Pokemon: Blue journey

[Trainer Ben]

This is my first Pokemon sprite comic. It mixes sprites from each of the games, but I don't mind. I did not copy this from anyone elses, although it may be similar to some peoples. Please let me know what you think:

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Couldn't find any chip sets. I seem to like plain backgrounds better.

 

[Eliana]

Oh wow! thats good! why dont ya add some humour to it. XD

 

[Spiro]

not bad...add some humour Like Eliana said

 

[nayana_1120]

It's okay. I like the random stuff in the room. XD
I also dont mind the mixing of sprites from diffrent games. Actually, it's kinda cool, how you did it.

The shading on the spirtes could be much better imo. :/
And the plot just seems like RBY with only a few twists to it. Humor or a more original plot could make it better. ^^

I hope you improve. ^^
~ nayana_1120 gave out a honest but seemingly harsh review @_@;;

 

[Goatman56]

Your comic is good i like humor or no humor

 

[Trainer Ben]

Thanks for all of the responses. I not really one for adding humor in my comics, but i'll try. Well, here's chapter 2:
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I think I simulated the battle system pretty good, except that my Pokemon don't have visible health bars.

 

[Goatman56]

awesome i loved it go watershock

 

[Stevo-kun]

Hey Ben they are cool man good job. How do you do them XD.

Pokemon_Veteran

 

[Spirit of the Moon]

Your comic looks really good.

 

[Goatman56]

Are u making anymore trainer ben cause i'm waiting for chapter 3

 

[Lizzie]

lol, ooh that looks so exciteing! ^_^ i love the houses you used! plz continue! :D

 

[Eliana]

Wow! XD great graphics! I hope you'l make another comic. ^_^

 

[nayana_1120]

Pretty good. I like your battle simulations. ^^
The variety of sprites looks kinda odd, but kinda unique at the same time. I would pefer unity though.
A few problems; the beginning of the battle, you should have had the pokeball bars instead of the HP bar. Also, some white spots on Charmander went transparent when you did it. :/
Why doesn't your pokemon have the hp bar? Is it part of the plot or do you not have it?
well, enough nitpicking. ^^;

Anyway, I hope you make more. It's a basic plot, but I'm intersted to see why the werid edited magma guy needs to take squritle. ^^

oO;; pc was flipping out for a sec; if it double posts or freaks out tell me. oO;;

 

[Sumomo & Kotoko]

Thats really good.X_x'........

 

[Goatman56]

Come on trainer ben arent u gonna make any new comics cmon i really would like to see more :)