Toothache
Deepsea Toothache
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- Age 43
- Somewhere in the UK...
- Seen Feb 2, 2008
Ok, I know I kinda didn't post further chapters, but that's cos real life stuff prevented me having enough time to work on this. Now, things are easier, so it'll be a breeze.
So anyway, welcome back to this, my second attempt at a fanfic, Of Power and Influence. I've got the prologue and first couple of chapters done now, and will be expanding on this as I work through it. It's a bit of a slow start, but it'll be worth it.
I've cut down on some of the harsher themes I was going to deal with here to make it acceptable for PG-13, but it won't be an easy trip.
Prologue - In need of some R and R
"Ready, Private Hobbs?" said the sergeant. He looked carefully over the young man's face, which seemed to hold concern and doubt upon it. However, as soon as the sergeant spoke to him, he immediately stood to attention, not showing any signs of his previous fears.
"Sir, yes, sir!" came the eager-sounding response from Private Terry Hobbs. Terry knew this was going to be the toughest test he'd faced so far since joining the Kanto Army.
"That's what I like to hear, private. I'll take your Pokeballs for this test, if you don't mind."
"Sir?" Terry wasn't expecting that. He knew this was an obstacle course where you had to avoid Pokemon in order to get to the end, but he had always had his Pokemon with him in case he needed them. How was he supposed to do this now?
"This is a test of your own physical ability, not that of your Pokemon, private. I'll take good care of them for you, don't you worry." The sergeant said that last line with a slight level of sarcasm, which was duly noted by Terry. Reluctantly, Terry unhooked the pair of Pokeballs from the belt at his side, and handed them over to the sergeant.
"That's it. Now stand over there and get ready."
The sergeant had pointed to a gate, which lifts up and down. Terry walked over cautiously, looking over the area in front of him carefully. It was a mock-up of a war zone, with damaged buildings and broken fences and other
obstacles in his way. He could also see the target, a few hundred yards in front of him, where Terry was supposed to run to complete this task. He couldn't see any sign of an opposing trainer, or their Pokemon either. Ambush, was the first thought on his mind, and Terry steeled himself for what was about to come.
The sergeant noted the determination on the private's face, and gave the order.
"Go, go, go!" he shouted. At the same time, the barrier that was in front of Terry raised, and Terry immediately ran forward, eyes darting left and right for the first sign of anything moving.
He spotted something almost immediately coming up on his right, a Pokemon he identified as a Houndour. Seemingly from nowhere, a voice shouted to the Pokemon "Houndour, Ember attack!" With that, Terry immediately started to roll, as a small flame immediately appeared in the dog-like Pokemon's mouth, growing for a moment before it was shot out at Terry. Thankfully he timed the roll right, and the jet of flame shot over where his head was. Not stopping to let the Houndour have a second shot, Terry pressed forward.
"Vaporeon, Ice Beam!" The voice this time came from above, and as Terry passed near a run-down building he barely noticed as the beam of ice shot down from an upstairs window. Acting on instinct, Terry leaped to the side as the beam narrowly skimmed his arm. He risked a glance back, there was no sign of the Houndour that attacked him earlier, but that worried Terry more as he did not know where it was.
"Tangela, Vine Whip!" This time the shout was from ground level, and Terry was immediately surprised by something in front of him. Had he not been looking back he would have noticed the small pile of tangleweed was actually the Pokemon Tangela, trying to conceal itself as tangleweed. On command, the Tangela immediately shot out a pair of its many vines, wrapping themselves around Terry's right arm and right leg. The Tangela stood up, bracing itself to hold the private in place, stopping him from reaching his goal.
With his free arm, he grabbed hold of the vine on his leg, and pulled at it in order to release it. Tangela vines were stronger than they looked, and it took all of his might to get the vine loosened enough to free his leg. He threw the vine back at the Tangela, which distracted it enough for him to free his arm. After that, he ran past the Tangela, leaping another attempt by the Pokemon to bind his legs as he passed.
"Kecleon, Slash attack!" A Kecleon? They don't usually appear in Kanto, thought Terry. He looked around for a moment, slowing down in order to receive a stealth attack. He knew Kecleon had the ability to make themselves invisible, apart from the pattern on their chest. It didn't take Terry long to notice something that reminded him of what the Kecleon's pattern usually looked like, which was trying to conceal itself along an alleyway to his left. Terry smiled to himself, they are getting easier towards the end, he thought.
