all were.

    "... So!" Whitney retorted, then sulked.

    Heather stopped to catch her breath, leaning on the rocks that lined the road. What a trip this turned out to be.

    She looked up the path - her family had already vanished from view. She rolled her eyes, then stood and awkwardly ran up the road, eager to catch up.

    She decided to make a game - She walked to the other side of the road, walking on the edge of the cliff. She looked for their car, but found nothing.

    Suddenly, she saw something move on the cliff below. She froze, her heart thundering in her chest. Heather leaned further over the edge of the cliff, and caught a glimpse of dark blue robe, billowing out behind...

    ... a person?

    Heather gasped, as the rock beneath her cracked, sending small rocks tumbling down the steep cliff. Then she fell silent again.

    The cloaked figure froze, slowly looked around, then took off running down the rocks.

    'Wow. They're really fast,' Heather thought as the figure reached the bottom of the cliffs and ran into the forest and out of sight.

    Heather breathed a sigh of relief, and stood up straight again.

    And that's when the rock gave.

    The cliff beneath her crumbled. Heather fell, and, without even the time to scream, she hit the cliff beneath her, then slid further and further down the mountain until she hit the ground below.

    She grabbed at a tree, standing up shakily. A sharp pain shot up her leg, and she winced, falling back to the ground.

    She lay on her back, looking at the trees overhead.

    And then Heather fell asleep.
    _________________________________________________________________

    Okay then, that's what we decided would be Chapter One.

    ~Manaphy1128 & Kila.
     
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    YEEES! It's finally up! XD

    We love criticism... er.... comments.
    Happy reading~~
     
    Oh my gosh. I haven't posted in a day. The grinding pain. Yes, I have a very profound reason for it. Kind of.

    Oh by the way, If you don't like how we I present chatspeak, I like it. It adds a little zing to it.("What the heck?")

    Chapter Two​
    Simply for Fun​

    "Yo!'
    Someone kicked Heather.
    "Dude!"
    She finally gave in and opened her eyes The pain from the free-for-all cliff fall was still there, though she had lost all memory of the fall.
    "What are you doing here?"
    She looked up to see who it was. She was staring into the purple eyes of a young man or woman, she couldn't tell which.
    "I said, what are you doing here?"
    Defintly female.
    "Hey, Ame! Did you meet her?"
    "This little runt here?"
    "Yeah."
    "Such a tiny little-"
    "Well then..."
    Heather noticed it was the same blue hooded person as before.
    She looked around.
    Pretty much everyone was wearing the same article of clothing, some sporting other acessories.
    "Well if that's the case, we better show this little bitc- I mean, girl, to Warashi then. If she will be staying here. Not that I want her to...."
    "Ame, please be sensible. You know she won- Well then, lets shove off."

    "That building has got to be the most pretentious thing I have ever seen..." Heather said as they approached the building.
    It was almost castle like, with aging towers and maze like hallways that could be seen outide. Millons of little red flags rested on the rooftops.
    "Well he is an important person. All the noobs report to him." Ame told her.
    "Nice wording on your part." the man told her. He then turned to face heather.
    "By the way, I'm Waas."
    "Waas? Like Wa-ahs?"
    "Yes."
    "Now come on, hurry up." Ame told the two. "You know what happened to Hyun when she was late. Come on now, hurry on."

    *****************************************

    Heather looked up at the giant castle doors. She was slightly nervous - where was her family anyway? Where was she, anyway? Who or what is the Warashi?

    Heather leaned over to ask Ame these questions.

    "Where am I?"

    Ame glanced over at Heather, then looked away, seemingly ignoring her. Ame raised a giant fist and pounded on the door. Once. Twice. Three times.

