My Angel...My Dear

Mari

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    Okay to start off, I just want to tell you guys that this would be the worst ficcy ever. This is just a one-shot in a certain character?s point of view about his beloveds. Just so you guys know, I was dared to do this fic in thirty minutes or less [ I should really stop taking dares -_-] and so it may be rushed. One more thing, this is my first time writing a fanfic so that?s why it?s going to be ugly.

    Anyways, here it is.
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    I didn?t know what happened but one night I have pondered on my two beloved. I couldn?t actually believe it. Who could?ve guessed? Me, the densest creature in the whole world?that?s what my friend told me, actually thinks about these things?

    Anyway?

    They both were one of my companions, each in different regions. My newer companion, though we?ve only known each other for a few months, had been special to me ever since I?ve met her as whenever I? am in the battle, I take one glance at her and I?m suddenly filled with buoyancy (not that I?m rarely like that, but you get the point). She is there when I need her and I? am always there for her whenever she needs me. My Dear was with me in the Houen Region. And she still is, but now we?re also with my Angel. She was only a beginner when we first met but she quickly improved. She also became a ?Coordinator? and she and her Pokemon, to me, are flawless?I?d bet they would in every single contest they enter.

    The other was?and still is my best friend. She and I first met in the most unusual situation and we didn?t get along much but after only a short while, we got along (we do constantly argue but it?s just a simple children?s imprudent arguments). I started liking her then and considered her as my Angel. We also have been together the longest.

    My Angel had been with me during my time in the Seikei Region, Orenji Island, and in Jouto. She and her sister are gym leaders in the Seikei Region, in Hanada City to be exact. And, though I don?t want to tell her, she is a really excellent trainer. Oh, and remembered that once, okay twice, in the Orenji Island, I showed my feelings towards her, but, thankfully no one noticed. You see, I got jealous of Jiigi and Dan since she showed fondness over them. Especially Jiigi.

    ?Absence makes the heart grow fonder? Sometimes I think it?s true, that?s why I think about her a lot of times after she left me. Other times I think of this idiom; ?Out of sight, out of mind?.

    I can?t really decide on which one is true but I needn?t think about now for she came to stay with us, much to my satisfaction. And she promised me she would stay forever. How long forever may possibly be. But, I, as an endorsement, will never let her go ever again.

    Now I, along with my other friends, am both with my darlings. Speaking of my darlings; the two of them are chatting happily, a bright smile on both of their faces. My Angel; her reddish hair down from its usual ponytail (her hair was wavy and she wore a red ribbon, only adding to her attractiveness), looked so divine with her aquamarine eyes twinkling brighter than the stars. She was wearing her yellow nightgown and she just looks so?so heavenly. Argh, even I can?t describe her beauty. And now, my Dear. Her brunette hair was down as well and she, again like my Angel, wore a ribbon to match her red nightgown. She glowed like Psyduck?s eyes when using Confusion! Her eyes were so deep?so dreamy?I can?t stop looking at it.

    How could I ever choose one of them? Both are too special to me. I shook the thoughts off my head and continued on gawking at them. Well, until I heard a familiar low voice calling me for dinner.

    ?Coming! Coming!? I yelled with a hint of annoyance in the tone of my voice.
    --
    As we ate dinner I, again couldn?t help but stare at the two striking creatures. Even when they are eating they still have the magnificent glow that glues my eyes to them. I sighed. I just realized, despite the fact that I think of them every single day they don?t know what I feel about them. Even I don?t know what I?m feeling for them. Was it just an endless admiration? Or was it?

    ?Love?

    Love. I can?t believe it. After years of avoiding it, I finally admit it. I fell in love?to both my Angel and my Dear. Some may think it?s quite impossible to find two ?true love-s? but I have done many things that seemed impossible to others so this was no exception.

    ?Hey,? The youngest and, in my judgment, the wits in our little group, called. He snapped his fingers in front of my face and continued on calling me. I finally averted my gaze at my darlings and glanced at him, my eyes expressing ennui and at the same time, curiosity.

    ?What do you want?? I asked as I tried to resist the urge to look back at them.

    ?You do know it?s rude to stare, do you?? He asked in a know-it-all tone. He had a huge, visible smirk on his face and I couldn?t help but blush.

    ?What?what do you me?mean?? I stammered. I felt my face heat up. As a matter of fact, I think I?m blushing head-to-toe! What if my Angel and my Dear were too observant? What if they can see right through me? Hundred questions popped in my mind and I could feel myself panicking. I quickly shook it off though, seeing the perplex expression plastered on his face.

    ?Why don?t you just admit it? You like my sister, don?t you?? He asked, a smirk popping out on his ace once again. His arms were folded across his chest and he looked at me with an ?I know all about it? look. I grimaced, but, knowing him all too well, I then shrugged. ?Shows what you know!? I scoffed.

    Okay, he was right but I can?t let him know that or he would never stop bothering me about it. Besides, I can?t let anyone know my secret. I turned my back on him and walked away. Hopefully, he wouldn?t think about it but from the look on his face I knew I would never hear the end of it. Never.
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    I finally got away from him after walking for a few minutes, but then I came face to face with another witty guy. The witty and flirty guy in our group. He, like Mr. Know-it-all, looked at me with the ?I know all about? look. I mentally scolded myself. Why was I so?so decipherable?! (I don?t even know that word!)

