Outlawlao494 Spirite Gallery

[Outlawlao494]

my spirites:

 

[Webmaster Tyler]

Those are pretty good!!! ^-^

 

[.::Tsunami::.]

yeah i like them
there so cool
keep up the
good work.

 

[Outlawlao494]

thankyou u guys i have more too I 'll put in later
I also make custom avatars like mine if you want post the following info
trainer spirite:
pokemon:(one or two)

 

[Alex_]

Just to give you a heads up,please have at least four words per post.

Anywho,I guess i'll be the only one to give a decent rating. To be frank,they're pretty bad.

On the first one the wing and tail are not shaded properly. There is no outline period in some spots such as the tail,also the outline is black. >< Black outlines=bad. Just color the outline a darker color of the color you're using. Plus,the fusing with the head is very...un-clean to say the least. It's roughly attached and makes the fusion look like the head is part of the chest.

The others are pretty much poorly shaded and outlines. As I said,don't outline in black,it makes the sprite look bad and n00bish. Just practice outlining and shading in paint or something and you should improve,I know I did. As corny as it may sound,practice does make perfect.

I hope I helped you,good luck!

 

[Outlawlao494]

thanks It was my first try though