My Poem about the Soul

[Star Crossed Dreamer]

I just wrote this poem. It's about the soul. It may be deep to some of you and to others it may not be. Just know that this poem comes from my heart and my own soul.


The Soul
What is the soul?
Does anyone truly know,
the depth of the soul?
It's been said,
that the soul has many faces.
Darkness, light, empty, full.
The soul has many faces,
so which is the true face,
of the soul?
To be honest,
there is no one true face,
no one true soul.
For if all souls,
were one and the same.
How could anyone say,
that they have a soul to this day?

That's the end of my poem. I hope you all like it! :D

 

[Psychotic_Demon]

it was pretty good. the only complaint i have is that you put little cruvy thingies (i forget what their called, XD) in some places where you dont need them. but i still like it.^^

 

[Monzae]

wow....it really makes me think about what the soul is....great job!

and dark_espeon, do you mean commas? (,)?

 

[Psychotic_Demon]

XD yeah! i`m deadbrained today....

 

[Kyosuke]

It was a good poem, but it seems that there is too much to confuse the reader (well me anyway), and it took a few times to actully understand what your talking about.

It really does make you wonder sometimes, what is the "soul"? And even more, "whats the meaning of life?" Enough of my rambling XD, it was good.

 

[Psychotic_Demon]

yeah... really good... i like it.... people say i have a broken soul... dunno why though...

 

[Monzae]

eep O_O a broken soul? I wonder what that is/is like ;O I think mine's on the way to being broken though x{

 

[Star Crossed Dreamer]

Thanks for the nice comments you three. I'm glad you liked it. The commas I put there because sometimes they are used like that I believe. I hope more people read thi! :D

 

[RAYQVASA]

I like your poem Ricky!Great job! *smiles* I don't know what ppl think about my soul....I think I'm a strange person...

 

[Lady of the Shadows]

I have seen the poem before Ricky. As i said before ti made me think about a lot of things. Over all it is a good poem.
As for my soul the only comment i got it that it might be a dark or confused soul. Though i never realy take note to what others tell me. That realy confuse me then or any one. For there will always be people that like you and see your light and then others that hate you and only see the dark.