    I was afraid to ask but I couldn?t contain the curiosity. After all, maybe it wasn?t about me?and my beloveds. ?What is it?? I could feel my eyes twitching. I couldn?t help it! He was staring at me with the big old smirk!

    ?Oh, come on! I knew it,? He exclaimed happily. ?I knew you like her. That?s what all your ?fake? arguments are?flirt, flirt, and flirt!?

    ?Yeah right! Me, have a crush on little Miss Carrot head?? I sneered, trying to make it sound real. I let out a fake snort and turned my back on him, as what I did to Mr. Know-it-all.

    I walked away from him as well and walked to the deeper part of the woods. No one should be there.

    ?Right, no one except Pikachu and me.? I told my self, bringing assurance. As if on cue, after saying ?Pikachu?, the sleeping Pikachu?s eyes snapped open and he sprinted toward me.

    ?Hey there,? I said softly. ?I?m really sorry to wake you up, but I needed someone to talk to?someone who wouldn?t make fun of me.?

    I watched as Pikachu nodded and grinned as I heard him say that it was no trouble. His ears were up and he was looking at me intently. That?s just what I needed. ?You see Pikachu,? I started. ?I can?t seem to pick between?my Angel and my Dear.? I didn?t have to hide my special nicknames when talking to Pikachu. He was the only one who knew my deepest secrets.

    ?Pikachu?? He asked. He was wondering why I couldn?t pick.

    ?It?s just because they?re too special to me. I can?t stand to lose either one.?

    ?Pika pika chu!?

    ?I guess you?re right! Thanks Pikachu!? I exclaimed happily as I locked him in a tight embrace. ?I don?t know what I would do without you.?

    I then let go of him and watched him leave, I guessed he was still sleepy. I felt so incredibly light. Pikachu was truly right. I plopped down the grass and laid there, my arms positioned on the back of my head. My lips curved into a very bright grin as I watched the stars. I saw two figures sat beside me?one on each side, and my grin only widened more, if that was possible.

    ?Hey, Satoshi!? Both my Angel and my Dear greeted.

    ?Whatcha doing here?? Kasumi?my heavenly Angel asked as she gazed at the stars as well.

    ?Nothing. Just thinking.? I answered.

    ?Thinking?? She burst out laughing. ?That?s new, ne Haruka?? Kasumi joked as she continued on giggling.

    ?You bet!? Haruka, my exquisite Dear, agreed, giggling madly like Kasumi.

    I pouted and whined to the two, but continued on grinning?mentally of course. Everything could wait. Just as Pikachu said;

    ?I needn?t choose now.? Those were simple yet true words. I? am still young and I?m going to spend the rest of my life close to them while being the Pokemon Master. I would be able to choose by then. It was so easy and simple! Why didn?t I think of it?
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    Behind a huge tree, two boys and a certain Pikachu was chatting merrily. ?Pikachu, you did great!? Two boys cheered.

    ?I knew stubborn Satoshi would listen to Pikachu. You should've listened to me.? The older boy said as he gave his younger friend a proud look.

    ?I agree with you on that one. Especially since I am the one who told you that!? He cried annoyance filling his voice. "Anyway, who do you think would Satoshi pick?? The younger boy asked. He was really quite interested on his choice.

    ?Doubtless, his 'Angel'!? Takeshi exclaimed happily, enunciating the word Angel in a mocking tone.

    ?In your dreams! He?d obviously pick my sister?his precious Dear.? Masato said gleefully, smirking at Takeshi.

    The two of them laughed. Whatever choice Satoshi would make, they knew they would support him on it. After all, it was Satoshi's problem.
     
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    I liked this fic a lot. It seemed to be a real good feel-good fic to read, knowing that Satoshi doesn't pick any of them, and so everyone stays happy. I'm not the greatest fan of anime tie-ins, but the way you pulled it off, you could see that it was done with professionalism. Also, with Takeshi and Masato coming in, that's something shipping fics don't normally take into account. Well done. ^_^

    On the other hand, you could have done a lot more if you hadn't rushed it like you said so yourself. If you hadn't done it in thirty minutes in a dare, you could have drenched it with loads more emotion on Satoshi, and even Kasumi and Haruka's points of view. Since emotion is the key in shipping fics, it is vital that you put in as much as you can... or it won't seem as real.

    Still, you should be proud of this work. It's certainly not ugly, and makes for a delightful short read. ^_^
     
    Ang galing murin palang magsulat! 'Di ku alam yun
    (You're also good at writing! I didn't know that...)

    Anyway, nice fanfic. ^^
    Though I'm not a really good reviewer, all I can say is: "Keep up the great work!"
     
    Ako magaling? Hindi kaya. Ito parin pinaka panget na fic para sa akin. Pero salamat!
    [Me good? Not really. It's still the ugliest ficcy here in my opinion. But still, thanks! =] ]

    And, sankyuu MCD for the review. I know I could've put in more emotions but...>_> stupid dare. XD I also planned to make it a SaKa fic, but I just thought it would be better if no one gets pick. As yous said, everyone would be happy then.
     
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