MegaMan Comic!

Tsukasa

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    Ok all comments are cool i could always use improvement but like it says this is my first ever sprite comic
     
    Lol!!! It's soo funny! XD! I like the charectors and backround a lot, the intro was done with great humor, I think you might want to make the words a little bigger, it was kinda hard to read what they were saying. Anyway, amazing job! I really can't wait to see more! ^_^
     
    The fourth wall has already been broken... Characters need more emotion... Background is bad... humor is bad...

    But sprite usage is overall good, fix those problems, and you should be a good comic maker in no time.
     
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    I agree, the sprites need more emotion when speaking to each other, the humor isn't that bad, anyway, yes you do need to fix the charectors emotion, bit more humor, and fix their font speeches. Other than that your comic is fine ^_^
    Edited: thanks guys, i'm sorry I acted so stupid
     
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    Seriously, though, I was giving him critism on what he should and should not do
     
    Lizzie said:
    >_< seriously, backround doesn't matter, as long as the humor and sprites (actuely sprites don't really matter either in most cases) are okay then the comic is fine. I agree that the sprites need more emotion when speaking to each other, the humor isn't that bad, he said it was his first comic, you can't expect him to be amazing. Anyway, yes you do need to fix the charectors emotion, bit more humor, and fix their font speeches. Other than that your comic is fine ^_^
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    STOP WITH THE "It doesn't need background" THING! Sprite comics need to be SPRITE COMICS. Every single sprite comic to be called a sprite comic must have.

    A. Sprites (Duh)
    B. Backgrounds
    C. Some what of effects
    D. A plot/story/joke
    E. Text
    G. Text BOXES (Just a line drawn to text isn't enough)
    H. Some kind of feel in the charactors (Emotions)
    I. No stale or easily forgotten charactors (Unless for a cameo)

    Without these, it is not a Sprite Comic, it is a random useless jumble of sprites with lines and text. Take these into consideration, I don't consider this a sprite comic yet...

    Edit: I don't CARE if this is your first comic. Whether it's your first or your 121st I judge all comics EQUALLY
     
    I'm sorry, you're right, I thought backround didn't matter because i've seen comics with amazing plots and charectors, but really bad backround. Anyway I guess you know comics better than I do, i'm sorry, I'll try to be a bit more like you and a bit less stupid XD
     
    Lizzie said:
    I'm sorry, you're right, I thought backround didn't matter because i've seen comics with amazing plots and charectors, but really bad backround. Anyway I guess you know comics better than I do, i'm sorry, I'll try to be a bit more like you and a bit less stupid XD
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    I know what you mean...like "The primer chronicles" is a good example. But it has to have SOME kind of background. But you said it like it didn't need one
     
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