He made his way along the right-side of the road, relaxing a little as he knew where the Kecleon was... or so he thought. Leaping from the side of the building, something appearing mid air as Terry was struck on the chest by a Kecleon's slash. What the... two Kecleons? he thought. Distracted, he didn't notice another Pokemon appearing from behind, ready to strike.
"Smeargle, Double-Edge!" The Smeargle leaped up and charged into Terry, full force into his back, almost knocking him over. The Smeargle looked a little dazed after charging so hard at him, but stood up after a few seconds ready for the next order. Terry was completely confused for the moment, but noticed the goal wasn't too far off.
"Kecleon, Wrap him. Don't let him escape!" The Kecleon shot out his long tongue, grabbing Terry once again by the leg. Terry risked a look behind to see what at hit him, even though he had heard the attack order for the Smeargle. It suddenly dawned upon him - the Smeargle had painted the Kecleon pattern on a wall nearby, and the early order was meant to make people see the fake. Now that he thought about it, Terry noticed it was a little too obviously positioned... but now wasn't the right time to be distracted. Terry snapped back into focus, and grabbed hold of the Kecleon's tongue, pulling hard at it in order to release himself. After a few seconds he managed to pull the tongue away from his leg, and he started to move forward again, starting into a run, and side-stepping the Kecleon's tongue for a second time.
This time, both Kecleon and Smeargle seem to be following him. He was urged forward by this, knowing he was nearly there. Unfortunately, he seemed to be running into a trap. The Houndour and Vaporeon from earlier stood in front of him, apparently having run ahead without him noticing. With the pair behind him, and two in front of him, and buildings either side, Terry seemed to be trapped. He stopped running, and readied himself for the next attack, approaching the pair in front of him cautiously.
"Finish it. Houndour, Vaporeon, attack!" Once again, the Vaporeon let loose a stream of ice from his mouth, aiming straight forward to hit the private. At the same time, the Houndour charged up its firey Ember attack and fired it forward. Terry had expected this, and immediately sprung forward into a midair somersault, letting both attacks collide with each other and disappear in a flash of ice melted by flame. This flash also distracted all the Pokemon there, which gave Terry enough time to run past both the Vaporeon and Houndour and reach the goal.
The shrill sound of a whistle was heard, and the Pokemon immediately stood down. Terry breathed a heavy sigh of relief, glad to be out of that situation in one piece. The sergeant walked from out of a nearby building, holding some sort of microphone in one hand, which Terry assumed was for giving the orders for the Pokemon, and a stopwatch in the other.
"Hey, well done, private! That's a new course record."
Terry stood attention and beamed. "Thank you, sir."
"At ease, private. Here's your Pokemon back." The sergeant handed both of the Pokeballs back to Terry, who was glad to have them back. He attached them both to his belt again, and as he looked up he saw the sergeant addressing his Pokemon.
"You did good guys. He was a tough customer alright. Ok, everyone back to your places, one more to go." All the Pokemon run off to whatever hiding places they had in the obstacle course. As Terry walked out of the large room, the sergeant watched him go and smiled. "Oh yeah, he'll be a fine soldier. Alright, next!"
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Terry leaned back in his cabin bed and smiled, pleased with himself. Of course, he was glad to be out of there in one piece, apart from the cuts he recieved from the Kecleon's slash, which the doctor said would take a few weeks to heal. He glanced down at his chest, looking at the bandaged that were placed across them, wincing slightly. It didn't hurt straight away, or even as he recieved it, but the longer it was there, the more it seemed to ache.
Entering the barracks was Corporal Matt Warren, the postman of the Kanto Army. He placed several letters around the barracks, on the top of the soldier's bunks, and handed one to Terry as he passed.
"Mail for ya." he said, then carried on handing the rest of the letters out. Terry looked at the handwriting, and immediately recognised it. He opened the letter and read it to himself.
