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Hey, this is one of the best stories I've ever written. CS is conteshipping and PS is pokeshipping.This story is based on the original Anime Series created by Nintendo, 4Kidsentertainment and all those companies that create pokemon the t.v show. I will be using the same characters, same pokemon but in a different destination. This is my first thread so please don't be shy to comment me and criticize me. I'll use your criticism to make my story even better. This story is also posted on serebii.net.
Chapter One
The moon was bright when Ash finally got home. His dark, wild hair, brown eyes, long tanned body reflected in the shadow. Beside him, his best friend Pikachu looked at him with big bright eyes. He was small but very strong. Standing on the porch he pondered. Sinnoh was past now, and Ash was pretty happy for making it to the top two. " Next time, we'll work even harder. Next time, we'll win this. He had been beaten by a girl about his age. This girl was the prettiest girl he had ever seen, not that he was extremely interested. But just by looking at this girl you would be in awe. Her delicate facial features, fair complexion, long, raven black hair and her large light, purple eyes made you want to look at her for eternity. Her voice was as calming as the gentle sea but her battle was the fiercest Ash had ever seen. Her name was Serena. She took him by surprise, defeating him in a very short time, using only two pokemon. Her Ninetales and her Milotic. Both beautiful, strong pokemon; Ash didn't have a chance.Now, Ash and Pikachu entered the house he grew up in. It sure felt good to be home.
"Mom, I'm home! It's me Ash," he called into the dark house.
The reply he got was,"Mr. Mime! Mime Mime Mime Mr.!."
"Who'se there? Mimey, who'se in the house? I'll be down in a minute," Ash heard his mom say.
A minute later, the dark house was filled with light, and the only thing Ash could see were the big eyes of Mr.Mime.
"Ahhh! Mime get off of me," he yelled. Mr.Mime smiled his big toothless smile and moved out of the way.
"Ash! Oh my, you're home!," Delia Ketchum cried," I wasn't expecting you for quite a while. Congratulations on being in the top two! I'm so proud of you."
" Gee mom, it's good to see you too. Tomorrow morning I'm going to see Professor Oak but for now all Pikachu and me really want to do is sleep. I'll see you in the morning okay? Goodnight!" he said while giving his mom a big hug.
That night, before Ash fell asleep, he thought about all the best friends he had made in the years spent travelling. Dawn was travelling to Hoenn with her good friend and rival Zoey. Brock went home to visit his family. He was the best cook Ash had ever met, and was working to become the top pokemon breeder. Brock loved pokemon very much, but the thing he loved as much as pokemon were of course girls. He instantly fell in love with every girl he would meet. He always got rejected by them, usually being pulled away by his Croagunk. He was the oldest of ten children.
Then, there was May and Max, the children of the gym leader Norman of Petalburg City. Max was a little kid who was super intelligent. He couldn't wait to get his starter pokemon. Now, he probably already had
it. He looked just like his dad, and wanted to become gym leader at the Petalburg City Gym once his dad retired. May was a very sweet but sensitive girl. She was an amazing Pokemon Coordinator, and had gotten second place in the Johto Grand Festival. She was usually arguing with her rival Drew, who usually gave her beautiful red roses.
Finally, there was Misty, who he hadn't seen in a long time. He sure missed her. Her bright green eyes, fiery red hair were something very unusual. She was the youngest of four sisters. Her older three called themselves the "Sensational Sisters" and the runt. She had to return to Cerulean
Gym when her sisters went on a trip around the world. She was disappointed to leave Ash but there was no choice. She was sometimes sweet and optimistic, but was best known for her temper and bossiness.
"Tomorrow, I'll call her," he thought to himself. With Pikachu by his side, he quickly fell asleep.
Bright and early the next day, he went to see Professor Oak.When the wise man saw Ash coming up the path with his Pikachu, his face broke into a smile. He had grey hair and was the grandfather of Ash's old rival Gary, who had also wanted to become a pokemon master, but then decided to become a pokemon researcher like his grandfather.
"Hello Ash! Come on in!"
"Hey Professor Oak! How are all my pokemon?"
"They're all fine. Congratulations on making top two! You are representing Pallet Town extremely well. You make the whole town proud. Now first of all, show me all your new pokemon."
Ash took out all his pokeballs." Everyone come on out!"
Soon, Ambipom, Torterra, Starapator, Gastrodon, Ponyta and as usual, Pikachu were staring at the Professor's face.
"I know that my Ponyta isn't a Sinnoh pokemon but she just kept on following me so I decided to catch her."
"Your pokemon are all very healthy, I presume because of Brock's pokemon food. Now do you know where you want to travel to next?"
"Actually, that's what I came here to ask you about. Where should I go?"
" The place I would chose are the Mirror Islands. They have extremely tough gyms as well as many pokemon contests. I know you will certainly be up for the challenge. Am I right?"
"You sure are Professor. I can always count on you, that's for sure."
