My Original Pokemon

[Umbrazard]

Here's where I'm going to post some sprites of my new Pokes. They are gonna be featured prominitley in my fic, so if you wanne learn more about them, read it. Coughadvertisingcough.

Anyway, this one's Whalru. I thank Chibi Pika for help with learning to shade correctly

I'll post more as follows.
BTW: Please don't steal them!
~Umbra

 

[Eliana]

*pokes it* XD!
It looks very cute, but I think you might want to fix the eyes and the tounge. Otherwise I love it, it's so cyuuteee XD

 

[Umbrazard]

Yeah, the eyes are supposed to be like that, to give him/her a slightly zoned out look, but the toung, I don't really like it. Does it look official at all?
~Umbra

 

[Steeleon]

It's cool, but sorry it doesn't look a bit official. I'm sure if you keep practicing you'll get there in no time! Kepp it up!

 

[Chibi Pika]

Hii Umbra! *Waves like idiot again* Yeah, I know what's wrong with the tongue XD And, uh...*tilts head at srite* I did that shading? Blah, I wanna fix it XP Oh, but one thing, he's awful simplistic, I know he's a starter, but still. Actually, I wanna know what his final looks like, cause I don't like him that much X3

~Chibi~

 

[armadilloHD]

Carbon based lifeforms can't walk with those stubby legs...

 

[Eliana]

Well it's his idea =3 It can be whatever he wants...

 

[Steeleon]

Carbon based lifeforms can't walk with those stubby legs...

You didn't just say that did you? -_- It's Pokemon, made-up. Since the last time I checked no human being can be basically unharmed when getting hit in the face with fire by a bad tempered creature.

 

[BallisticBlastoise]

I think it could use some unique features. Maybe for emx, look at scyther. It's a kinda like a grasshoper but it has blades and cool features. Try looking into other pokemon and you'll see what I mean.

 

[Umbrazard]

It's cool, but sorry it doesn't look a bit official. I'm sure if you keep practicing you'll get there in no time! Kepp it up!

::Crys:: ok, I din't think so, ::sigh:: I guess I have to work harder. A lot harder.

Hii Umbra! *Waves like idiot again* Yeah, I know what's wrong with the tongue XD And, uh...*tilts head at srite* I did that shading? Blah, I wanna fix it XP Oh, but one thing, he's awful simplistic, I know he's a starter, but still. Actually, I wanna know what his final looks like, cause I don't like him that much X3

Hi Chibi! ::Waves like the biggest idiot, the likes of which Chibi could never hope to match:: No, you didn't do the shading, you redid my sprite and I didn't exactly like it, so I redid it again based on your shading. He's supposed to be simplistic, I never wanted a really interesting starter for my water starter. I'll pm you what hiis finals look like later, I haven't made those sprites yet, but I've drawn em.

Carbon based lifeforms can't walk with those stubby legs...

He's hydrogen based......... No, he can't walk very well and neither can he swim very well, he's pretty useless in this form.

I think it could use some unique features. Maybe for emx, look at scyther. It's a kinda like a grasshoper but it has blades and cool features. Try looking into other pokemon and you'll see what I mean.

He's a whale, not much you can add at this point. Plus not much i wanna add. Later Ima put up Charagon which looks extremley official, and you'll see why.

Gsdausagifsd, sry angry strokes. I will get better at custom spriting I will!
~Umbra

 

[Umbrazard]

Ok, here;s a slightly revamped Whalru

If there's still problems please help. (Not w. like add more features cause his basic figure is nvr changing)

Also, here's a scan of his drawing and an original sprite

ANd here's Charagon w/ an Icon. Yes, I know his shading needs work but.. and I'm prolly gonna redo ths since it'sjust a modified preexisting sprite

Talk to me, tell me they suck, I don't care (just don't comment on Charagon, he's not really a custom sprite just a ,modify)
~Umbra

 

[black inferno]

Hey Umbrazad, it's better than the first one. I have a suggestion, maybe when you show your sprites you should have like stats next to them like what type of pokemon they are,and different types of attacks and stuff.

 

[NiNGi's Worst Nightmare]

Hmmm...Looks like it's made of pudding. Cool! But...the mouth is a little...meh.

 

[lugia65]

I like the charagon icon its really good

 

[skie]

ya nice very cute does it evolve??

 

[scolari]

haha i just want to poke it make an evo of it lol

 

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Nice! It looks like a Pokemon of Ditto family! It could be a Evo of Ditto ^^ Or a Pre-Evo maybe! Anyway keep working!

 

[Umbrazard]

Hmmm...Looks like it's made of pudding. Cool! But...the mouth is a little...meh.

Yeah, but I don't know what to do about it.

I like the charagon icon its really good

Thanks, The icon is my own but the sprite isn't.

ya nice very cute does it evolve??

Yep, this is my water starter it evolves twice (BTW, it's name is pronounced Whale-roo)

haha i just want to poke it make an evo of it lol

Soon as I get the time I will. Maybe I'll post the drawings of it's evos later

Nice! It looks like a Pokemon of Ditto family! It could be a Evo of Ditto ^^ Or a Pre-Evo maybe! Anyway keep working!

Nope, its my h20 starter, but I can see why u'd think that.

~Umbra

 

[skie]

What attacks can it learn?? but it is very cute

 

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Well, I meant that it looks like a Ditto cause it's like a gelly. :p I understood that is a whale with your draw! Btw Whalru is only a water Pokemon? Anyways when do you plan to put other sprites and Wharlu's evolves too?