It read:
Dear Terry
How are you? I've got some good news, they finally hired me at ONBS! I'm gonna be working with someone called Marcia as a camerawoman, but hey it's a start. In the meantime, Mom's not doing so great. The doc has said she'll be ok, but she doesn't look it. He's got her on some pills or something, I dunno if they're helping. Mom's talking about getting some sort of herbal treatment, said the doc doesn't know what he's talking about. I just hope she pulls though. Mekka's doing fine, he's looking after Mom when I'm not around. I've just been so busy lately, I've not always had time to be there.
Anyway, write back soon. When are you gonna visit?
Love, Helen.
"Who's Helen?" piped up a cheeky looking face. This face belonged to one Private Rod Surge. It was well known he was the nephew of the great war hero Lt Surge, who now ran the gym at Vermillion City. As such, he often got a hard time, but that was because he was expected to do well. Rod however would rather be goofing off, and didn't seem interested much in pursuing a military career.
Terry folded up the letter and put it away in a drawer near the bunk. "She's my sister. She lives out in Orre, working as a journalist."
"Is she pretty?" he inquired, hopefully.
"Rod, I'm not setting you up with my sister. Anyway," Terry smiled, "she'd probably eat you alive."
Rod sighed. He knew he didn't have the best of luck with girls, which made him more determined to have one, and perhaps a little desperate.
"Besides, Mom's really sick and Helen's keeping busy, so she's almost all alone. Apart from her Skitty."
"What's a Skitty?"
"It's a cat Pokemon," said Terry bluntly, as if everyone knew that. "Didn't you know that? It was part of our Pokemon ecology lessons, 'Wildlife of Hoenn'."
"I think I missed that lesson." Rod shrugged.
"Doesn't surprise me." Terry frowned.
"Anyway, why not go see her, if you're that worried? I'm sure you've got a few days leave booked up, make the most of them. I'll even come with you, keep you company, what do you say?"
"I'd rather get bitten by an Onix than spend time with you." Terry grinned.
"Hey, I'm not that bad, am I?" Rod protested.
"But you have got a point, I've not seen Mom since she moved to Orre."
"Well there you go. I'll go have a word with the duty sergeant, shall I? Save you the trouble of getting up. Besides," he gestured to the bandages on Terry's chest, "don't you need some R and R anyway?"
Terry looked down at the bandages for a moment, then back up at Rod. "Yeah, maybe. Alright, you talked me into it. I just hope you behave yourself."
"Trust me." Rod smirked.
"I do hate it when you say that..."
So anyway, welcome back to this, my second attempt at a fanfic, Of Power and Influence. I've got the prologue and first couple of chapters done now, and will be expanding on this as I work through it. It's a bit of a slow start, but it'll be worth it.
I've cut down on some of the harsher themes I was going to deal with here to make it acceptable for PG-13, but it won't be an easy trip.
Prologue - In need of some R and R
"Ready, Private Hobbs?" said the sergeant. He looked carefully over the young man's face, which seemed to hold concern and doubt upon it. However, as soon as the sergeant spoke to him, he immediately stood to attention, not showing any signs of his previous fears.
"Sir, yes, sir!" came the eager-sounding response from Private Terry Hobbs. Terry knew this was going to be the toughest test he'd faced so far since joining the Kanto Army.
"That's what I like to hear, private. I'll take your Pokeballs for this test, if you don't mind."
"Sir?" Terry wasn't expecting that. He knew this was an obstacle course where you had to avoid Pokemon in order to get to the end, but he had always had his Pokemon with him in case he needed them. How was he supposed to do this now?
"This is a test of your own physical ability, not that of your Pokemon, private. I'll take good care of them for you, don't you worry." The sergeant said that last line with a slight level of sarcasm, which was duly noted by Terry. Reluctantly, Terry unhooked the pair of Pokeballs from the belt at his side, and handed them over to the sergeant.
"That's it. Now stand over there and get ready."
The sergeant had pointed to a gate, which lifts up and down. Terry walked over cautiously, looking over the area in front of him carefully. It was a mock-up of a war zone, with damaged buildings and broken fences and other
obstacles in his way. He could also see the target, a few hundred yards in front of him, where Terry was supposed to run to complete this task. He couldn't see any sign of an opposing trainer, or their Pokemon either. Ambush, was the first thought on his mind, and Terry steeled himself for what was about to come.
The sergeant noted the determination on the private's face, and gave the order.
