~Overdose~

[xDaRK_SuiKuNx]

I'm addicted to you.
Strung out on your presence.
Intoxicated by your very being.
I'm dependent of you.
So I cling to you.
With you, i'm floating. High.
Without you I'm in withdrawal.
I can't stop.
I don't wan't to stop.
I've overdosed on you.
Rehabilitation isn't an option.
I don't just want you anymore,
I need you to keep going.
You're not a quick fix,
You're the only fix.
You're tantalizing to my senses,
Soothing to my nerves,
Mesmerizing to behold,
And appealing to my very core.
I can't say "No more,"
That would be a lie.
I have to have that feeling,
The one I get when i'm with you.
The one that makes my pain go away
And drowns me in you...​

 

[Erik]

Wow, beautiful choice of words.. you have such a talent with poetry. The details reallly embedd images in the mind.

 

[xDaRK_SuiKuNx]

thanks for posting, it means more than you think ^ ^ a lot of people read, but it really is important when you know someone thought enough to reply, so thanks a lot..

 

[Kyosuke]

From all the poetry that I have seen from you, this one is my favourite ^^. Its pretty clear what the mesage is when you first get into it, and it looks like from reading this, you don't hold back anything and just let everything "hang on the line" so to speak, with the deep choice of words to describe how you feel, and the overall general feeling you get after reading, great job on this.

 

[xDaRK_SuiKuNx]

thanks, it was my favorite to write, personally ^ ^;this may sound lame, but when i wrote it..i kinda just 'let it pour', so to speak XD glad you liked it. ^ ^

 

[xDaRK_SuiKuNx]

thanx XD no comments or anything?

 

[Dignity]

^^; It's a really good poem, Matt-kun. Beautiful choice of words, as well.

 

[xDaRK_SuiKuNx]

thanks julia-chan [pokes] it was wierd writing this, cuz i had to compare feelings for someone to a drug. it was really bizarre how it all came from one word: addictive. O.o;

 

[Natsuki]

I'm addicted to you.
Strung out on your presence.
Intoxicated by your very being.
I'm dependent of you.
So I cling to you.
With you, i'm floating. High.
Without you I'm in withdrawal.
I can't stop.
I don't wan't to stop.
I've overdosed on you.
Rehabilitation isn't an option.
I don't just want you anymore,
I need you to keep going.
You're not a quick fix,
You're the only fix.
You're tantalizing to my senses,
Soothing to my nerves,
Mesmerizing to behold,
And appealing to my very core.
I can't say "No more,"
That would be a lie.
I have to have that feeling,
The one I get when i'm with you.
The one that makes my pain go away
And drowns me in you...​

Awwwwwwwwwwws! <3~~~ I love how you related a drug addiction to love. XD Quite ingenius indeed. ^_______^ *huggles and snuggles* This poem is so nice to read...I'll go and read it again! XD

I only saw one spelling error. That was in the sixth line. You just forgot to capitalize "I'm." ^^ I know, I'm a tad picky. XD

Awsome job Mattie, me wubs it. ^^ *stamps the "Kelsey Seal of Approval" on Matt's poem* <3~~~

~Kelsey