My life

[Klippy]

This is just a little poem I wrote while bawing today. My dad wouldn't get me another Xbox 360 (I've got two), so yeah. Misery? You know it.

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My dad didn't buy me
An Xbox 360 today
These tears
are merely a sign
that I need love

I want to die
Save me, PC
From my Hell called life

brb, gunna go play my Wii
And then ask for more money
Forget this
I'm going drinking

fyi, this is jokes. not srs.

 

[Fox♠]

I completely understand where you're coming from.

The words are clearly from your heart and the sad story has left me int ears.

6/5

 

[Logan]

Wow, dude, just wow. This really comes from the heart, and that's what matters. Let out all your angst, take a deep breath and scream! Then your dad should get you a new xBox.

 

[Hiidoran]

Just write out all your angst, dude.

Just write it all out.

There is beauty in pain, and you've definitely captured it... I guess.

 

[22sa]

That was love, Klippy. <3

 

[Pikachukid]

brb, gunna go play my Wii


fyi, this is jokes. not srs.

Ermmmmm...........Hilarious? I really liked that line. Was the internal rhyming intentional? I've never seen a poem with "internet talk" or whatever them youngsters are calling it these days.