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Pokemon Eo!

Who Do You Like The Most?

  • Derek

    Votes: 1 12.5%

  • Caleb

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • May

    Votes: 2 25.0%

  • Ash

    Votes: 1 12.5%

  • Misty

    Votes: 2 25.0%

  • Brock

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Riley

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Grant

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Noah

    Votes: 2 25.0%
  • Total voters
    8

HikozaruLover

HikozaruPWNsPochama
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    It's okay youneed to work on the attacks and make the words a little more visible because some maybe hard to see with the backround.
     
    It's an overused idea: "A guy and his friends start their pokemon adventure and get their first pokemons with their current Professor". I hope you don't give up with it, since I've seen a lot of comics getting closed or discountinued because the writer/drawing guy got bored of it. My avise:
    Use Photoshop so you can arrange the texts and effects better, since paint is a cool program, but photoshop is better on arrangements.

    ELGONZO!!!
     
    You need to give credit for the Wes sprite to Desgardes. And don't use such crappy paint effects. There are plenty of places you could get better battle sprites.

    How the crap did a wurmple beat two poke'mon.

    Two words: GODMODDING!!
     
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    Here's some advice that can/will help you with your comic. "Not too shabby" (I quoted May) but 1 suggestion: When you make your comics, save it to PNG so the graphics look almost the same as bitmap and it will be a lot easier for the viewers to see. (If you want me to, PM me and I'll help you with the text bubbles.) But overall, it's pretty good make it a little more creative. I like how Wurmple was able to defeat 2 pokemon. Nice work. =D
     
    Oh lord!
    Not only have you saved the first comic in JPG the WORST filetype for quality YOU SAVED THE REST IN BMP! Bmp and Jpg are big NO NO's for internet images. Save as PNG. Great quality with a relitivley small filesize. I havent read past the second comic and I have to plans too.

    1.You dont use any form of text boxes or speach bubbles. The text is just spewed across the page.
    2. ANOTHER journy comic
    3. You dont stick to one frame size
    4. What is up with the grass in episode 1 frame 6?

    2/10 try harder.
     
    Its alright but needs imprroovent the story aint crash hot either.
     
    Shhhh To The Journey Comic Haters...

    Dashiel said:
    Oh lord!
    Not only have you saved the first comic in JPG the WORST filetype for quality YOU SAVED THE REST IN BMP! Bmp and Jpg are big NO NO's for internet images. Save as PNG. Great quality with a relitivley small filesize. I havent read past the second comic and I have to plans too.

    1.You dont use any form of text boxes or speach bubbles. The text is just spewed across the page.
    2. ANOTHER journy comic
    3. You dont stick to one frame size
    4. What is up with the grass in episode 1 frame 6?

    2/10 try harder.
    Click to expand...

    I Agree With You For 1,3,4
    But Not 2.....Sure People Have Been Making Many Journey Comics These Days....But People Here Look At A Journey Comic And Go Woooh! Stupid And Annoying But You Never Really Read It In Depth, Sure All Journey Comics Start Out The Same But Thats The Way They Are And You Wouldnt Hate Them So Much If You Cared To Actually Read Them And Stay With The Comic Untill The Plot Develops.

    If You Didnt See The Other Comics Besides The First How Do You Know There In .BMP's?

    Ok And A Little Advice To The Creator Of This Comic:
    1.Fix Those Speech Bubbles Already.
    2.PM Me For Attack Sprites
    3.Stop Using Ugly Paint Effects

    Heres What You Should Never Do:
    1.Dont Give The Hero A Ledgendary Untill The Plot Develops (Unlike Some Comics I Know)
    2.Make Recolors Your Heros
    ---------------------------
    Keep Up The Awsome Work
    (Awsome=Excellent=Great=Good=Good Is Your Real Score)
     
    Tbone2356 said:
    I Agree With You For 1,3,4
    But Not 2.....Sure People Have Been Making Many Journey Comics These Days....But People Here Look At A Journey Comic And Go Woooh! Stupid And Annoying But You Never Really Read It In Depth, Sure All Journey Comics Start Out The Same But Thats The Way They Are And You Wouldnt Hate Them So Much If You Cared To Actually Read Them And Stay With The Comic Untill The Plot Develops.
    If You Didnt See The Other Comics Besides The First How Do You Know There In .BMP's?

    Ok And A Little Advice To The Creator Of This Comic:
    1.Fix Those Speech Bubbles Already.
    2.PM Me For Attack Sprites
    3.Stop Using Ugly Paint Effects

    Heres What You Should Never Do:
    1.Dont Give The Hero A Ledgendary Untill The Plot Develops (Unlike Some Comics I Know)
    2.Make Recolors Your Heros
    ---------------------------
    Keep Up The Awsome Work
    (Awsome=Excellent=Great=Good=Good Is Your Real Score)
    Click to expand...

    I agree entirely! Journey comics always start with the same plot, but can develop differently! Don't judge a book by its cover. In this case, its don't judge the comic by its first episode. Thank You (sorry Dashiel...I had to say something)
     
    Thanks for the comments,things I should do.Eppy 8 is coming soon,and the name is all I can give you:The start of some,the end of some.In this eppy,Ash,Misty and Brock leave the gang,Grant and Noah go home to train,and 2 new charectars come...
     
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    OK, that's just stupid, all the trainers split up and catch poke'mon without weakening, and then suddenly they meet more poke'mon?? That's just stupid, and in my opiniong you aren't handling the amount of characters well, maybe you should cut down on the cast. 5/10
     
    I did,Ash,Misty and Brock are gone,and Grant and Noah are home training,Derek,Caleb,and May meet Diamond/Pearl.Oh and when you see next eppy,suprises!
    Speechbubles(Yay!)
    Peatalburg Gym battle(Hoenn 10 years after Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald,can battle gyms in order you encounter them)
    Johnny's back!
     
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