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Pokemon: Shroud of Darkness

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    The Story:
    After being escaping a near death experience against the leviathan, our hero Max finds himself filled with revenge. And won't stop until his traitor freind Hunter and the leviathan are dead.

    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon: Shroud of Darkness

    Left to Right
    Character:Rale Bio: One of hunters devoted servents. Not much is known about him.
    Age: 35
    Pokemon: Shadow Groudon, Cosmain
    Character:Blake
    Bio: Hunters most trusted servent. He has a very special freindship with Rale.
    Age: 17
    Pokemon: Shadow Groudon, Cosmain
    Character: Max (centre)
    Bio: The main character. He was betrayed by hunter. Little more is known.
    Age:16
    Pokemon: Thydoun, Kingler, Ultimate Latios
    Character: Hunter (far right)
    Bio: He is the conrtols the power leviathan, a powerful legendary pokemon which is described in ancient scripters as 'The god of darkness'.
    Age:22
    Pokemon: S.Lugia
    Character: Ryan
    Bio: Once was Hunter's minions. Little is known about him accept he is after Hunter.
    Age: Unkown
    Pokemon: Shadowfox, sheldon, Leviathan
    Character: Amy
    Bio: Amy is one of max's closest freinds. And she is in love with water pokemon.
    Age: 15
    Pokemon: Blastoise, Tentacrule
    CHaracter: Adam
    Bio: This mysterious character is Hunter's most skilled assasin. Little us known about him.
    Age: Unknown
    Pokemon: Shadow Mew

    SEASON 1
    PART 1
    Comic 1
    Comic 2
    Comic 3
    Comic 4
    Comic 5
    Comic 6
    Comic 7
    Comic 8
    Comic 9
    Comic 10
    Comic 11
    Comic 12
    Comic 13
    Comic 14 (meanwhile)
    Comic 15
    Comic 16
    Comic 17

    PART 2 (New Layout)
    Comic 1
    Comic 2
    Comic 3
    Comic 4
    Season Finale

    SEASON 2
    PART 1
    Comic 1
    Comic 2
     
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    I Didn't Give You Permission To Use My Ultimate Latios Sprite... So Don't Use It In This Comic, Or I Must Report You...
     
    Lots of confusing and useless dialog, unused panels many confusing scenes, stolen sprites, and the main characters an 00ber.

    Nice thought, but it wasn't carried out very well. Your characters also aren't very realistic. You need to think about their reactions to things. Don't use TuP, and work on your grammar. A lot.

    The entire HQ scene was way too confusing, you need tails or specific colorations. Three shades of red is almost as confusing as reusing the same shade three times.
     
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