Eliana
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It just has to be scary right? in that case I'l get started!
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Pok?Community Halloween Party '04 Writing Competition
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oni flygon
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Oh yeah...I'm supposed to be a judge...anyways, do your best, everyone! I'm hoping for a good read from all of you! ^^
Geometric-sama
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I'm judging... bleh, I can't enter. XD What's wrong with "it was a dark and stormy night"? https://www.pokecommunity.com/threads/19391 Proof that there's nothing wrong with it. :P
Mr Cat Dog
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Yay! Something interesting to do whilst doing English coursework XD Basically, the FanFic Judges and me! Basically, as long as it tries to be remotely scary, that'll suit me for reviewing. I won't go all frosty on any of you. XD
Lily
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MCD is a reincarnation of Frosty?!
Jk. But I see no reason why judges aren't allowed to enter... XP Oh well, I suppose I'll just wait.
^_^
Jk. But I see no reason why judges aren't allowed to enter... XP Oh well, I suppose I'll just wait.
^_^
Shikon no Tama
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Do we have to PM you the story? Because if not everyone will copy off each other.*glares evilishly at other people competing*
CyberRaichu
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Oh bugger I'll never finish it by then I'll make one for next year
Eliana
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October 10th? XD
*November 10th
All well. I got one, but it the shortest thing you ever did see. its based on two nightmares I had in. If its bad I dont care what you think your a insolent human. XD
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Katie shivered and looked her dark surroundings. She had nowhere to go. But as she stared at the ominous darkness, she felt that she should return home. But she couldn?t. She kept walking on.
She stopped. A light was at the top of a hill. She squinted, attempting to see what it was. A house. She looked back at the light and gasped. There was a figure in the window. It disappeared. She flinched. The person couldn?t have possibly seen her from so far away!
She walked into the light of a lone headlight. She stared at the darkness, as if something was about to jump out of her. What should she do? That house looks creepy enough.
She whirled around. Footsteps. She knew she heard footsteps. No one was there. This was getting really freaky. They were getting closer. Her shriek pierced the darkness.
A figure was standing in front of her. Blackness. Pure blackness. That was the only thing it was composed of, except for 2 luminous white dots for eyes, and a crescent shaped smile, which was the same color. It seemed plastered on its face. And it kept staring. And it stood. More came. 2, 3, and 4. They all crowded around her, with the same stare, the same smile. But another came. A howl shattered the silence. The smell of putrid rotting bone seemed to replace any other smell. Then, a dog walked up to her. It had no skin. Only rotting yellow bone.
It snarled, and attacked.
Ever since then, Katie was never seen again. There have been sightings of these shadow people and the bone dog. Some people say the person in the window summoned them. No one may ever know. You could be next.
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XD Yes YOU could be next mwuahahha! XD
I got the house thing for a movie called Psycho lol I saw it last night :P It has the infamous shower scene. XD
*November 10th
All well. I got one, but it the shortest thing you ever did see. its based on two nightmares I had in. If its bad I dont care what you think your a insolent human. XD
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Katie shivered and looked her dark surroundings. She had nowhere to go. But as she stared at the ominous darkness, she felt that she should return home. But she couldn?t. She kept walking on.
She stopped. A light was at the top of a hill. She squinted, attempting to see what it was. A house. She looked back at the light and gasped. There was a figure in the window. It disappeared. She flinched. The person couldn?t have possibly seen her from so far away!
She walked into the light of a lone headlight. She stared at the darkness, as if something was about to jump out of her. What should she do? That house looks creepy enough.
She whirled around. Footsteps. She knew she heard footsteps. No one was there. This was getting really freaky. They were getting closer. Her shriek pierced the darkness.
A figure was standing in front of her. Blackness. Pure blackness. That was the only thing it was composed of, except for 2 luminous white dots for eyes, and a crescent shaped smile, which was the same color. It seemed plastered on its face. And it kept staring. And it stood. More came. 2, 3, and 4. They all crowded around her, with the same stare, the same smile. But another came. A howl shattered the silence. The smell of putrid rotting bone seemed to replace any other smell. Then, a dog walked up to her. It had no skin. Only rotting yellow bone.
It snarled, and attacked.
Ever since then, Katie was never seen again. There have been sightings of these shadow people and the bone dog. Some people say the person in the window summoned them. No one may ever know. You could be next.
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XD Yes YOU could be next mwuahahha! XD
I got the house thing for a movie called Psycho lol I saw it last night :P It has the infamous shower scene. XD
Geometric-sama
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We'd better extend the deadline, since we've only got one entry so far :P.
Well, perhaps I will enter then. I might enter a story I wrote a while ago, it's not strictly Halloween but it is kind of spooky. Is that OK?
Well, perhaps I will enter then. I might enter a story I wrote a while ago, it's not strictly Halloween but it is kind of spooky. Is that OK?
CyberRaichu
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I'll put up the story I wrote "Deathwalker" in about 3 days I need to finish proof reading. please be patient.
PS JA this story contains Jared and chloe
PS JA this story contains Jared and chloe
Geometric-sama
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Mine contains a character named Kayleigh. :P I wrote it for my English assessment this year.
CyberRaichu
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And here it be Deathwalker