Pokemon Neo: Hoenn Armageddon

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    I finally got the prologue done for my Fan fiction which I spoke of a few months ago. Those of you from the Pokemon Armageddon rp from a while ago may recall my saying that it was material for this very fan fiction. However, due to the violent nature of said fan fiction, Instead of posting it here I will provide a link where it can be found. I hope that those of you who decide to read it will enjoy reading it as much as i enjoyed writing it. It still isn't done, but it is in progress. here is teh link to "Pokemon Neo: Hoenn Armageddon".

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1960018/1/
     
    it's fine with me (afterall, it's a darkfic... and Codename: ASHURA was like much much worst) except the onometopia actually took something out of the scene... and evil people doesnt' necessarily have to swear to look evil but meh...

    tried to submit review but then I need an account (which I don't have)... hmm... but I did read it. ^_^;
     
    Come to think of it, I'm still trying to get the blood off my charecter from that role play. it was a good thing I left it when I did, because lord only knows what I would have done to my charecter..
     
    still under dare. this is lasting WAY too long..

    i did. but normally my charecter is a pokemon, not human. but the RP did casue me to start having a rocket laucher around. quite helpful, lets me shoot Sparks and Shiney when they try to get me to do something girly.
     
    Cool! anyway, I have some ideas of how to start the first chapter, but I'd like some input as to how the readers think it should start. i'm pretty good at Prologues and endings, but it's everything in between that i'm usually quite sketchy about. :D
     
    just don't ask for my help, or it'll be YOU I'm using the rocket launcher on. I'll get caught in the explosion, but being the daughter of the devil has it's advantages.
     
    get used to it. Shiney's the second in command, so i can't really get rid of him, which makes it that much more fun to use him as target practice.

    and you didn't know I'm the daughter of the devil? hmm.. in that case, you probably didn't know that when not under a dare I have the Heartless insigna from Kingdom Hearts as an ava...
     
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    Yep, know exactly what digimon that is, but I couldn't spell it's name if my life depended on it. And quite a few things changed since you dissapeared.

    Perhaps this conversation could continue over PM?
     
    Sorry to double post, but I figured no one would notice this notice form four pages back. :\ I just wanted to lert everyone know I've finally uploaded Chapter 1 of my fan ficiton to fan fiction.net and have also modifiied the prologue as per teh influence of the reviews i've currently recieved. The link to the story can be found in the first post to this topic.
     
    personally, keep to your own style. as far as plot points, if you choose to introduse Eclipse into the story, I think it'd suit her if she was finishing destroying something when Seth first noticed her. Just a thought though.

    And I don't really have the dedication to write a fan-fiction, I'm better in dinosaur based documenteries..
     
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