Pokemon The Adashy Series

Jaybob

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    Hey guys,

    Me and adam_148 have been working on a new comic so here goes :)



    Adashy Corp Presents

    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon The Adashy Series





    Episode 1: The beginning The beginning for Bobby and Carey (edit of The beginning)

    Story
    The two groups meet in a strange maze. Here we meet Bobby and Carey AND Adam and Mew. They are both trying to find their way through but end up clashing into eachother. They start of on an adventure and soon meet new friends including Adam's. They will face many challenges on their joureny so watch and see.

    Credits
    PE2K.com for the D/P Sprites.
    Adam_148 for his sprites
    Please post and reply guys :)​
     
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    Broken two comic rules already. The forth wall smashed down by the juggernaut.
    TWICE! If this is the pokemon world, I doubt the gameboy games exsist.

    you've mixed, D/P style RS or FR/LG (not sure what adam is) and Mysterious Dungeon. (that Makhutiea (sp) is in MD) So its a bad start, but hopefully this will get better.

    but prospects are grave.
     
    yeah... which two rules? and I know it's not great but meh.

    Im only asking what two rules so I can improve it.
     
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    Lets just say D/P and R/S sprites dont go good together...at all
     
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    no one has joined my comics..... me and adam are making the comics together so we are sharing the sprites.... that was made by both of us... I did the first four and he did the rest. We haven't joined anything. I did read the rules before I posted and I dont tink i've broken any so thats why I posted this.
     
    Okay, first of all, never ever mix generation sprites. Like RBY with RSE, or D/P with RSE.

    The text is overlapping the bubbles, which is bad news, you might want to work on that.
     
    Hmm well your broke 2 rules. Its a pain on the eyes and it isnt interesting. SOrry wont be viewing again.
     
    Ok fine look I will get to work on fixing these.... ij all I wanted was a little feedback so I could work on it.... not the I wont be looking at this again ever...
     
    Sorry I may look at it again its just it made me a bit angry. I will probably monitor this to see its progess.
     
    ok :) sorry I will edit it a bit lol Adam made the last 8 slides because I had to go so I will edit the OW's and get them back :)

    I need ideas guys so lets have em.
     
    Reveal the storyline. Because currently I have no idea whats going on. Oh and perhaps make the characters more relatable. Also dont be afraid to make events go slower than they are now. Because right now you have awkward conversations. One panel: Adam: This is driving me nutz mew! Bobby: Woah! Carey: Who are you? Second panel: Soo this is odd... Carey: You still havent told us your name!
    Its been one panel it wouldnt be that quick for him to tell his name.
    I hope this helps.
     
    Yeah thanks :) I've deleted the DP OW's now and am currently making the FR/LG :) and then I will insert them into teh comic instead :)....

    or maybe just redo the whole of comic 1 -.- lol
     
    I think you should redo it mang. Make the panels a bit bigger to. There too small and crowded.
     
    Okie dokie :) well have just got the base sprites so am making them now and then its off to comic land for hard work -.- lol
     
    Ok I will be waiting for it. Oh and dont mix D/P OW sprites with advance OW sprites.
     
    Yeah, the only MD reference was at the beggining, it won't happen again. So we did unite on this and decide to do half a comic each, and the font style changes because I didn't know which font Shylocke used.
     
    Ok guys I'm redoing Eppy 1 so that it goes slower :)

    Adam I am using font: Tahoma size 7 so yeah :)

    Keep watch guys The new eppy one will be here soon
     
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