    **************************************

    "I get it, you bastard! Quit knocking and come in!" A voice from inside yelled at Ame.
    "Told you they were rude and deadly." Ame whispered to Heather, then pushed open the heavy doors. They made a loud groan, revealing a room very much the same as outside. Itr had a red carpet heading up to a chair with stone walls on all sides. It was almost completely bare, except for some home improvement items.
    Heather looked at the chair.
    "It's....It's...IT'S JUST A TINY LITTLE PIPE-FOX SPIRIT!" She then burst out laughing as Ame and Waas stared at her.
    The spirit took notice and the plant right near Heather burst into flames, and Heather's laugh was cut short. It burned the plant to a crisp, then went out.
    "You want that to be you?" it asked her.
    Heather shook her head quickly, with a look of fear on her face.
    "OMG!" she then yelled.
    "OMG?" Ame asked, and still stared.
    "It means oh my god, but I had to say OMG." Heather replied, her features still in freak out mode.
    "How sporky...." Ame said to her, then turned to the pipe-fox.
    "Now-"
    "I know, she arrived by falling of the cliff and- being rescued by us." The spirit inturrupted her.
    "NOW LEAVE!"

    **************************

    The first thing Heather noticed when they walked out of the castle were the walls. She felt stupid for not noticing them before - they loomed over the town ,casting shadows over the small houses and shops.

    "Stupid Warashi," Ame muttered under her breath. "What a whiner."

    Waas laughed at Ame, but Heather ignored them both. She looked down - the castle appeared to be the highest part of the town. Below her she could see a town - the rooves made of straw, the people looking almost like ants.

    "Hellllloooo?" Ame said, waving a hand in front of Heathers face. "I said I'll help you find your family."

    Heather stared at Ame. "Where are we? I expext an answer this time."

    Ame stared at Heather - her stringy hair, her now tattered and dirty clothes.

    "We are in Lifeless Sanctuary," Ame replied, staring out at the wall.

    "What's up with the walls?"

    Ame laughed. Apparently, this was funny. "They keep out the ghosts, of course~"

    And with that, Ame and Waas turned, laughing, and skipped down the steps towards the town.

    Heather followed hesitantly.

    ****************************************

    "Now then, it's nine 'o clock, I'm tired, I wanna go home, NOW." Ame said, in a angry tone, giving Heather a pout.
    Heather noticed it was directed to her, and asked, "What?"
    "Here." Ame said, extending it to Heather. "You're coming with me tonight. Or you die."
    "Okay then."

    It was 10:00, and Heather thought she could see a hint of civilazation.
    "How long to your pad?" Heather asked.
    "Pad? You mean house?"
    "Same thing."
    Only a few more-here we are!" Ame said and pointed over towards a small 4-room house.
    "That's it?" Heather asked.
    "Yes. My bedrooms on the top, right above you. To then, the bathroom, kitchen, and the living room is in conjunction with the kitchen."
    "Facsanating. Lets go in."
    "Wipe your feet first."
    "Wipe your feet my butt" Heather muttered, staring at her feet.
    "Excuse me?"
    "Nothing, really."
    Heather thought she saw Ame's eyes go red. Super-advanced humans....she thought to herself.
    "Hey, Ame, what are you?"
    Ame briskly turned to Heather. "If I said it, you wouldn't believe me."
    "Yes I would."
    "I'm a ghost." Ame rushed.
    "Really? I'm not buying it."
    As she said that, Ame walked back until she was a good 10 feet from the house, and plunged forward fast. Heather didn't see her go in. Or when she came back out.
    "Trust me, I'm not human. And tomrrow, you won't be either.

    "********************************************

    "What?" Heather stared at Ame. "What do you mean, you're not human?"

    "I mean-" Ame began

    "Shoot!" Waas broke her off. "It's already sunset!"

    Ame stared off at the wall. Orange beams of light from the sun still shone over it - but not for long.

    "Crap!" Ame shouted as she grabbed Heather's hand. The three of them sprinted down the steps.

    Heather tried to take in as much of the town as she could as they weaved through the houses - Where were all the people?

    Ame made a sharp turn, Heather almost tripping.

    "Quick! In there!" Waas yelled, pointing at an old decrepit house in front of them. Ame let go of Heathers hand, then, without warning, kicked down the door.

    Waas grabbed Heather this time, scooping her up in his arms and running inside after Ame. Almost as soon as they got in, Ame began piling things in front of the door.

    "What's going on?" Heather asked, slightly flustered.

    "Shh."

    Waas stared past Heather, out the window. Heather followed his gaze...

    Cloaked figures - a dozen, maybe, were patrolling past the house. They looked almost translucent in the last rays of the sun.

    Heather pulled herself closer to Waas.

