Pokemon Jewel

[D-jo4000]

Ok this is my second attempt at a Pokemon game (I cancelled my first).
Here's the story: Clyde, a boy growing up in the Geon region, finally get's his chance at becoming a trainer. When he get's to the Pokelab the Proffessor isn't there. There is a message on his D-puter for Clyde sending him a Pokemon. His message says the Prof was at a Prof's conference but Clyde finds out there is none of the sort. It is up to Clyde to save all of the Prof of all of the regions* while following the regular Pokemon quest.

* This occurs in the Geon region

And now some screens.

 

[? Bleep ?]

This game has a pretty cool plotline, and i found a few things that could be changed on the screens:

1. You spelled pokemon COLOSSEUM wrong... cus u put a u 'stead of an O.
2. Maybe make the font a little larger.

Otherwise, these look professional to me.

 

[Jeff_PKLight]

Cool story! Very unique. ;) The screens look good, but the thing that's wrong is the map. The mapping is edged to the upper-left, not the center. :\

 

[Sorye HK]

You may need the font patch if your fonts are screwing up. Nice start BTW.

 

[D-jo4000]

Sorry for not but posting for a while but I was busy. Anyway here are some screens.

 

[* Jade *]

All I said.

CHANGE THE FONT, ITS HURTING MY OWN EYES!!!