"Go, go, go!" he shouted. At the same time, the barrier that was in front of Terry raised, and Terry immediately ran forward, eyes darting left and right for the first sign of anything moving.
He spotted something almost immediately coming up on his right, a Pokemon he identified as a Houndour. Seemingly from nowhere, a voice shouted to the Pokemon "Houndour, Ember attack!" With that, Terry immediately started to roll, as a small flame immediately appeared in the dog-like Pokemon's mouth, growing for a moment before it was shot out at Terry. Thankfully he timed the roll right, and the jet of flame shot over where his head was. Not stopping to let the Houndour have a second shot, Terry pressed forward.
"Vaporeon, Ice Beam!" The voice this time came from above, and as Terry passed near a run-down building he barely noticed as the beam of ice shot down from an upstairs window. Acting on instinct, Terry leaped to the side as the beam narrowly skimmed his arm. He risked a glance back, there was no sign of the Houndour that attacked him earlier, but that worried Terry more as he did not know where it was.
"Tangela, Vine Whip!" This time the shout was from ground level, and Terry was immediately surprised by something in front of him. Had he not been looking back he would have noticed the small pile of tangleweed was actually the Pokemon Tangela, trying to conceal itself as tangleweed. On command, the Tangela immediately shot out a pair of its many vines, wrapping themselves around Terry's right arm and right leg. The Tangela stood up, bracing itself to hold the private in place, stopping him from reaching his goal.
With his free arm, he grabbed hold of the vine on his leg, and pulled at it in order to release it. Tangela vines were stronger than they looked, and it took all of his might to get the vine loosened enough to free his leg. He threw the vine back at the Tangela, which distracted it enough for him to free his arm. After that, he ran past the Tangela, leaping another attempt by the Pokemon to bind his legs as he passed.
"Kecleon, Slash attack!" A Kecleon? They don't usually appear in Kanto, thought Terry. He looked around for a moment, slowing down in order to receive a stealth attack. He knew Kecleon had the ability to make themselves invisible, apart from the pattern on their chest. It didn't take Terry long to notice something that reminded him of what the Kecleon's pattern usually looked like, which was trying to conceal itself along an alleyway to his left. Terry smiled to himself, they are getting easier towards the end, he thought.
He made his way along the right-side of the road, relaxing a little as he knew where the Kecleon was... or so he thought. Leaping from the side of the building, something appearing mid air as Terry was struck on the chest by a Kecleon's slash. What the... two Kecleons? he thought. Distracted, he didn't notice another Pokemon appearing from behind, ready to strike.
"Smeargle, Double-Edge!" The Smeargle leaped up and charged into Terry, full force into his back, almost knocking him over. The Smeargle looked a little dazed after charging so hard at him, but stood up after a few seconds ready for the next order. Terry was completely confused for the moment, but noticed the goal wasn't too far off.
"Kecleon, Wrap him. Don't let him escape!" The Kecleon shot out his long tongue, grabbing Terry once again by the leg. Terry risked a look behind to see what at hit him, even though he had heard the attack order for the Smeargle. It suddenly dawned upon him - the Smeargle had painted the Kecleon pattern on a wall nearby, and the early order was meant to make people see the fake. Now that he thought about it, Terry noticed it was a little too obviously positioned... but now wasn't the right time to be distracted. Terry snapped back into focus, and grabbed hold of the Kecleon's tongue, pulling hard at it in order to release himself. After a few seconds he managed to pull the tongue away from his leg, and he started to move forward again, starting into a run, and side-stepping the Kecleon's tongue for a second time.
This time, both Kecleon and Smeargle seem to be following him. He was urged forward by this, knowing he was nearly there. Unfortunately, he seemed to be running into a trap. The Houndour and Vaporeon from earlier stood in front of him, apparently having run ahead without him noticing. With the pair behind him, and two in front of him, and buildings either side, Terry seemed to be trapped. He stopped running, and readied himself for the next attack, approaching the pair in front of him cautiously.
"Finish it. Houndour, Vaporeon, attack!" Once again, the Vaporeon let loose a stream of ice from his mouth, aiming straight forward to hit the private. At the same time, the Houndour charged up its firey Ember attack and fired it forward. Terry had expected this, and immediately sprung forward into a midair somersault, letting both attacks collide with each other and disappear in a flash of ice melted by flame. This flash also distracted all the Pokemon there, which gave Terry enough time to run past both the Vaporeon and Houndour and reach the goal.