    Suddenly, one of the clozked figures turned to look at the window. It's face was shadowed by the hood, but beady white eyes stared out at them...

    Can it see us?

    ---

    Oh yes, that is enough for me. Now a short story by me and a boy from my class. Note that is funnier said then read and if you judge me on this, don't. It's just for fun and stupidly stupidly retarded. So enjoy it.

    Untitled​
    By Manaphy1128 & Jake Sutton

    (Manaphy1128's part) So there was this eleven year old girl, Rachel, and on her birhday, at school, the teacher said, "Screw you, this ugly horrible, crappy ugly sweater is yours." and Rachel started crying big, juicy tears of blood, and became emo gothic skater punk.


    (Jake's Part) After she graduated, she went to law school and became the President of the United States, and she aressted the teacher. She then went on to become a school dictator and rule everyone when the teacher went emo and killed herself.

    THE END​

    Yes, weird, isn't it? Yeah, we actually told that to our class and they started cracking up and then the teacher said the word emo made her think of "Tickle Me Elmo" and that got a good laugh also.

    Quote of post: (I think this is right, I don't have that particular volume at the moment)

    "But I think there's a special strength needed to cry..."

    Fai. D. Flowright, Tsubasa volume 2

    This has been:

    ~Manaphy1128 & (partially) Kila
     
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    Yes, I get a story from you too.

    I love how you and Kila. wrote this.

    And I like the plot....I think this hould be the plot right now. But knowing you there are sure to be more plot twists.

    And I love the sense of humor you have and use. And the stupid chatspeak.

    Of course, those don't pay for your faults: Your storywriting skills are lacking in detail. I always like detail. Yes, I get whiny about it.

    Just be sur to screw us over.
     
    Bahaha. We're actually hoping to be able to screw more then just one person over.

    And the chatspeak roolz. XD

    The only bad part I just noticed is that you can clearly tell where the seperations of the writing are. But, it's fun to write. Therefore...

    It shall live! <33

    Happy Reading, darlings~

    KILA.
     
    (Do you know what "screw over" means?

    Ah, never mind. This is a short chapter due to the fact Kila. asked to write the Truecolor part and she is currently working on it. So sorry for the inconvenience.

    Chapter Three​
    A Whole Broader Concept​

    "ZOMG!" Heather whispered, startled.
    "What is WITH you and this chatspeak?!" Ame angrily whispered.
    "I.....actually don't know." Heather replied.
    "FOR THE LOVE OF GO-" Ame started and stopped herself.
    "Both of you shut up!" Waas glared at them both.
    The "thing" stared for a few seconds. It then walked up in quick strides to the building.
    "SH-!" Heather almost yelled.
    The "thing" just, for some odd reason, sniffed the white-washed wood of the house, and carried on to the rest of the robed creatures.
    "What was that?" Heather asked, still in "OMG!- that thing is weird!" mode.
    "It was-" Waas started.
    "It was a Clyco, go to sleep." Ame said and flicked some dust in her eyes.

    Heather looked around.
    She breathed in that new car smell her parents car still carried after 3 months of riding in.
    "Yes." she said in a cherry voice.
    Whitney looked at her weird. Heather quickly scanned the page her book was on.
    "Uh-I was right! I say his name right. See?" Heather flashed the book at Whitney. "It says here, 'So if you've been pronouncing Fai's name ryming with the word "eye", then you've been pronouncing it properly.' "
    "Do I, like, care about that?" Whitney flashed her a last look before going and gawking at Pete Wentz in her magazine.
    Typical, Heather thought.
    She heard a bump. Then a scream. Then Pete came flying to her face.
    They were falling of the cliff

    "WAAAGGGGHHHHH!!!!" Heather screamed as she woke up.
    "What?" Ame intently stared at her.
    Heather imedeately went and grabbed Ame by the arm.
    "WEEERRREEE GOOOONNNNAAAA DIIIIEEEEE!!!!" she yelled.
    Ame pushed her off and said, "You idiot, dream."
    "Huh?"
    Ame sighed, got up and took the book she was reading with her, and hit Heather upside the head with it.
    "We are not going to DDDIIIIEEEE. It was a stupid dream. Get yourself, help." Ame said, as though talking to a kindergardener.
    Heather stared at her blankly.
    "Well, than, since your ready-"
    "For what?" Heather inturrupted.
    Ame hit her with the book. "You idiot, as always. To your death sentence. You see humans can't stay here. So then, off to the hanging we go!"

