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Now then, Onto the comic.
In general this isent bad for a first time,
however there are many flaws. I'll start with the fact that you used chat speak, if someone suprised you in real life would you say wtf? No. I dident think so. Next is your chat boxes, in many instances the text was to close to the box, try and centre it a bit more. You really should add borders to your frames as it makes them look nicer, oh and..Another journy comic? Please PLEASE try and be more original. Too many comics have started like this.