my new sprites

[dakelland12]

here are my new revamps.

do you like them?

 

[doesn't matter]

Dude, I ain't trying to be harsh here, but they are terrible.

You should really think about your choice of colours - never use MSPaint's default one's.

 

[zak]

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sorry to say it but i agree with ray.z they are realy bad, those colors just dont suit the pokemon :t108:

 

[♥RanaRocket!☆]

yeah, you should take other already made pallettes from other pokemon if you have touble making your own.
i can just see, for instance, the mews head is purple, and its body is blue.
for a start there is little or no tonal difference between the colous.
but keep working at it and you'll improve! we all start somewhere!

 

[dakelland12]

i hope these are better sprites.

 

[Scyther]

the kakuna and metapod looks reasonable,
but really you have a poor choice of shading colours, i think no actual knowlege of the shading system...not trying to be hard but maybe spriting isnt for you? maybe mapping might be a more "Manageble" Choice, unless your really ready to actually learn to sprite, because no offence at all but re-colours are the easyist thing to do in spriting...if you cant do this what makes anyone think you can make totally new sprites from scratch that look reletivly decent?....

 

[dakelland12]

what do you mean by mapping?

 

[Scyther]

...editing pokemon ingame maps, the tilesets and everything are already their, so you cant mess them up really..

 

[dakelland12]

were shall i post them when i done?

 

[Scyther]

I guess, i dont think their is any rules about posting them in here?

 

[doesn't matter]

i hope these are better sprites.

Well from these one's you can definitely see improvement in your work, but they still aren't all that great.

However, you can improve at it - just keep practising and developing the necessary skills.

 

[dakelland12]

thanks for that every one

 

[Ryu-Chan]

here are my new revamps.

do you like them?

Those arent really revamps x.X;
Revamps are when you take an old spite(Gold/silver/crystal/red/blue/yellow)and add the new style coloring.
but those are kinda bad recolors,try and add shading.0/10