    -----------
    Ame opened the door cautiously, peeking out. "The Cyclos might still be wandering around. Sometimes a few lag behind."
    Waas walked up to the door with Ame, Heather following obediently.

    Ame turned back to Heather. "Okay. I think I know how to get you out of here." She glanced at Waas, who stared intently back at her. "We go see the Truecolor."

    "Wha-"

    "No way, Ame. It's way to dangerous. We could get killed," Waas said, stony faced.

    "Come on. Where's your sense of adventure?"

    Waas lashed out, punching the door right beside Ame's head.

    "You almost just hit me! A... Are you crazy!?" Ame shreiked. "Come on, Heather!" She grabbed Heathers hand and pulled her along behind her. "To the Truecolor."

    Heather looked back at Waas, who stared morbidly after them. She thought she saw a tear run down his cheek. But maybe it was just a trick of the light.

    ------------​

    If we even have dear readers, I promise we are writing...well, er...Kila. is.

    This has been;

    ~Manaphy1128 & Kila.
     
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    Nice job Manaphy-chan. You've made very good progress keep it up!
     
    By the way, when complimenting or CC-ing the story, put my name and Kila. please.

    This chapter was really my favorite to write by far. The immensity of it was awsome to write...wait, what?

    Chapter Four​
    Blind​

    "OFF WE GO! SLOW AS SNOW BACK THERE!" Ame yelled to Waas.
    "That doesn't even make sense." Heather told Ame. "Snow can go quite fast downwards during a blizzard."
    "Whatever, maybe I'm talking about regular snow."
    "Regular snow goes in a medium speed." Waas looked at her with that blankness.
    "Oh...kay. Whatever, you suck."

    They had been walking/running for a little amount of time when Heather smashed into something.
    "Hey, look!" Ame pointed to her. "She found those pesky invisible walls."
    "Invisible walls?" Heather raised her hand onto her nose.
    "Yes. Hel-lo? Have you been hearing me?"
    "Yesh." Heather made the oddity of her yes on purpose.
    "Well then, since were near the invisible walls we should be nearing the Sakura Garde-Oh, there they are!"
    "Otherwise known as Hell" Waas poked Heather and said.
    Quickly striding over, Ame was the first to make it.
    "COMEMON!" Ame strung her words into one."HURRY UP, you snow people!"

    Ame lightly rapped her hand against the door.
    "ENTER!!" A voice boomed.
    "Even worse than the Warashi." Ame said over her shoulder.
    She kicked open the door, which somehow easily opened.
    "I'll be right back, stay here." Ame ordered them, and slammed the door shut.
    The two stood there and loud crashes and yells were heard throughout.
    "What's going on?" Heather stared at the door, which behind them, people were probably getting killed for the second time.
    "I don't know." Waas replied, also staring.
    A final BOOM was heard before Ame finally stumbled out.
    "Heh, quite the rough and tumble group in there." Ame said will holding her head.
    "Oh yeah." She turned onto Heather."You go to the Truecolor for death one day from now, otherwise known as tomorrow. So how about you explore for awhile? Come now."



    That was....such a....no...Heather kept walking, kicking all the rocks and pebbles she could see. She looked up. She had heard singing...she thought she had.

    "So hardly perfect,
    So nothing works right,
    We're still here,
    And we have the world of our selves.
    "