The shrill sound of a whistle was heard, and the Pokemon immediately stood down. Terry breathed a heavy sigh of relief, glad to be out of that situation in one piece. The sergeant walked from out of a nearby building, holding some sort of microphone in one hand, which Terry assumed was for giving the orders for the Pokemon, and a stopwatch in the other.
"Hey, well done, private! That's a new course record."
Terry stood attention and beamed. "Thank you, sir."
"At ease, private. Here's your Pokemon back." The sergeant handed both of the Pokeballs back to Terry, who was glad to have them back. He attached them both to his belt again, and as he looked up he saw the sergeant addressing his Pokemon.
"You did good guys. He was a tough customer alright. Ok, everyone back to your places, one more to go." All the Pokemon run off to whatever hiding places they had in the obstacle course. As Terry walked out of the large room, the sergeant watched him go and smiled. "Oh yeah, he'll be a fine soldier. Alright, next!"
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Terry leaned back in his cabin bed and smiled, pleased with himself. Of course, he was glad to be out of there in one piece, apart from the cuts he recieved from the Kecleon's slash, which the doctor said would take a few weeks to heal. He glanced down at his chest, looking at the bandaged that were placed across them, wincing slightly. It didn't hurt straight away, or even as he recieved it, but the longer it was there, the more it seemed to ache.
Entering the barracks was Corporal Matt Warren, the postman of the Kanto Army. He placed several letters around the barracks, on the top of the soldier's bunks, and handed one to Terry as he passed.
"Mail for ya." he said, then carried on handing the rest of the letters out. Terry looked at the handwriting, and immediately recognised it. He opened the letter and read it to himself.
It read:
Dear Terry
How are you? I've got some good news, they finally hired me at ONBS! I'm gonna be working with someone called Marcia as a camerawoman, but hey it's a start. In the meantime, Mom's not doing so great. The doc has said she'll be ok, but she doesn't look it. He's got her on some pills or something, I dunno if they're helping. Mom's talking about getting some sort of herbal treatment, said the doc doesn't know what he's talking about. I just hope she pulls though. Mekka's doing fine, he's looking after Mom when I'm not around. I've just been so busy lately, I've not always had time to be there.
Anyway, write back soon. When are you gonna visit?
Love, Helen.
"Who's Helen?" piped up a cheeky looking face. This face belonged to one Private Rod Surge. It was well known he was the nephew of the great war hero Lt Surge, who now ran the gym at Vermillion City. As such, he often got a hard time, but that was because he was expected to do well. Rod however would rather be goofing off, and didn't seem interested much in pursuing a military career.
Terry folded up the letter and put it away in a drawer near the bunk. "She's my sister. She lives out in Orre, working as a journalist."
"Is she pretty?" he inquired, hopefully.
"Rod, I'm not setting you up with my sister. Anyway," Terry smiled, "she'd probably eat you alive."
Rod sighed. He knew he didn't have the best of luck with girls, which made him more determined to have one, and perhaps a little desperate.
"Besides, Mom's really sick and Helen's keeping busy, so she's almost all alone. Apart from her Skitty."
"What's a Skitty?"
"It's a cat Pokemon," said Terry bluntly, as if everyone knew that. "Didn't you know that? It was part of our Pokemon ecology lessons, 'Wildlife of Hoenn'."
"I think I missed that lesson." Rod shrugged.
"Doesn't surprise me." Terry frowned.
"Anyway, why not go see her, if you're that worried? I'm sure you've got a few days leave booked up, make the most of them. I'll even come with you, keep you company, what do you say?"
"I'd rather get bitten by an Onix than spend time with you." Terry grinned.
"Hey, I'm not that bad, am I?" Rod protested.
"But you have got a point, I've not seen Mom since she moved to Orre."
"Well there you go. I'll go have a word with the duty sergeant, shall I? Save you the trouble of getting up. Besides," he gestured to the bandages on Terry's chest, "don't you need some R and R anyway?"
Terry looked down at the bandages for a moment, then back up at Rod. "Yeah, maybe. Alright, you talked me into it. I just hope you behave yourself."
"Trust me." Rod smirked.
"I do hate it when you say that..."