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my incredibly weird poetry

coco

Dancing in the Moonlight
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    this was for an English assignment, but i'm really bad at poetry, but then i started laughing at my own poetry, so...

    they're alphabet poems (you look at a letter, see what it reminds you of, and write about it) well, here goes!
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    C (The moon)
    Sitting in the sky
    Shining so brightly on this warm summer night
    Waiting, hoping
    For a star to pass by

    J (A fishing hook)
    Floating in the water
    Hanging with a worm
    Waiting for a stupid fish
    To eat it and die*
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    *sorry to all fish/animal lovers

    yea, it's weird :P , tell me what ya think!
     
    I wasn't trying to be mean, I was just expessing my opinion. It is something that's supposed to happen when you post your own works. "Take the ups with the downs and move on"
     
    lol i wasnt not replying to u :? *that confused me*

    i was just not replying even though i did but umm this is really confusing :/
     
    The first one is fairly good. If it was thought out it could fit quite well into a Petriarchian Sonnet. The second, though, seems rather rushed and sloppy. Not at all pleasent to read.
     
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