Lovesick, Homesick, Just Plain Sick

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    Oooh... here's a song I wrote a few days ago... I just remembered a friend of mine back in my home country... she was a best friend of mine and when I left to live here in the US, she kissed me goodbye and I haven't heard of her then... kind of a way of remembering her...

    Lovesick, Homesick, Just Plain Sick

    Intro:
    By myself, alone
    I yearn for your love, my dear
    Here in this cold night

    [Instrumental]

    Waking up one Sunday morning
    In the middle of nowhere
    Thinking of you and your kisses
    That you gave to me a year ago
    Thinking of that dream just last night
    I really thought it was real
    It really disappointed me to find out
    I?m all alone again

    Chorus:
    I?m lovesick, I?m homesick
    I?m out here in the middle of nowhere
    Thinking of you and home just makes me hurt
    Oh it makes me sick inside
    I?m lovesick, I?m homesick
    Just get me out of here
    I just need something real to feel

    Walking down one Sunday morning
    In the middle of nowhere
    Thinking of home and my bed
    Where I lay underneath the covers
    Thinking of dreaming tonight
    I really thought it was real
    It really disappointed me to find out
    I?m still walking

    [Chorus]

    Dreaming of home and you
    Hopeless dreams and starry nights
    Thinking of those bright blue eyes
    That bright yellow hair and that sweet smile
    Thinking of us at home
    Kissing our fears away near the warmth
    I really thought it was real
    It really disappointed me to find out?

    THAT I AM ALL ALONE

    [Guitar Solo]

    Bridge:
    Since when was the last time I saw you?
    I feel miserable to ever forget
    The time when you kissed me goodbye
    Oh I could feel my body
    Collapsing in this void in my mind

    [Chorus 2x]

    I?m lovesick?I?m homesick? and I?m just plain sick?
     

    Ooh, this is a song right? ^__^ I like it. I'm quite bad at constructive criticism, so please excuse my poor post ^^- ; It shows your emotions, how you truly miss your friend. Great job, OT! xD;; ~origin
     
    How did I miss this?! XD Sowwy I'm sooo late, but here I am now, ready to be enticed by people's literature! ^o^

    Hmmmmm...another song, eh? I've seen a lot of these around lately. ^^ Well, your song is as sweet as the poems you've written before, Niko. ^.~

    This song is so sweet, yet again spelling out the means and sacrifices of love, awwwwws. <3 Well, there's no spelling errors or anything like that from what I can see, so that's very good. ^______^

    *clings to Niko* Great work yet again buddy, I wuved it. <3

    ~Kelsey
     
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