Pokemon Jewel

D-jo4000

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    Ok this is my second attempt at a Pokemon game (I cancelled my first).
    Here's the story: Clyde, a boy growing up in the Geon region, finally get's his chance at becoming a trainer. When he get's to the Pokelab the Proffessor isn't there. There is a message on his D-puter for Clyde sending him a Pokemon. His message says the Prof was at a Prof's conference but Clyde finds out there is none of the sort. It is up to Clyde to save all of the Prof of all of the regions* while following the regular Pokemon quest.

    * This occurs in the Geon region

    And now some screens.
     
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    This game has a pretty cool plotline, and i found a few things that could be changed on the screens:

    1. You spelled pokemon COLOSSEUM wrong... cus u put a u 'stead of an O.
    2. Maybe make the font a little larger.

    Otherwise, these look professional to me.
     
    Cool story! Very unique. ;) The screens look good, but the thing that's wrong is the map. The mapping is edged to the upper-left, not the center. :\
     
    You may need the font patch if your fonts are screwing up. Nice start BTW.
     
    Sorry for not but posting for a while but I was busy. Anyway here are some screens.
     
    All I said.

    CHANGE THE FONT, ITS HURTING MY OWN EYES!!!
     
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