"There are actually no new species of pokemon on the islands. There are all different sorts from Kanto, Johto, Hoenn and Sinnoh. The ferry leaves from
Cinnabar Island in two weeks. The boat from Pallet Town to Cinnabar Island leaves in one week. I already called your friend Brock and told him about it. He's very excited to come with you and will meet you in a few days."
"Okay Professor. That means I can bring any of my Pokemon right? Can I see them?"
"Sure you can."
Ash went outside to see his pokemon. When they saw him, they all ran to him with excitement. They soon got out of hand and were all on top of Ash.
"Pikachu," he managed to saw from under all the bodies," use thunderbolt."
Pikachu did as he was told and shocked everyone including Ash. The pokemon jumped off Ash and gave Pikachu the evil eye.
"Hey everyone! I want you to meet all my new pokemon." He released all his Sinnoh pokemon and soon all the pokemon were playing with each other. Now, it was time to make a hard decision of which pokemon to pick. After hours of thinking, he decided that he would bring Pikachu, Ponyta, Sceptile, Noctowl, Totodile and Donphan. He reassured his other pokemon that he would surely transport them if he needed their help.
When he got home, he went to call Misty.He dialed her number and waited. One ring, two rings, three rings, four rings, five rings, six rings and still no answer. When he was about to hang up the phone, Misty's older sister Daisy picked up.
"Hello. Aren't you Misty's old friend Ash. How are you?"
"Hey Daisy, I'm fine. Can I speak to Misty?"
"Sure I'll call her for you. Misty! The phone is for you. It's someone special!"
"Don't try playing that trick on my again. I'm not that dumb to fall for it Daisy. Try something new for a change," Misty's voice called.
"This time I'm not joking come look for yourself."
"Oops, sorry Daisy.Thanks for picking up."
Before she left, Daisy said," Ash, you were really great in the Sinnoh League. We were watching you on t.v."
Two seconds later, Misty's face appeared on the screen.
"Yup, same old Misty." Ash thought to himself. She still had those green eyes and the red hair.
"Hey Ash! What a surprise! I really wasn't expecting you to call."
Ash and Misty talked for two hours. When they finally hung up on each other, Misty knew what she had to do. Her sisters were way more responsible now, and Misty was ready.
Meanwhile, Ash spent the rest of the week with his pokemon and spending time with his mom. Brock came to his house the night before they had to leave and helped pack everything off.
Very early the next morning, they were waiting at the port for the ferry to come. Suddenly, something caught Ash's eye. He looked more closely and said,"
Brock, look who'se there. I can't believe it."
Well that's all for chapter one. Here is a tiny idea what chapter two will be like. Quite a few people from Ash's past will be there. That's all I'm saying. Until next time. Bye!! Please tell all your friends about this story. I've already written eleven chapters, so if I get a lot of comments, I will post them quicker. Thanks :D
Chapter One
The moon was bright when Ash finally got home. His dark, wild hair, brown eyes, long tanned body reflected in the shadow. Beside him, his best friend Pikachu looked at him with big bright eyes. He was small but very strong. Standing on the porch he pondered. Sinnoh was past now, and Ash was pretty happy for making it to the top two. " Next time, we'll work even harder. Next time, we'll win this. He had been beaten by a girl about his age. This girl was the prettiest girl he had ever seen, not that he was extremely interested. But just by looking at this girl you would be in awe. Her delicate facial features, fair complexion, long, raven black hair and her large light, purple eyes made you want to look at her for eternity. Her voice was as calming as the gentle sea but her battle was the fiercest Ash had ever seen. Her name was Serena. She took him by surprise, defeating him in a very short time, using only two pokemon. Her Ninetales and her Milotic. Both beautiful, strong pokemon; Ash didn't have a chance.Now, Ash and Pikachu entered the house he grew up in. It sure felt good to be home.
"Mom, I'm home! It's me Ash," he called into the dark house.
The reply he got was,"Mr. Mime! Mime Mime Mime Mr.!."
"Who'se there? Mimey, who'se in the house? I'll be down in a minute," Ash heard his mom say.
A minute later, the dark house was filled with light, and the only thing Ash could see were the big eyes of Mr.Mime.
"Ahhh! Mime get off of me," he yelled. Mr.Mime smiled his big toothless smile and moved out of the way.
"Ash! Oh my, you're home!," Delia Ketchum cried," I wasn't expecting you for quite a while. Congratulations on being in the top two! I'm so proud of you."
" Gee mom, it's good to see you too. Tomorrow morning I'm going to see Professor Oak but for now all Pikachu and me really want to do is sleep. I'll see you in the morning okay? Goodnight!" he said while giving his mom a big hug.
That night, before Ash fell asleep, he thought about all the best friends he had made in the years spent travelling. Dawn was travelling to Hoenn with her good friend and rival Zoey. Brock went home to visit his family. He was the best cook Ash had ever met, and was working to become the top pokemon breeder. Brock loved pokemon very much, but the thing he loved as much as pokemon were of course girls. He instantly fell in love with every girl he would meet. He always got rejected by them, usually being pulled away by his Croagunk. He was the oldest of ten children.
