Loving the concept of the game... The work is really impressive. I have a few points that I'd would like to make, though.
1. Main Character: Why is he so rude??? He seems a little too edgy. His personality (and some other characters' as well) was a little off to me. In a world where you grow up with the mindset that you're part of a community and everyone is important, the way he acts doesn't make sense. Like... A person is afraid of dying, and he starts cursing at that person... Dude... His design is great, though. I would love to make a 3D version of him.
2. Our Character: Bro... That was just mean hahahahaha. I agree with some things that people have said in the post, the introduction was too short for any attachment, it needs to be a little more explored.
3. Classmates and School: I think it would be great if we had more rivals/friends, like in the XY series. Let's be honest... The world is most likely a mess. Crawling with bad people... We NEED more than one ally. The lone wolf trope is kinda boring. A lone wolf, is a wolf left to die. It would make sense for Damon to realize that. Exploring more his relations with the other kids would improve this aspect. And a system where you communicate with the other while exploring the overworld would be a great addition.
4. Erin: DAMN... I think that she was waaaaay too strong for a first gym leader... Her pokémons was fine, is just the fact that she have six of then that was tough... Kinda unfair I think.
5. Configs: The sound is way too loud.
CONCLUSION
I understand that the game is still in development. It has a lot of room for improvement, in a sense like "this game is great... and have the potencial to be even greater" if you know what I mean.
With you guys need help with something, I would love to help.