Pokemon - Jaspa

[Newpkmnhack]

Pokemon - Jaspa (Not just finished)

Story

You are the son of goivarni as he is a reformed rocket leader and he has left rocket they has thought of a plan to take over kanto and to take revenge. The kanto gyms have been taken over and to get the gyme leaders back to there gym you must beat the rocket grunts. The rockets have got a hidden head quarters some where in kanto your job is to find it and beat the head boss in gym 8. You start of in route 21 the area just below pallet town where the grass bit is but now there is a house and professor oaks lab has been taken over and all exits are blocked by rocket. You get your pokemon from Ashes mum because she sees you as the next ash she gives you a choice of vulpix that brock gave her horsy that misty gave her and catapea that ash gave her. Then she says go to professor oaks house that was just built and in side is a tunnel to get out side of pallet town where you can go to the entrance and when you step on a script you will battle the rockets and once beaten they will go. This is the rought story line but as we move on the story line will get stronger.

Teams
As this is a new hack and im not smart on every think i am looking to build up a team

I need

2 Grapics people ~ People who can make tiles. Make title screens. Make sprites like new players and making sprites from other games. (Not a required but maybe make fakemon). Make into proffessor hero and rival.

2 people can can install the grapics ~ Doing the above but inserting the grapics and make sure the pallets are working ect.

1 Reserve scriptor ~ If theres scripts that i have trouble with i can ask you to help.

Thanks people if you want to join then Emal me on [email protected] or pm me or reply in this message.

 

[BerserkPaladin]

um... the story is simple... too simple. you need to work on the storyline.
also... 3 regions? That would be good but the ROM, oh and what ROM are you using?

Think of a few more ideas and then post again. make it interesting other than "You are asked by oak because his lap was taken over to get rid of rocket and fix the mess they have made ."

(and you spelt lab wrong.:P)


Don't worry we all begin at some point in time, you just gotta practise your storyline a bit.

 

[Newpkmnhack]

Thanks i will change the story line slighly and make it better the rom i am using in fire red We will start in kanto then im not sure if we should go to new regions or old ones but make some things look diffrent.

 

[BerserkPaladin]

so what you are saying is that you rushed this? I know it is a scrapbook but you do need to still think like it is in the hacks showcase. Just take your time at it. there is nothing worse than a rushed hack.

 

[Newpkmnhack]

its not a rushd hack its just ive been thinking more about the main story line and stuff like tiles and title screens which i cant do untill i get a team to help im stuck but i have a rough idea which will build up along the way.