Pokemon Velocity

Solemnity

Lass Solemnity
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    Yo! This is my first comic...:bandit:

    Story
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    A young boy named Luke and his friend think a meteor is going to hit fortree city. They try to warn the townspeople but are ignored. But something happens that will make the townspeople never doubt them again!

    Season 1 - Power beyond imagination..
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    Issue 1- Shocking Beggining https://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7512/pokemonvelocity010fk.png
    Issue 2- Secret Power https://img157.imageshack.us/img157/7338/pokemonvelocity023bz.png

    Character Bios
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    Sprite:[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Velocity
    Name: Luke
    Pokemon: Pidgey
    Age: 15
    Description: His parents died when he was 10 from a mysterious accident. He now lives with his grandpa. He got the power of poke-morphing after being hit by the meteor.

    Credits
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    None ATM

    Enjoy folks more to come!
     
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    It's way too early to rate this, but at least it doesn't seem to be one of those cliché ''[Insert name here] wants to become a champion and sets of on a gym challenge'' thingies.

    The Chrono trigger (or at least I think the blue portal-ish thingy is from there) sprite doesn't look good with the Pokémon background, though.

    I also noticed a couple of typos, but the comic is well organized and the text is very easy on the eyes.

    Keep it up. From what I have seen, this comic might have potential.
     
    Ok guys expect Issue 2- Secret Power soon.
     
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    Nice comic. I like how you put that last effect on the last panel. Atleast we're getting less generic comics now! Can't wait to see issue two.
     
    Well done solemnity. Did you get what i sent you through PM?

    Its good to see less Generic Comics now and I think this will be good.
     
    Maneachicken said:
    Well done solemnity. Did you get what i sent you through PM?

    Its good to see less Generic Comics now and I think this will be good.
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    No I didnt get a Pm from you. Try sending again.
    Oh and issue 2 should be up this afternoon.
     
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    The story seems to be developing good. Well done. I did notice some spelling errors:
    when Gramps says: "YOUR A POKEMON!!!!!!111' get rid of the 1s.
    Pidgee is spelt Pidgey.
    and its You'd not youd.
    Keep it up
     
    The Supers...Hmmm...Oh yeah...My carchter if he is in any form Good...make him like the mercution guy in Romeo and Juliet. Not a Super and not Evil, but friends with Lukes side.
     
    You mean Mercutio, cusion of the mayor or what ever. He favors no side but hangs around the good people
     
    I like your comic, especially when the blonde boy turned into a Squirtle. I hope you don't give up on this. Keep posting.. xD By for now. (I think he means Mercutio, not mercution. Wasn't he Romeo's friend in the play?)
     
    Yeah...sorry...that was a Typo. Ive explained it via PM to Her and she understands. Can't wait to see the next episode!
     
    New issue will be up this afternoon. Got school now.
     
    Ok guys I have work now so a new issue will be up after that.
    Issue 3- The size-shifter
     
    Meh, this is pretty kool. I want to see more definatly.
     
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