Then, there was May and Max, the children of the gym leader Norman of Petalburg City. Max was a little kid who was super intelligent. He couldn't wait to get his starter pokemon. Now, he probably already had
it. He looked just like his dad, and wanted to become gym leader at the Petalburg City Gym once his dad retired. May was a very sweet but sensitive girl. She was an amazing Pokemon Coordinator, and had gotten second place in the Johto Grand Festival. She was usually arguing with her rival Drew, who usually gave her beautiful red roses.
Finally, there was Misty, who he hadn't seen in a long time. He sure missed her. Her bright green eyes, fiery red hair were something very unusual. She was the youngest of four sisters. Her older three called themselves the "Sensational Sisters" and the runt. She had to return to Cerulean
Gym when her sisters went on a trip around the world. She was disappointed to leave Ash but there was no choice. She was sometimes sweet and optimistic, but was best known for her temper and bossiness.
"Tomorrow, I'll call her," he thought to himself. With Pikachu by his side, he quickly fell asleep.
Bright and early the next day, he went to see Professor Oak.When the wise man saw Ash coming up the path with his Pikachu, his face broke into a smile. He had grey hair and was the grandfather of Ash's old rival Gary, who had also wanted to become a pokemon master, but then decided to become a pokemon researcher like his grandfather.
"Hello Ash! Come on in!"
"Hey Professor Oak! How are all my pokemon?"
"They're all fine. Congratulations on making top two! You are representing Pallet Town extremely well. You make the whole town proud. Now first of all, show me all your new pokemon."
Ash took out all his pokeballs." Everyone come on out!"
Soon, Ambipom, Torterra, Starapator, Gastrodon, Ponyta and as usual, Pikachu were staring at the Professor's face.
"I know that my Ponyta isn't a Sinnoh pokemon but she just kept on following me so I decided to catch her."
"Your pokemon are all very healthy, I presume because of Brock's pokemon food. Now do you know where you want to travel to next?"
"Actually, that's what I came here to ask you about. Where should I go?"
" The place I would chose are the Mirror Islands. They have extremely tough gyms as well as many pokemon contests. I know you will certainly be up for the challenge. Am I right?"
"You sure are Professor. I can always count on you, that's for sure."
"There are actually no new species of pokemon on the islands. There are all different sorts from Kanto, Johto, Hoenn and Sinnoh. The ferry leaves from
Cinnabar Island in two weeks. The boat from Pallet Town to Cinnabar Island leaves in one week. I already called your friend Brock and told him about it. He's very excited to come with you and will meet you in a few days."
"Okay Professor. That means I can bring any of my Pokemon right? Can I see them?"
"Sure you can."
Ash went outside to see his pokemon. When they saw him, they all ran to him with excitement. They soon got out of hand and were all on top of Ash.
"Pikachu," he managed to saw from under all the bodies," use thunderbolt."
Pikachu did as he was told and shocked everyone including Ash. The pokemon jumped off Ash and gave Pikachu the evil eye.
"Hey everyone! I want you to meet all my new pokemon." He released all his Sinnoh pokemon and soon all the pokemon were playing with each other. Now, it was time to make a hard decision of which pokemon to pick. After hours of thinking, he decided that he would bring Pikachu, Ponyta, Sceptile, Noctowl, Totodile and Donphan. He reassured his other pokemon that he would surely transport them if he needed their help.
When he got home, he went to call Misty.He dialed her number and waited. One ring, two rings, three rings, four rings, five rings, six rings and still no answer. When he was about to hang up the phone, Misty's older sister Daisy picked up.
"Hello. Aren't you Misty's old friend Ash. How are you?"
"Hey Daisy, I'm fine. Can I speak to Misty?"
"Sure I'll call her for you. Misty! The phone is for you. It's someone special!"
"Don't try playing that trick on my again. I'm not that dumb to fall for it Daisy. Try something new for a change," Misty's voice called.
"This time I'm not joking come look for yourself."
"Oops, sorry Daisy.Thanks for picking up."
Before she left, Daisy said," Ash, you were really great in the Sinnoh League. We were watching you on t.v."
Two seconds later, Misty's face appeared on the screen.
"Yup, same old Misty." Ash thought to himself. She still had those green eyes and the red hair.
"Hey Ash! What a surprise! I really wasn't expecting you to call."
Ash and Misty talked for two hours. When they finally hung up on each other, Misty knew what she had to do. Her sisters were way more responsible now, and Misty was ready.
Meanwhile, Ash spent the rest of the week with his pokemon and spending time with his mom. Brock came to his house the night before they had to leave and helped pack everything off.
Very early the next morning, they were waiting at the port for the ferry to come. Suddenly, something caught Ash's eye. He looked more closely and said,"
Brock, look who'se there. I can't believe it."
Well that's all for chapter one. Here is a tiny idea what chapter two will be like. Quite a few people from Ash's past will be there. That's all I'm saying. Until next time. Bye!! Please tell all your friends about this story. I've already written eleven chapters, so if I get a lot of comments, I will post them quicker. Thanks :D