    The person continued the words quite a few times. They then started "dunh, dunh, dunh,"-ing the song, whatever it was.
    Whoever it was noticed Heather. She, Heather saw, abruptly stopped.
    She looks like a...goddess, kind of. Such a...Heather realized, staring at the cherry brown hair bobbing some, the curls bouncing every which way.
    The girl grinned a huge grin and said, "Howdy, you!" in a sing-song voice, breaking her god-like aurora.
    "I-I'm Heather." she said without thinking for a moment.
    "Well, I'm Cressie." She slapped whatever she was sitting on, Heather hadn't figured out what it was exactly.
    "Huh?" A sleepy voice woke.
    "Get up, you!" Cressie slapped it again.
    It rose up to full height. It was a boy among his fifteens or so.
    "OH! This is Frew!" Cressie exclaimed, hand planting on his head. He just stared into nothing.
    "And we-!" she started. She lifted one hand and a small flamed jumped up."-Are partners in crime!"she finished.
    "That's what she says or calls it."Frew pointed. Cressie snuffed the flame out by placing her hand back on his head.
    "Who-WHAT are you?" Heather asked in a louder voice then she really wanted.
    "We-!" Cressie, always enthusiastic, "are so-called...MODERATORS!"
    "You forgot a sentence." Frew said, twitching a bit so.
    "Uh....I'm sure they have a very profound reason for it...Quack!"
    Heather gave her the, "OMG!-Weird!" look.

    Heather stared at Cressie and Frew from a few feet away. Ame had taken them aside, and was explaining to them Heather's (very strange, she thought) situation. She saw Frew nod, and Cressie grinned widely, eyes glittering.

    In a single moment, Cressie ran over to Heather, grabbing her by the shoulders.

    "That's so exciting!" she squealed. "Me and Frew will be happy to help!"

    "Speak for yourself," Frew muttered morosely.

    "What was that?" Cressie asked, giving Frew the death glare over her shoulder.

    Frew sweat dropped, and waved his hands in front of him. "I mean, I'm pretty excited too."

    Cressie let go of Heather and started walking. "So, let's gooooo!"

    Frew grabbed Cressie's collar. "Hold it right there."

    "Whaaaat nowwww?" Cressie asked. "I want to explore! Awuuuu."

    Surprisingly enough, Cressie actually looked chibi. Or maybe it was just all the anime Heather had watched before she left for this insane camping trip.

    "We have to get Quiz," Frew said, then he reached out for Heathers hand. "Lets go."



    Along the way, Cressie and Ame started singing some sick twisted version of the song Cressie was singing earlier;
    "Dead in her head,
    Soon to be dead outside,
    Just a rotting little corpse,
    Stuck through in the ground.
    "
    Heather heard nothing until a giant sound of...air? came towards everyone.
    "DUCK!" Ame said.
    "Quack." Cressie said and ducked as well as Ame, Frew, and Waas.
    Ame grabbed Heather and pulled her down.
    Heather turned just a bit and saw the wall they were right next to was flaming open a hole.
    "I-AM-SO-SORRY!" A voice greeted them.
    "Practicing again?" Cressie asked the stranger.
    The person stepped from where she was.(Maybe more of a run), and bowed her head, her black hair falling out of line. She rushed her head back up, her bangs now funny looking. She set them into their place.
    "Hi." She placed her hand out to Heather. "I'm Quiz. Oh, your human, ignore the outlandish name."
    "I-"
    "You are Heather, fell from a cliff into the Lifeless Sanctuary, taken to the Warashi, found out we are dead, taken to the Sakura Garden's, you're going to die in a day, met Cressie and Frew, and are now here astounded by how I know this." Quiz cocked her head.
    "How-"Heather was dumbfounded.
    "I am not going to tell you."
    "It's a secret." Ame told Heather, which Heather just remembered she was there along with Cressie, Frew, and Waas.
    "Think Tsubasa Resevoir Chronicles. Think Mokona Modoki. Think one-hundred and eight secret teqniuqes" Cressie advised her.
    "She doesn't actually have one-hundred and eight; I'm going more towards ten." Frew came in.
    "Same thing." Cressie looked over her shoulder, like she was telling this to a video camera, like this was all a TV show or movie.

    "OH!" Ame remembered. "Since we have a group of six, we can board the Lost Shore train and head over to, well, the Lost Shore."
    "That's a great idea." Quiz offered her opinion.
    "It will be a night to die for!"

    --------​


    Heather stared out the window on the train, while Ame and Waas argued about the actual speed of snowfall beside her.

    She perked up when they passed a dead tree.
    Then another.
    Then another.
    And then, it seemed, they drove right into a forest of dead trees. Heather pressed her hands against the window. Ame and Waas had fallen silent, and were staring out the window as well.

    "Why-"

    "Because the Truecolor is angry," Waas answered, as if reading Heathers mind. "All the land around her dies when it is... She's almost like the spirit of the Lost Shore, y'know?"

