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Murder at The Peabody Mansion

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    Hi Me and Mistymix89 are writing this story together. Please R&R.

    Chapter 1: Finding Mrs. Peabody
    It was a warm summer night, the stars shone brightly in the sky, there was a cool breeze that floated peacefully through the land. Mrs. Peabody, an old rich looking lady went into the den. She went over to her 3 parrots that were squaking madly.
    "Hello there. Whats the matter?"
    "Danger!"
    "Danger!"
    "Danger!"
    "Where's the danger? Are you three playing a joke?" The three birds shook their heads. All of a sudden they heard the wooden stairs creaking and just ignored it until they heard a loud bang and the all jumped frantically.
    "Who's there?" Mrs. Peabody asked in a shaky voice. There was no answer but then there was a banging at the door.
    "Hold on you three, I'll be right back." She walked quickly into the darkness of the hallway. A few minutes later they heard a high-pitched scream that came from the dark and eerie hallway, and then a thud of somebody falling. Snap, Krackle, and Pop opened their eyes in terror. The clock stroke twelve.

    Meanwhile Tomcat, Kristy, and Starr were in biology class. Yesterday they had finished solving the mystery of a stolen grandfather clock that had been in the Prune family for generations.
    "I hate this class, it's so boring" Kristy complained.
    Starr was sitting there humming the tune from scooby-doo. Kristy and Tomcat were staring at her in a silent fit of giggles.
    "Who's singing?" the teacher yelled out. Tomcat and Kristy were trying not to laugh. When the teacher yelled Starr snapped back into concentration and had a guilty look on her face.
    "That's better" the teacher said. As she turned around to start writing on the chalkboard again, Starr started humming again. The teacher turned and threw the chalk at the class. This time Tomcat, Kristy, and Starr could not hold their laughter back because one annoying kid got hit on the nose with the chalk.

    Back at the house the parrots were squaking madly while somebody dragged the body into a compartment on the otherside of the den. The person came out and laughed a cruel, harsh laugh that made the parrots freeze. Just then the front door creaked slowly open and Ryan, Robert, and Ron stepped into the hallway. They heard the parrots squaking madly and looked surprised because they were always quiet. Just then the phone rang. They all stopped and looked at the phone in the dark eerie hallway. They tried to turn on the lights but the power was out. They all backed into the door and sank down to the floor. All of a sudden the lights began to flicker and they saw an outline of a person in the window. Just then Brrr and Freeze ran downstairs barking madly. Brrr and Freeze stopped and sniffed, then ran into the den and to the compartment and started scratching the door. Ryan went and got 3 flashlights and they all went to the door. They all looked inside and saw their mom with a knife in her chest. They screamed and Ryan got out his cell phone and called the cops.
     
    Yay, it's finally up! Keep on going! :D
     
    Ah, very good... I look forward for the next chapter. ^_^
    I hope the main characters try and solve the case themselves.
     
    Thanks Mistymix89 and Jedi Caroline for replying. The next chapter will be out soon. The main characters will help solve the mystery.
     
    Ch. 2: The Cops and Detectives

    The police arrived there in 5 minutes, as they approached the mansion a car pulled up and 2 brunettes came out of the car. Jenny and Brittany ran into the house immediately with worry and concern. They saw the cops around the compartment and they ran over to Ryan to find out why the cops were there.
    "Ryan, what's wrong?" Jenny asked in a shakey but stern voice.
    "Why are the cops here?" Brittany asked in a squeky voice.
    "Something terrible happened." Ryan muttered. Ron overhearing theur conversation screamed "Mom is dead." The two girls screamed then fainted. Ryan and Robert picked up Jenny and Brittany and took them upstairs and put them in bed. Ryan and Robert went back downstairs and heard that they were bringing in someone.
    "Who should we get?" One of the cops asked.
    "The three teenage detectives." The other cop replied.
    "I hope they're cute." Ron said.
    "What if they're all guys? That would suck for you." Robert said.
    "Good thinking, in case that does happen we'll kick them out of the house and make them get girl detectives." Ron said enthusiastically.
    "You got problems." Ryan said.
    "Excuse me but do you know who the detectives are that are coming?" Ron asked excitedly.
    "They will be here in 5 minutes." The cop answered hurriedly.

    Meanwhile Tomcat, Kristy, and Starr were called down to the main office.
    "Are we in trouble?" Kristy asked unertainly.
    "No your not in trouble, but you have a new case" the principal said.
    "Thankgod I thought we got in trouble" Starr exclaimed. They had to leave right away.

    Back at the house Ron was waiting at the front door for the detectives like a puppy waiting for his owners to come home. Just then a small helicopter landed on the front lawn and Ron started jumping up and down like a monkey.
    "They're here, thry're here, pretty girls here I come!" Ron shouted to everyone.
    "He's so ridiculous" everone said at the same time.
    "I heard that" Ron said accusingly. Tomcat, Kristy, and Starr get out of the helicopter and Ron ran over and grabbed Kristy's and Starr's hand.
    I'm glad that's not me. Tomcat thought happily.
    The cop came over and smacked Ron on the head and said "there detectives and not your girlfriends."
    "Hi, I'm glad you guys could come on such short notice" the cop hurriedly said.
    Oh, it's no problem at all, you got us out of biology." Starr explained.
    "May I ask what are your names?" Ron asked romantically. While Starr was saying her name, Kristy whispered "He is so creepy, are you sure we should take the case?" in Tomcat's ear.
    "I'm Kristy" Kristy said annoyed.
    "You don't need to know who I am." Tomcat said.
    "Just tell him Starr yelled at you.
    "Okay, fine I'm Tomcat." Tomcat said annoyed.
    "I have two girlfriends Kristy and Starr." Ron said jumping up and down.
    "We are not your girlfriends!" Kristy and Starr screamed at him at the same time.
    "Let's go back to science, I'm sick of this kid!" Kristy said as she dragged Tomcat and Starr.
    "But this will be more interesting then biology class." Tomcat said as she pulled away from Kristy.
    "I'm not a kid" Ron complained as he jumped up and down while waving his arms.
    "He looks like a kid to me" both brothers whispered to each other at the same time.
    "It's time for you guys to get to work now." the cop said annoyed.
    "Thank god" the three detectives said at the same time.
    "Come on, we'll show you where the murder took place" Ryan said waving his hand and walking up the steps.
    ~~~*~~~
    Hope you enjoyed this chapter. Next one will be out soon I hope.
     
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