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my first comic

XD XD XD lol its funny!, just the words are a bit unclear, i love the sprites you used though 8/10 ^_^ awsome job!
 
Your comics are not bad, in fact I like them. They are pretty funny. XD
 
XD THAT WAS SO FUNNY! XD XD XD LOL poor wigglybuff XD
 
Lots of improvement needed. If you want to make the sprites bigger. select them, and right click, and choose Stretch/Skew and set Horizontal and Vertical to the number you want them to be. (I always use 200). If you can, spend more time on make the effects more spritish.
 
XD Those are really funny. I'm looking forward to seeing more!
 
Don't make the sprites so big. They are fine the way they are when you put them in your comic before making them big. Pretty good comic once again though!
 
Oh my...poor eyes. Listen..."Super Latios" to be honest...those were horrible. But! So I wont be banned for bashing..I shall halp!

Let's use the 3rd comic as an example

1st PANEL!!!

This one is crazy...purple squigglys are NOT special effects...Not to mention there is NO PLOT why Are they fighting? Why are there 2 mewtwos? WHY WHY WHY!? I can see you manually resized. I know this forum isn't BASED on sprite comics but C'MON! ANYONE Who has paint needs to know the magic two keys CTRL and W. Comics really can't have subpixeling like this... for the barrier use a shield like protoman's in this sheet https://sprites.planet-megaman.com/sprites/mmbn/protoman/blues45sheet.gif For psychic use his purple triangle thing on the same sheet And for hyper beam https://sprites.planet-megaman.com/sprites/x/sigma/sigmax6head.gif use his beams. Oh noes the cliche line of "Yeah I killed him" think of A better saying dude ;>>. Message boxes weren't made to be custom...there's an easy toon in paint called "Rounded rectangle" It's a perfect shape for message boxes. And mewtwo's eyes...just colorfill it with red

For backgrounds...Again I say to go to deekman.cjb.net and go to backgrounds ;>>
 
someone is losing another rep point...btw great comic
 
In an ironic sort of way, these are the funniest comics I have ever read in my life.
 
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