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my first comic

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    well I have no idea what I'm gonna call it any ideas?
     
    you realy should work on that.later.
     
    k...wot should I improve?....the cruddy background or the speachbubbles or what?...
     
    Your comic is pretty fine to me. I dunno if you want to change the speech bubbles or not.
     
    I thought it was awesome!speech bubbles..the person whos talking first in each frame..put their speech bubble the highes,the second person to talk second highes ect.
     
    U know that Arctic Wish is my neighbor!?!
     
    HE can get u anything ask me and ill ask him to make u an egg and he can teach me then i can make them !

    EDIT by FG: This is spam, and has nothing to do with the topic of the thread, as does your previous post. Don't post in threads unless your post is relevant to the topic.

    --FG
     
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    k...what that has to do with my thread and on topic:blue..nah I like my cruddy speech bubbes
     
    Hey vaati! I just don't know how you can make these comics. Well, I could but I'm too lazy too... Well, just want to say hi again and say the comics are coming along great!
     
    well with a little effort(my cool little slave morty) and some brain power(klem...rea u know who I'm on about)these "comics" of mine are possible
     
    I thing it's comming along great! It's getting really funny too!
    "hey this isn't disneyland!" LOL!!! XD I really hope to see more, It's really funny!
     
    sure...time to use this "effort" that ppl talk about
     
    well I'm expericing a mental block so here's a subcomic to keep you all happy
    [PokeCommunity.com] my first comic
     
    Lol it's very funny! I think the scenes are awsome! I just get kinda mixed up with who's talking, you might want to add lines that connect to the bubbles and to whoever's talking so we know who is talking XD Anyway you did a great job! XD it's very funny, hope to see more soon ^_^
     
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