    "Oh! Like the fairy in Legend of Zelda is the spirit of the Springs!" Heather responded automatically.

    Ame and Waas stared at her blankly.

    "... Never mind."

    She glanced across the counter at Quiz and Cressie. They were sleeping, leaning on each other for support.

    Heather chuckled.

    And then the car beside them erupted.

    The windows shattered, and Heather screamed, flashing back to the car. Waas grabbed her again, quickly jumping through the window, wrapping his trench coat around them both to protect them from the glass shards.

    Ame climbed out of the window, Quiz and Cressie following.

    "Is everyone okay?" Heather asked, voice shaky.

    The five looked back at the train, which was now in ruins. The car had erupted and the train had come to a complete halt.

    They all looked at Heather.

    "Yes."



    What was that?" Quiz asked them as many were screaming in the background.
    "I don't actually know...well, we should be able to find out." Ame held her finger to her chin.
    "Sakura does not get the point!" Cressie cried out, waving on hand rapidly in front of her chest.
    "Oh, you read book eight?" Heather thought out loud.
    "Book 1-through-19." was Cressie's reply.
    "That's screwed. I need to read those, but they haven't come ou-"
    "YOU ARE NOT GETTING THE POINT!" Ame told the two.

    They set of towards the front-most part of the train, trying to find out what the heck made the whole train go, KAPLOOSH in the middle of two places. Hm...,Heather typed the words in her mind. Maybe the Truecolor did it.
    "Well DUH he did it." Quiz leaned towards her.
    'Wha-?!" Heather was once again astounded by this.
    "Mind reading is another thing. Only when the 'spirits' let me."
    "You are spirits."
    "No, only those who have 'departed' the Lost Shore and the Lifeless Sanctuary are considered spirits to us here."
    "We are here." Ame pointed while staring back.
    The front was a smoldered dust storm, sand like particles floating and dancing around in the air.
    "We found it." Heather added in her sarcastic comment.
    A giant wall of-flames, was it?- burst from the ground. It burned down what was surviving of the grass.
    Heather thought she had heard the words, "Let go, now, let death come" faint softly in her ears, but this must be what imagining things was called.
    "Ah." Ame looked towards the graying sky, reddish brown flecks floating. "You followed us, eh?"
    ------​



    Heather spun around just in time to see a young boy staggering from the ruins. He was much younger - about 6 or 7. Flecks of black gathered in his bright blonde hair. He looked up at Heather. His bright blue eyes glittered.

    His eyes... Are almost unreal...

    Someone was shouting beside her. But Heather didn't hear them.

    The young boy smiled, he raised a hand, holding it out to Heather, and shakily walked towards her.

    Then her world imploded around her. Darkness embraced her, pulling her from consciousness.

    ***

    "You stabbed her!" Ame screamed, tears forming in her eyes. "What the hell!"

    Ame caught Heathers body as it fell to the ground. Blood dribbled between her fingers from the knife wound.

    "It was the only way I could stop the ritual. The only way," Waas said, staring at the bloody knife.

    Cressie pulled Quiz close, embracing her.

    "The Killing Ritual. That scheming two-faced..."

    Ame stared at Heather.

    "Ah-ahhh... Waas!"

    The wound was closing. It was visibly callousing over beneath the ripped open shirt.

    ------​

    More bloody scenes to come. I hope you have enjoyed it so far, we slave work on it so much.

    This has been;

    ~Kila. & Manaphy1128
     
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    Wow. Still no CWTAP.
    :O

    I'm very excited that people may be are reading this. :]

    We will keep pumping it out until the story is complete! -punches air-

    KILA----
     
    Well, I'll be happy if I actually see more chapters 'cause this may be interesting if more people would actually care to read this. But this inspired me to make my story Ai Enkou. But I gotta hand it to you guys. You guys are young and talented like me:laugh: anyways nice job and keep posting.
     
    All I've got to say, either this thing was written on the reply box or you didn't check it before submission. Watch it with mechanics. >>;

    Oh, this part made me crack up.

    The person continued the words quite a few times. They then started "dunh, dunh, dunh,"-ing the song, whatever it was.
     
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