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My poem

Peach

Finnish Love ♥
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    My Love

    My love is like glass - So see-through but fragile
    My love is like a flower - So blooming but weak
    My love is like a bird - So free but captive
    My love is like the spring - So sunny but cold
    My love is like fire - So warm but cutting
    My love is like sea - So beatiful but dangerous
    My love is like me - So real but so fake
    At the same time
     
    Oh Peach, this poem was wonderful! =3 I really enjoyed it because of the originality. <3 You used simple feelings or symbols in life and reflected a meaning of love off of it. ^____^ Awesome work Peach, me = love it. XD *stamps the "Kelsey Seal of Approval" on Peach's poem*

    ~Kelsey
     
    Awww, thank you very much! That is so sweet thing to say ^_______^
    I apperciate your opinion.
     
    I loved it ^^, great ways to use the good/bad sides of usual good things such as the ocean and fire and relating it to love, while at the same time keeping it simple and thought provoking at the same time.

    Great job ^^.
     
    Peach said:
    My Love

    My love is like glass - So see-through but fragile
    My love is like a flower - So blooming but weak
    My love is like a bird - So free but captive
    My love is like the spring - So sunny but cold
    My love is like fire - So warm but cutting
    My love is like sea - So beatiful but dangerous
    My love is like me - So real but so fake
    At the same time
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    Wow, Peach. That poem really touched me. Great work.^^. I can't wait to see more.
     
    MegaDitto said:
    Wow, Peach. That poem really touched me. Great work.^^. I can't wait to see more.
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    Awww, thank you so much! I'm so happy if you like!

    LiquidThunder said:
    I loved it ^^, great ways to use the good/bad sides of usual good things such as the ocean and fire and relating it to love, while at the same time keeping it simple and thought provoking at the same time.

    Great job ^^.
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    Thanks LiquidThunder, I'm happy to hear your opinion^^

    Rai said:
    Wow! I really liked that poem!!
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    Thanks Rai!!!! I'm happy if you liked my poem!


    SalamanceKing said:
    Nice poem I like it alot. (gets ya thinkin)
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    Thanks SalamanceKing, I'm glad that you liked it^^
     
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